Virmaan : U hve 2 come bck-Idnm : 3rd : PART-105 + IMP NOTE-148 - Page 15

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: .jai.

Hai Debo..
Waiting for the updates..
Update soon


just going for write...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-79
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MAanvi feel pinch in her heart to see him hurt..she took saari in her hand nd rush behind him..
M-calling him-virat..plz..ek baar meri baat to suno..
He engrily walked inside the hall nd abt to move towards his room bt he stopped by maanvi..
M-hold his arm nd stop him-virat plz..
As he stopped she come in front of him..
M-virat..plz..mera woh mtlab bilkul bhi nahi tha..plz..ek baar meri puri baat to suno..
V-angrily bt in low voice-kya sunu?..huu?..Jo sunna tha..samzna tha samaz chuka..aur kya baat bataogi tum mujhe?..jo batana tha woh to viren mujhe suna k chala gaya..
M-virat plz..asa kuch nahi hai..
V-yahi to..kuch nahi hai..he said with crussing his words..
V-ab is rishte mein kuch nahi hai..tumhe divorce chahiye tha naa?..chahti thi main yaha se chala jau?..shayad meri sakal tumhe mere gunah ki yaad dilati hogi right?
Hearing all this she cannot stop her tears..they come out on her cheeks..she get stunt nd shock to hear this..yes..she wanted this..bt now why she feel hurt nd upset..
M-virat..she whisper..
V-yes..aur ab vahi hoga..main humesha humesha k liye tumhari life se chala jaunga..nd he abt to passed from her side bt stopped at besides her..she still in shock nd looking at his past place..
V-without looking at her-lekin ek baat yaad rakhna..mera pyar koi drama nahi..pyar karta hu tumse..aur life time tak karunga..meri life me aur koi nahi aa sakti..kyuki tum kal bhi meri wife thi..aaj bhi ho..aur future mein bhi..mere liye tum humesha meri wife rahogi..
With this he imigeatly left for his room..dabbu nd iliena also reached in hall nd they heard their convo..as virat left dabbu come near to maanvi who still searching something in his each nd every word..
D-shook her lightly-maanvi tum ruko main baat karta hu..nd he run behind virat..
Iliena saw maanvi turn nd looking them entered in room..as her health nd as she come here after run she feel weak..for second maanvi feel everything blank nd she abt to fall bt iliena hold her nd make her sit on nearest dining table's chair..
I-gving her glass of water-maanvi r u ok?
M-take ship nd nodded in yes..
She looks normal..iliena saw her gaze again moved towards virat's room..
I-smile-pyar karti ho na usse?
Hearing this maanvi imigeatly looked at her..
I-surprise kyu ho rhi ho?..may be u love him more then his love..isiliye ye sacrifice nd all this right?
Maanvi looked down..
I-look..mujhe pata hai..abhi se nahi..mujhe ye baat 9 months pahele hi pata thi..jab tumne virat ko apni trip adhuri chhod k ane pr tumne use data tha..
Maanvi imigeatly looked at her..
I-aur phir mujhe pata chala ki virat bhi tumse pyar karta hai..
Maanvi stood up hearing this..
I-tum soch rahi hogi ki to phir main yaha kya kar rahi hu?..main yaha apne fiance k saath aai hu..as virat mera friend hai aur dusri ki main ye clear karna chahti thi ki ab humare bich kuch nahi hai..kuch bhi nahi..
Hearing this maanvi cannot understand how to react..she has to be happy..or sad..in whole this she hurts him a lot..she feels guilty nd happy at the same time..
I-i don't knew tum log kisi galti ki baat kar rahe the..bt galti to meri hai..jo tumhare rishte k bich aa gai..
M-nahi..galti meri hai..sab kuch samaz ne k chakkar me apne dil ko samazna hi bhool gai..apne virat ko samazna bhool gai..use khushi dene ki koshis me dard de diya..tears again slips from her eyes..
I-to kya hua?..tumhi ne abhi kaha..tumhara virat..to rok lo use..manalo use..ab usne itni mahenat ki hai to tum bhi kar lo.. Smile..
Maanvi smile nd nodded in yes..
M-wipe her tears-chalo..
I-nahi..virat tak tumhe akele jana hai..aur mujhe hotel vapish..dabbu ko bol dena..main bahar wait kar rahi hu..
M-pr itni raat ko?
I-maanvi?..tum Mumbai girl hoke ye nahi janti ki Mumbai raat ko jagti hai..winked..aur waise bhi dabbu hai..u go..
M-smile-thanks..
Iliena smile nd nodde..
Maanvi turned back nd walked towards his room happily..bt still worried abt his reaction..
She reached near his room nd abt to entered in room bt stopped as she saw virat walking in room here nd there on phone nd dabbu try to calm him down..she stood near open door..
D-virat kya kar raha hai..abhi koi tickets nahi milegi..its festival time..
V-throwing phone on bed-i don't care damit..mujhe bas jana hai..yaha se dur..usse dur..agr meri presence use woh bate yaad dilati hai to main yaha nahi rahunga..main by car jaunga..
D-no way..kal holi hai..as ki tu ek star hai tujhe pata hai roads jam ho sakte hai..dekh kal tak ruk ja..phir hum dekhenge..
V-looked at him-ok..lekin mujhe kal sham tak ki ticket chahiye..varna me kal raat me yaha se nikal jaunga..
D-ok..pakka..
Virat turned his gve nd abt to walked towards his wardrobe bt stop as he saw maanvi on door..he ignore nd go towards wardrobe..dabbu notice this nd come near to maanvi..
D-maanvi Maine koshis ki pr..
M-smile-dabbu..iliena bahar tumhara wait kar rahi hai..use late ho raha hoga..
Dabbu understand..he just nodde nd left them all alone..
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done..
Hope u like..
Next part updated if i m not fall in sleep..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: amgud

