Happiness:When Viraat's Heart Spoke(Sequel)Pg 6 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW !!! this is such a beautiful piece ❤️ the way u have written it awesome awesome awesome👍🏼 u have show the reality to us 😔 u r a superb writer sumana!!such a mind blowing realistic yaar !!! the way u have portrayed the emotions n feeling~~ fabulous !!! i was really waiting for this part 2 !!! i m really in love with this os ❤️❤️ this is really emotional 😭😭it really touch my heart sumana ⭐️⭐️ the way manvi n virat heart broke omg this is really touchy 😭😭 n the end when manvi wish for virat awwn heart touching moment !!! Once again a brilliant shot Sumana 👏👏AMAZING !!! i really really loved it ❤️❤️ thanx for pm Sumana !! eeks ss really i m really excited abt it :D will be eagerly waiting for it :)))
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Fabulous OS Sumana!! ⭐️⭐️ Once again very very beautiful and realistic.. Manvi's pov was a treat to read.. So brilliantly written 👏👏.. She loved him a lot or may be she still loves him.. She definitely moved on in her life but still his presence affects her.. She doesn't blame him for anything, in fact she wants him to be happy in his life also.. They are meant to be together but still can't be together.. Sad but true.. Loved it a lot ❤️❤️.. Coming to your note, you are planning to convert this into a SS! That will be great! 😃 I can't see Virman being separated! 😛 Please bring them together! Will be waiting for your next update.. Take care 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Thanks for pm...
Update was awesome...
Too awesome...
Liked it...
Superbly written...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Fabulous OS Sumana!! ⭐️⭐️ Once again very very beautiful and realistic.. Manvi's pov was a treat to read.. So brilliantly written 👏👏.. She loved him a lot or may be she still loves him.. She definitely moved on in her life but still his presence affects her.. She doesn't blame him for anything, in fact she wants him to be happy in his life also.. They are meant to be together but still can't be together.. Sad but true.. Loved it a lot ❤️❤️.. Coming to your note, you are planning to convert this into a SS! That will be great! 😃 I can't see Virman being separated! 😛 Please bring them together! Will be waiting for your next update.. Take care 😊



Finally I have support for ...VirMan to be re united ...aahh feels good
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: .Yamin.

WOW !!! this is such a beautiful piece ❤️ the way u have written it awesome awesome awesome👍🏼 u have show the reality to us 😔 u r a superb writer sumana!!such a mind blowing realistic yaar !!! the way u have portrayed the emotions n feeling~~ fabulous !!! i was really waiting for this part 2 !!! i m really in love with this os ❤️❤️ this is really emotional 😭😭it really touch my heart sumana ⭐️⭐️ the way manvi n virat heart broke omg this is really touchy 😭😭 n the end when manvi wish for virat awwn heart touching moment !!! Once again a brilliant shot Sumana 👏👏AMAZING !!! i really really loved it ❤️❤️ thanx for pm Sumana !! eeks ss really i m really excited abt it :D will be eagerly waiting for it :)))



Thannnkk u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved it..!!!! Awesome..N thanks for the PM.>!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww...i must say sumana u r genius writer...these stories r fictious but the logic n sense behind it is unbeatable...u use to make me confuse yar...bcs its looks all right no flaw nthg...so amazing...manvis POV n vision to c the life, accept the beautifull reality whole heartedly, leaving the past behind n moving forward, not a single regreat on the past, finding the love n happiness with near n dear 1ns...tremendous...boss hats off to u...tera jadu to muzpe chal gaya beta...lolll...the magicle writer...superb dear...cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Awsm description of manvis pov... felt like crying
virat udhar manvi idhar... bichme manviki hausband...
And pls write the ss asap yaar... cause I really want a happy ending..
Write it soon... real soon...
Thanks for the pm and pls once again write the ss soon...
I love your writting too much yaar... take care ...tada...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Great story 😊
Tnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rasp_berry

Awww...i must say sumana u r genius writer...these stories r fictious but the logic n sense behind it is unbeatable...u use to make me confuse yar...bcs its looks all right no flaw nthg...so amazing...manvis POV n vision to c the life, accept the beautifull reality whole heartedly, leaving the past behind n moving forward, not a single regreat on the past, finding the love n happiness with near n dear 1ns...tremendous...boss hats off to u...tera jadu to muzpe chal gaya beta...lolll...the magicle writer...superb dear...cont soon


Haaww..me and genius nai ...re ...😆😆😆 ...You all are super cute

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