Virmaan :U have to come back-its destiny not mistake: 1 : part-48+note - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome story. .just read all updates. .it was superb. .can't wait 4 next pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Eee...love the precap...cont soon...write this part lill long...plzzz
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Amazing superb update...loved it
precap is awesome...continue soon please can't wait...!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: samu_khamkar

Eee...love the precap...cont soon...write this part lill long...plzzz


thanks...but its limited due to my phone capabilities...i will try...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: angel_sofia

Wow Amazing superb update...loved it
precap is awesome...continue soon please can't wait...!!

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Thanks...i will try...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-18
wedding was finished and virens family takes jeevika with them to Mumbai,its virikas reception night,all percent in garden area,virika stood at beautiful decorated small stage..after some time karan also comes there with his family..virat noticed karans gaze on maanvi but he already know that maanvi talked with vanshika and make her understand that she didn't want marry now nd specialy with karan..vanshika assure maanvi that today she talked with MK abt karan nd maanvi..virat noticed many times that karan try to flirt with maanvi many times but all time she make excuses and try to ignore him..she already told him that she didn't want marry now..she has Owen reason but he try to convey her that she will be happy with him after she marry him..maanvi get irritately..after function all relatives and guests start leaving..just family members and few gusts are left..vanshika feel that its right time so she come at MK and talked her abt maanvi and karan..
Here maanvi stood with jeevika and virika when karan come and asked her that before he leaves he want to talk to him..first maanvi refuse but after his insist she agree..she makes excuse with jeevika and follow him with make distance..he stopped and turned at back area of garden..
M-kya baat hai karan?
K-woh..maanvi actually main janta hu ki tum shayad apne parents ki vajehse ye shadi se mana kar rahi ho lekin ek bar shadi ho jaye phir hum milke sab handle kar lenge..he come close to her..
M-karan sirf yahi baat nahi hai..main ase hi tumse shadi nahi karsakti mere apne reasons hai..plz understand..
K-tum reason bata do i promis main sab thik kar dunga..maanvi main janta hu tumhe bahot ajeeb lag raha hoga ki main ase behave kyu kar raha hu lekin yakin karo jabse tumhe dekha hai bas ek hi sapna hai..tumhe apna banana..
He again come close to her..maanvi get little scared..
M-i m sorry but main nahi reason bata sakti hu aur nahi tumse shadi kar sakti hu..aur pls mujhe ye sab bilkul pasand nahi hai..and she abt to turned when he hold her hand..
K-tum ase nahi jaskti..and he pinned her to nearest tree..he come close to her..he moved his Hand and plased on her waist..she got angry and pussed him away and slapped him..
M-angrily-just because ki ye viren jeevika k liye bahot special day hai aur main nahi chahti ki yaha koi tamasha ho isiliye main tumhe bardash kar rahi hu..dubara Asi koi koshis bhi mat karna..
He got angry..she turned and start walking when he pulls her dupatta of her salwar-suit..maanvi turned with surprise..she plased her hand on her chest..karan notices mangalshutra around her neck..
M-karan..ye kya batamizi hai?..mera dupatta wapis karo..she raised her hand..
Karan smirked..he hold her and pulls her with spin..her back hit with his chest and his hand around her neck still holding her wrist with that hand..maanvi try to free herself..
M-karan..he tied his grip..
K-smirked-achcha..to ye chakkar hai..ab tak to badi sati savitri ban rahi thi lekin tu to kisi bhi cheap character se kum nahi ho..gale main mangalshutra aur mujhe tamiz sikhani hai..main sikhata hu tamiz kya hoti hai..
Tears slips from her eyes..she struggling with free herself..he turned her with spin and throw her dupatta on grass..he pinned her in tree..
M-karan chhodo..varana bahot pachhtaoge..she try to puss him..he smile evil type and abt to come close to her..she shut her eyes and tears slips from her eyes..
Suddenly someone pulled karan back with holding his neck and pussed him on floor..maanvi opened her eyes and saw virat in frant of her..virat picked her dupatta and plased around her neck..he know she is scared..he assure her with shook his head slightly..like told her that he was there with her..dabbu also comes nd gave support to her..virat turned and start punching to karan..its turned in fight..maanvi try to stop this but dabbu stop her..
D-pitne de sale ne..virat chhodiyo mat kutte nu..
M-chup karo tum..virat stop it..virat..but he ignore it..
everyone heared some noise from back side..all rush towards that direction..all get shocked after saw fighting..after some struggle they separate them..karan got many injuries on his face but little blood spot found near virats lips..
Dadu-ye kya ho raha hai?
Mk-karan ye kya ho raha tha yaha?
K-mom..mujse nahi inse puchho..main to maanvi se shadi se inkar karne ka reason puch raha tha..tabhi Maine uske gale main mangalshutra dekha bas isse is bare me puch liya tab ye chillane lagi..aur virat ne galat samaj liya..all are shocked..
M-nahi..ye to..
She cut by MK..
MK-badi besaram ladki hai tu..maine to tujhe apni bahu bana chaha lekin tu..tu to pahele hi apna naam roshan kar chuki hai..pata nahi kiske saath muh kala kiya hai..shadi ki bhi hai ya ase hi mangalshutra pahen liya?
Vn-aunty aap bina soche..he abt to say when maanvi stop him with holding his hand
MK-ruk kyu gaye?and speak many wrong thing for maanvi
Mk-pata nahi ek pati hai ya..
V-shouted-bas..bahot ho gaya..ab 1 word nahi MRS.MAANVI VIRAT VADHERA k liye..
All shocked..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow, such a awesome update.was waiting for karan's pitaayi.Virat trashed him and i am so happy.Wow, finally the tuth is revealed.Loved Virat in this update.Awesome update yaar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update⭐️.. Totally rocking.. Karan is so cheap😡.. Im so glad that Virat thrashed him .. Karan's mom is really annoying😡.. I loved the last line.. Finally Virat accepted their marriage .. fabulos update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
i loved ur ff
sry dear but my mob i m nt able to comment u plz pm me whn update next
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bingo...mindblowing updt...wonderfull...virat except manvi as his wife...cont soon plz plz plz

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