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Posted: 12 years ago
I tried to give next update at late night...
Not sure...
I tried...
If i m not in a sleepy mood...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwweeesssoome! Awww I feel so sad for Mannu! cont soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
it ws romantc bt mde me sad:-( cnt soon pls
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry...last night i m really tired so i cannot updated but i m updated now...just in few hours...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Niaksharma

Sorry...last night i m really tired so i cannot updated but i m updated now...just in few hours...



pls update soon... waiting since mrng...
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-36(b)
virat leaving her with tears..she look him till the end..she looked at his room and went in jeevikas room she want to meet everyone before leave..after meet everyone she paked her beg and went into virat's room..she put her beg on bed and pick virats photo from side table and plased near her heart..tears fall on her cheeks..she hear her phone beeps and saw msg form karan..she read it..he send her address of his house..she wipe her tears and looked at virats face in photo and kissed it..she put photo in beg and bring paper and pen from table and wrote big sorry on paper and plased it below another frem which contain virmaan marriage photo..she stood up and look around his room..she leave room with tears..she come out from house..she call texi..she sit in texi and before leave she turned to see her house
She reached at karans house..she just press the bell but karan open door with smile..she looked at him..
K-bilkul time pe..first come in side..
She entered in house..its little apartment with one bedroom and kitchen..she look down..he come near to her..
K-vese humare liye ye apartment kafi hoga kyu?
M-ye tumhara ghar nahi hai..
He shocked
m-tum nahi chahte ki virat ya koi tum tak pahoche..aur nahi tum mujhe yaha rakhego..
K-wow..u r really came from lawyers..he smile..
M-tum kuch bhool rahe ho..photos
she talked to him in serious tone..he can saw different maanvi..its lifeless..blank face..
Karan gave her packet..
K-ye..sab isi me hai..
Maanvi take it and checked it..
K-hume abhi nikalna hai..
M-kaha?
K-hum city chhod k ja rahe hai..tumhe apna phone yahi chodna hoga..
M-thik hai..lekin mujhe Jane se pahele virat k PA se milna chahti hu..
K-ok..use M G road pe bula lo..
Maanvi call him and told him to reach at M G road and not told virat abt it..
They reached at M G road..maanvi come out of car and walked towards him..
PA-hello mem..
Maanvi smile..
M-virat..
PA-don't worry mem sir ko kuch pata nahi hai..aur vese bhi woh aaj meeting k baad kahi aur jane k bare me bata kar chale gaye the..
M-thik hai..
PA-aap ne mujhe yaha..
M-haa woh actually mujhe tumse ek favour chahiye..
PA-kahiye na..
M-ye..packet virat ko dena hai..aur ye latter bhi..plz kuch puchna mat..bas mere liye ye kardo..she requested him..
He nodded and take packet from her..she walked towards car and sit in it..car passed from him..he saw karan with her..
Here virat come out from mall with one gift box..
V-in his mind-i hope tumhe ye saari pasand aaye..and he smile..
After few minit he reached at home..
He entered in house and searches for her..he went in his room and put gift on bed and come out of room..he didn't saw sorry note..he come out of house and search her in garden..
V-maanvi yaha bhi nahi hai..usne to kaha tha..call karta hu..
He walked inside the house and try her cell..but she didn't pick up the call..he was worried now..he reached at his room..he throw phone on bed and sit on bed..suddenly he heared knock on door..he looked towards door..his PA parth stood their..he stood up..
P-sir..
V-tum yaha..he looked at watch..its 7:30..ander aao..
He entered in room..
P/actually sir mujhe aap ko ye dena tha..tarun ne kaha aap room me hai isi liye me yaha aa gaya..ye aapke liye..
Virat tool packet and latter from him..with surprise..
V-mere liye? Kya hai..
P-i don't know sir..mujhe ye maanvi mem ne diya hai..aapke liye..
V-surprisely-maanvi ne? Woh hai kaha? Aur tumse kaha mili?
He told him everything...virat shocked with her action..
V-thik hai tum jao..
Virat sit on bed with packet and latter and thought abt it...he confuse with it..maanvi ne..
Second side...-
karan and maanvi about to reached at air port but he stopped the car in middle way..karan take only her luggage out of car..maanvi looked at him with surprise..
He gave beg to her..maanvi take it with confusion...
K-tum soch rahi hogi ki Maine ye kyu kiya...maanvi meine shocha tha ki aaj subah jab tumhare parivar ko sab pata chal gaya tab sab khatm ho jayega..pr tum ne apna vada nibhaya..nahi ki mujhe bachaya balki yaha aai apna vada pura karne..
She just looked at him...
K-mein janta hu ye ajib hai lekin sach me mujhe tum pasand ho pa mein ye bhi janta hu ki tumhare liye virat kya hai..aur virat k liye tum..jao lot jao..
Tears fall on her cheek...
K-mein vadheras ko barbad karne me apne papa ki help kar raha tha..lekin ab samj chuka hu ki mein galt tha..so tum ja sakti ho..
He smiled..he pointed his hand towards other side of road..he arrange texi for her..she looked at texi and turned towards him..
M-thanks..and gave smile..
K-jao..varana mera dimag palat na jaye..
She nodded..
M-thanks...tum dil k bure nahi ho..dekh na tumhe bahot achchi ladki milegi..
He smile...
K-now go..varana virat mujhe kisi luli langdi k layak bhi nahi chhodegga..
She smile..
M-bye...
K-bye..
She turned and walked to wards car..she about to reached at but suddenly one big car come in front of her and pulled her in,she shoute..karan runs behind car but its to fast
Here in virat sit with close packed
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Posted: 12 years ago
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virat saw photos and read latter...
He shoute in anger and viren come in his room...
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second site
karan call his father jeshwal to free maanvi..but he refuse..



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Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update karan said manvi to go.argh jaiswal😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
so sad of manu..feel bad 4 her..plz conti fast...
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Posted: 12 years ago
my god...dat was awesome!no one mite hav expectd dat!pls cont soon!

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