VIRMAN ss : WAY BACK INTO LOVE...precap...pg9

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.Yamin.

@.Yamin.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Disha !!! this is way too aweosme !!! manvi feelings were portrayed superbly !!! this is beautifully written !!! the way u have written it dil choo liyaa !!! loved it alot❤️ vihaan is soo cute !!! i feel like i m watching an awesome movie !!! could visualize everything !!! really really beautiful !!!⭐️⭐️plz continue soon if possible naa !!! wanna read next part soon !!! thanx for the pm :D

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LoverBollywood

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Awesome pleasee update soon...

And thanks for the PM..

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inlvwithehmmbh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

It's a really good one, don't be afraid be confident of your work :)
And thanks for the pm, ill be looking out for others! Take care!

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Niaksharma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Thanks for pm...
Its super awesome
liked it...
Sorry for late..
It il...so..

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Aliyah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

I am sooo overdue with so many things right now .. so sorry.

First things first, I loved the poem you chose for the prologue, it described Mannu's feelings so perfectly <3.

The beginning was so perfectly beautfiul.. it left me speechless, I was just wishing that was real. That is probably the most perfectly written VirMan scene I have ever read!! 👏*gives standing ovation* I'm not exaggerating.. SERIOUSLY!!

She misses Virat so much .. aww. 😳

Manvi and Virat's son is just so adorable .. Vivaan seems like a complete Mummy ka chamcha but I have a feeling he has his Daddy's looks. 😉

There is no reason to be scared, because you're too good. This is such a perfect portrayal of Manvi's pain and her choice of being a mother over a wife. It was so well expressed Dishu! 👏⭐️

What I was confused about is what exactly does Manvi expect? Acceptance over compromise? 😕 I am really looking forward to reading the rest.

I honestly am really excited to see what Virat's POV is because I really want to see whether or not his heart is broken.. 😭

Love You Dishu! ❤️

Can't wait to read the rest 🤗 Please continue soon

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.LiveLaughLove.

@.LiveLaughLove.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

I loved the prologue as well as the poem 😃 Chapter 1 was beautifully written. Manvi's pain is perfectly potrayed here 😊 She took a strong stand for her baby. Flashback part was emotional 😊 Vivaan is too cute and adorable! Where is Virat? I can't just wait for the 'Baap and beta milap' lol. Thanks for the pm! Keep it up! 😉

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richa002

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Loved the 1st part...
Its emotional.
Flashback was very emotional
Nd vivaan manvi convo was cute...
Plzzz update soon

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Disha

@daydreamer9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Huma0301
this was a WOW first chapter
loved the way you wrote it n showed manvi's pain
bt that's mean what she did
yes virat's wrong but I feel sorry for both of them
really loving this SS
continue soon😉

thank u soo much.😃
don't blame her.blame her pregnancy hormone.😆
love u 4 d comment.❤️

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Disha

@daydreamer9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: shaimah
Awesome update
Continue soon and thanks for the pm!!

thanks😃

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Disha

@daydreamer9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: paddu53
Amazing update...so intense...manvi still loves virat...vivaan was cute...good start...loved the plot...flashblack was highly emotional...,...continue soon...take care...

thanks.😃isn't that obvious?manvi can nevr not lv virat n vice versa.😃
thanks so much 4 this comment.❤️