w8ing for the update😃


just updated...
Sorry for late...
Next will be late night as my phone charged... Or if i m still awake...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woohooo finally manvi ko pata chal hi gaya...now everything will be f9...superb...bas ab virat ko manvi ki pregnantsy ke bare me janana he...pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow...superbbb update
slowly slowly everything is coming back on track yayyy
now hpoe virat asani se maan jae plzzz zada bhao na khaye as uske bhi galti thi😉
then everything will be fine😃
and thanks for the pm sweet1126🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow superb update Khushi!! Finally Iliena told her everything and Manvi k sare confusions bhi clear ho gaye!! :D I hope Virat won't be angry with her for long.. Waiting for their confession.. :D Loved it Khushi <3.. Eagerly waiting for the next part... Thank you Manisha for the pm.. Take care :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update debo sweety.. Thanx for this update.. N thanx to manisha who pm me for this part.. N hi... Debo plz canvey my big thanx to khusbu too.. She has a amezing telent of writing.. Now cm on the update.. Superbly done. I cn even imagien each n evry movment of virman, dabu n illiana.. Full update is like runing in front of my eyes like a film.. No wait for mor truth cm to reavel.. Like manvi's pregnecy,virman confession n most imortently holi scene.It all gonna b rocking n intersting. Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update it just made me smile... 😃
like felt so bad for virat coz he was cursing himself coz he thought he was reason for her pain and then the way he said my love was never a drama that was a brilliant moment ...
and finally manvi gt it all clear thanx to illeana ...
i just hope manvi usse mana le and virat plzz ziada bhav matt khana ok yu know pregnant biwi ko pareshaan nai karte be a good hubby aur manjao na 😉
manisha thanx alott for the pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update 😊
Finally Maanvi understood the truth
So excited for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
how can u stop in this point😭😭
but update was superrr👏⭐️
plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz update the next part today...
can't wait for next update...

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