Virman SS Tum Ho Mera Pyar part 2 updated - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It sounds interesting dear... You should continue please...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey dear nice concept cont. soon n pm me update soon
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interesting.waiting for next update.continue soon.and PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really nice concept...
Plz cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 2

She nodded her head and he drove towards Vadhera house.

They were silent until Maanvi asked "Tumhara ghar mein kaun kaun rehte hai?"

"Mera dadaji, ma, buaji, bhai, bhabhi, chacha,chachi aur unka beta." Maanvi is interested to know more and she can't be silent for long time so she keep on asking him about his family members and he answered all her questions.

He doesn't know why he is very much comfortable with this girl'he doesn't even know her name." then it stuck him that he didn't even ask her name.

"Hey'What is your name?"

'Mera naam Maanvi aur tumhara' Maanvi questioned him.

"Virat'Virat Vadhera''Maanvi''.hmm'. tumhara asli naam ya fake wala? He asked her teasingly.

Maanvi got irritated "Oye'.mera asli naam Maanvi hai. Mein kyu jhoot bolungi. Tum mera help kar raha ho iska ye matlab nahi hai ki tum kuch bhi bologi. Samjha?"

Virat is surprised with her she was so scared few minutes back now she is threatening him. Wah Virat tujhe tho hona chahiye aise. "Waise tumhara naam sherni hona chahiye Maanvi acha naam hai tujhe suit nahi hua" teased Virat smiling mischieviously.

Maanvi could not help but feel relaxed and came back to her original talkative mode and retorted him "isiliye mujhse panga mat lo mein Rishikesh ki sherni Maanvi Chowdary hu tum kuch ulta seeda karega to khajaaoongi".

"So you are from Rishikesh. Ghar se bhaag ke aagayi kya?"

Maanvi kept silent without answering him. Virat turned his head when he didn't receive answer to his question and understood that he has to give some time to her to open up. He is driving silently then he got a call from home he answered it. Maanvi observed his face changing colours from anger to irritation. He is deeply thinking after the call ended.

Maanvi asked him hesitantly "Kuch hua kya ghar par? Tumhara bolti kyu bandh hogayi?"

'Why should I tell u? Will you solve my problem or what?' Virat spoke rudely with her then he realized that he is taking his frustration over her.

'I am sorry. I should have not spoken to you like that. I am really sorry'

"That's ok. Kabhi kabhi hojaata hai. Maanvi chowdary is very kind to forgive you. Now tell me can I help you in any way? Afterall you saved my life."

He smiled at her words. Then he told everything to Maanvi. He doesn't know why but he felt like sharing everything with her. Finally when he finished she spoke 'What you call this as problem and you can't find a solution to this so called problem. Use your brain rockstar' Maanvi's words surprised him. He is thinking that it is life and death problem and here she is laughing at him.

'If you found a way to help me then tell me. Don't irritate me with your bak bak and why are you calling me rockstar? Tum mera singing career ka mazak uda rahi ho?'

Maanvi opened her mouth and said angrily "Ya. You are right I don't have any work other than mocking you. Pagal ho kya? Mein yaha pe apna dimag par itna jor de rahi hu tujhe help karne keliye aur tum ho ki, khair chodo. Singing is your passion right so obsiously you will become rockstar oneday then I have to call you rockstar so abhi se practice kar rahi hu. Tumhara problem kya hai?"

Virat is overwhelmed with joy and at the same time he is stunned with her words she just met him few minutes back but still she has confidance on him that he will become a singer. He just can't find enough words to thank her. He just felt that she is the angel sent by god to help him come out of his misery. Lately he was never relaxed thinking about his career, Maya and he could not share his feelings with anybody. He used to share his feelings with his bhai but after Maya's arrival he maintained distance with his bhai because Maya doesn't want his bhai to interfere in their life. Viren bhai understood his problem and never asked him anything about Maya from then onwards. It created an unknown gap between both brothers. He never shared all his feelings with Maya because half the time she will be busy and the other half she is least interested to listen to him. Sometimes he gets doubt did Maya ever love him but he pushes those thoughts aside thinking that she wants to spend some quality time with him rather than wasting time with their argument over his career and family . Now he is happy to share his problems with Maanvi because she is not only listening but also trying to understand him.

He came out of his chain of thoughts when Maanvi shouted Virat. He looked in front one truck is there he suddenly applied brakes to stop the car hitting the truck. Maanvi almost fell from her seat. She adjusted herself and said 'license hai tumhara paas?'

'Sorry sorry are you ok' he asked tensely.

Ya. I am fine. You could have killed me with your driving' she answered rubbing her forehead.

'Sorry sherni ji'please aapka kamal ka idea se mujhe bachao' he is totally enjoying teasing her and talking with her.

Sorry everyone i could not send pm's now. From next part onwards i will surely send pm to everybody. Thank you one and all for your encouraging comments.Sorry for not updating regularly but will sure give an update once in a week.


Edited by abhilasha143 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome

plzzz send me a pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was good

loved it
cont soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome yaar. Loved the update. Manvi makes everyone feel positive.Loved him here.Pls accept my buddy request and from next update pls pm me😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow really nice!! Plz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
I just read both the parts...and Believe me I really loved both... Can you please pm me when you update next...??

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