Originally posted by: mariee
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Sooo Sooo Sooo Sooo much !!
I didnt know 1 request pe ull continue it ..geee ...i shud have done dat long back in that case !! 😆😆
reserved 😃
unreserved
Ur writing lost its charm ...that wud be the biggest sinful lie i wud ever say.😉😉
It was awesomer than the awesomest😃😃
Ok ..so lemme start off ...i had always been a silent reader on forums & by d time i had become vocal u were gone😭😭😭
But now since u r back with this todu (bear my words ...please😆) update i take this as a chance to make up for my silence in the past even after reading waltz...
this 1 was as fab as ur previous 1s ...not at all off-beat. So much so that even after such a long time i didnt need to refer the previous updte ...1st line ..& Kaboom !! I was translocated in the waltz world with the story all crystal clear in my mind...no special efforts to recall the story were required. & the credit goes solely to ur writing skills 👏👏
Kalpana's emotional portrayal was impeccable ..her fear to confront her parents was beautifully presented.
Raghav was as usual flwless but the line which caught my attention was the 1 in which u mentioned abt his fear to confront Kalpi's parents. Especially Kamla !!
& then was the toggling of Kalpi from Vitthal to Kamla & then to Pakya .. I found that so sweet. Thank God that Kamla has brains over here atleast ... the kalpi-pakya covo ws cute ...
All was so perfect ...
But the line which impressed me the most & is yet adamant on not leaving my brain
"Now was the time, admit it, please", he pleaded inwardly.
The timing was so correct ...
& finally it was Paakhi ...wonder how are u gonna play with that aspect in the story !!
Do continue soon ...hope u dont get a discontinue ka jhatka again😆😆
UR EXCLUSIVE PANKHA , MARUSHKAA