New os KAISA HAI YEH JHAGDA PURANA upd pg 23 - Page 6

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virmanfan013 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
oye that was a superb update yaar. loved it to the core. very well written dear. haww virat kissed someone mistakenly. feeling very bad for mannu. but she forgive him
loved the last part where virman were romancing in the public
thanks for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART-3... Virat and manvi were sitting lost in each others eyes, as after a long time they had found peace to return in their hearts. They were both feeling content and were lost in their dreamland, oblivious to the fact that a pair of eyes were observing them very curiously. His innocent eyes were staring to virmans table from another table a little bit far, in that elegant hotel. Lets reveal his idendity... it was the kid whose eyes were folded by his mommy dear in order to not let her devilish son to watch any THAT KIND OF SCENE a few minutes ago. He came here with his parents and getting really bored without his video games and the new blue aeroplane - which his dad got him just yesterday. He got down from his chair and was now walking here and there with his moms permission and warning to stay nearby. Occasionally he was looking at virat and manvi, come on... who would miss such adult scenes live !! Virat held manvis hand in his and kissed on the fingertips one by one. Manvi was blushing and enjoying his pagal husbands touch which never fails to touch her heart. " Mujhe kabhi chorke toh nahi jaogi na mannu?" virat asked, now caressing manvis cheeks with his hand while his other hand was still holding her hand in his. His eyes speakin about his deep love for manvi which only she can understsnd. " Tum kabhi waise uth-patang harkate toh nahi karoge na? aur dusri larkiyoke karib bhi nahi jaoge na?" manvi requestioned. Virat said pressing her her hand with his, " Kabhi nahi sweetu- pweetu, saapno mein bhi apne charo tarab deewar khara kar dunga, jiske andar sirf hum donoka private mein romance chaalta rahega, what say?" Manvi lightly slapped his arm smiling and virat acted getting hurt. " I love you so much my bunny..." virat said coming close to her ears in a husky whisper and manvi replied, " I love you too..." Virat came closer to manvi and pulled her in for a hug. Suddenly they jerked back from each others arms hearing an excited squeal from behind them, " Manvi didiii... virat jiju..." They stood up from their chairs and looked at the source of the sound. Virat and manvis commmon friends dabbu, karan and sweety were standing there with wide grins adoring each of their faces. " what a badluck, humesha humare romance kei beech mein tapak paarte hai yeh sab" virat thought. Manvi smiled understanding what virat might be thinking but greeted their cute friends happily with surprise. Dabbu was a year younger than manvi and always was like his little brother in college. So he called her di and virat jiju. Coincidentally they also came for dinner at the same hotel. Dabbu came running like a toofan mail to them and after hugging manvi he hugged virat too. Virat who was reluctant to hug dabbu was being jerkily pulled into a hug by dabbu and he also kissed virats cheek. That made virat annoyed infinitely and he rubbed his cheek where dabbu recently kissed. But in the meantime a very bad thing happened. Virats REMOTE CONTROLE which he was going to use for creating fireworks... fell off from his pocket. But he was too busy to avoid any other hugs from dabbu and greeting his friends, that he didnt notice. But someone noticed a few feets away. Yes, the devilish kid. He crawled under virmans table and took the remote. Then he took the remote with him back to the table where his parents were and sat on the chair thinking which things remote it could be!! <<Thats it for now... pls press the like button and comment... pms will be sent soon...>>
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
Index:... Part 1- pg 1; Part 2- pg 3; Part 2 (cont)- pg 6; Part 3- pg 8; Part 4- pg 14; Part 5- pg 18 ...
Edited by devilaonmoon - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
cute update loved the way both were romancing in public lol and goshhh that kiddooo got the remote what now???? hehehe update soon thnx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Viraaat what have yu done yaar lol aur upar se yeh bhi bol diya good news it didnt include tongue 🤣
itni desperation bhi bhari par gaya na ...
and manvi bhi enjoying the attention haan bechara virat ...
awesome update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
omg!!!!!!! that ws one hell awesome update yaar...
u know this scene reminds me of movie ugly truth...
seriously...in that catherine heigl had to suffer so much because of that remote...i hope manvi gets saved...😆
i m eagerly waiting 4 next part dear:)😳
thnx 4 pm:)
Edited by shilpa09 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
omg that little cute n naughty devil took virat's remote😲😲😲
now what will happen😆😆
awww their romance is sooo sweet
aik to wise he virman inne dinno baad time spent kar rea the usmai bhi kabab mai haddi unke frnds ghuss gae😡😆
dabbu kissed virat onhis cheek n hugs him tightly even though he didnt want to🤣
plzzz cont sooon😃
n pm me nxt time u update i have sent the buddy req plzzz accept it😛
wanna know what will happen nxt n what will gonnna happen with that remote🤪😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
The First thing I Wanted To Say To u!

Why Didn't u Send me a Pm on the first update!

I just got it Pm n read all the part so far!
It is Amazing Seriously!

Remote Control!!!!!!! Hahahaha Lol (That The First Time)

Arre Bacha Nai Remote Leliya Hai! Shit nia there will Definatly be fire works!

Amazing Os Thanks for the Update N Do Pm Me N Cont Soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
lol..nw its gonna be fun..remote in the kids hand lol..nice xpdate cntinue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
super update
thanks for pm and plzzz update soon waiting...

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