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little.angel56

@little.angel56

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: aa_mnhs
that really was a surprise! i didn't know she had been guilty of this, all along. hope you update soon, too eager to know what happened, exactly.
love
Sarah

Yeap, i just wanted to twist it because the show already portrayed what I wanted too!
Thank you!😊

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vishwa patel

@-vish-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#122

brilliant update😊

emotions were beautifully described

last part so sad...poor jeevika!!

thanx for pm...continue soon!!

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ElmWizard5017

@ElmWizard5017

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#123

MIND BOGGLING !!
Loved it to bits !! <3
I'm speechless ... Short ov adjectives !! Lol
U nailed it !! EPIC !! <3
Poor Jeevika :(
Plzz continue soon ... Its getting intense n interesting day by day !! :)
Can't wait to read more :D
N thx for da pm :)

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little.angel56

@little.angel56

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: ElmWizard5015
MIND BOGGLING !!
Loved it to bits !! <3
I'm speechless ... Short ov adjectives !! Lol
U nailed it !! EPIC !! <3
Poor Jeevika :(
Plzz continue soon ... Its getting intense n interesting day by day !! :)
Can't wait to read more :D
N thx for da pm :)

Thank you! And finally you commented, was looking forward to it!

Thank you so muchhh😊⭐️

I am glad i could come up to the level of your expectations, will try soon to update it,

Love- aaliya!😊

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sajanfan004

@sajanfan004

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#125

This update was awesome awesome awesome!!

I loved it to the core,,

So sweet... Loved the way you showed all the emotions..

This was a great part... The last part was really sad... But other than that, it was a great update!!

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KtYammie13

@KtYammie13

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Oh My My...

That was such a great one..

Why didnt you continue it..?

It's superb..

I had goosebumps all over me while reading...

You need to continue it...soon

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kryanvirika05

@kryanvirika05

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#127

this is really good!

please update soon!

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Ashima

@sweetdollashita

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#128

When are you gonna continue? continue with your stories soon aaliya

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F.R.I.E.N.D

@F.R.I.E.N.D

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#129

Okay...i can go on and on and on... abt how amazing this was, but all the comments here have said all that I wanted to say and more. 😊 ...can't think of more words to add.

I just read all the parts in one go (comments included)... You write very well. Thank you ...do update.