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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

AMAZING UPDATE! Loved Each n every moment of Virman...n u have explained reallly well...i was smiling through out th update...continue soon n thanks for the pm!


thank you syed...!!!!
will continue soon and pm u...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: keertu

hey thanks for the pm.sry i am not able to give long comment.i am not feeling well and i have maths exam tomorrow.so sry and continue soon.:) hey thanks for the pm.sry i am not able to give long comment.i am not feeling well and i have maths exam tomorrow.so sry and continue soon.:)


it ok and i understand... 😊
take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_virman

Awsum update !!! Virat/Manvi convo was so cute and naughty hehe 😳

I'm so happy they're getting married !! 😃
The pics were awsumm
But where is Manan?? Is he dead??? 😕
Tfs a lot for the PM and for updating soon 😊


Originally posted by: vadhera

Virman shaadi..Hurray..

Great update..


Originally posted by: aysha1989

Wonder what happened to Mannan..
Anyway nice update... Can't wait till they get married 😳
Thanks for the pm 😊



first of all, thanks to you all...!!!!! 😊 😊
coming to virman marriage, it will be in the next pat...
coming to manan... wait fr the nxt part... all the questions will be answered...!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SakshiAngel

LIKED IT VERY MUCH...❤️

NOW WATING FOR THEIR MARRIAGE... N "VIRAT'S CONDITION"😉😳
CONT. SOON N THANQ FOR D PM...😊

thank you SakshiAngel...😊
you are not the only one waiting for the wedding and the CONDITION... 😛 😉

Originally posted by: nikeshathana

nice update finally virman are married😊 thnx for the pm and as usual superb update!!!

👏⭐️
wow naughty virat 😳
continue soon...😉


thank you 😊
will continue soon... 😊
naughty virat... 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Nice update... Manan missing nd Virman gttng married...



thank you 😊
yeah...!!! virman getting married...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shabana20

Superbly written!!..

Each moment was simply amazing!!..
Loved it..
Thanks for the pm.

thanks and welcome...!!!! 😃


Originally posted by: virumanu

lovely...nw realy waiting 4 ur next part...plzzz update it fast


thank you and will update soon...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hangok

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as usual great work :-D and the pics make it memorable...

thank you so much for this part and for the pm


thank you soo much... 😊
u made me happy from your comment...!!!! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: S.Khan

Okay naina this update was okay... Am I kidding my self this was amazing beyond infinite words
Okay the start was indescribable, virat engulfing manvi in to his arms I could just imagine that 😳 soo cute. And then virats apology to manvi, his world his universe this was just described beyond the icing on the cake 👏 well done naina ⭐️. And manvi's response to him was just magnificent we will live together virat... we will gro up together... we will go through each and every phase of life together... we will marry each other, became man and wife, then become parents, then grandparents, and then grand grandparents... i will never leave you and mark my words we will die together in each other's arms... we will always be together even after death in heaven. this part was just too too good naina how do you come up with this stuff, your SS is like a Drug which has an effect all through out me, we're you born a genius writer 🤔. Back to the update then manvi going on about the mistake she made when going to manan and believing him more than what virat had said, and then virat questioning her about meeting manan and trusting manan's words more than his. After manvi told him I was in awe for the fact that even in your as they have a great understanding between each other 👏. And then manvi and virats nokh jokh reminded me of the good old days oh how I wish them times were back . And then virat telling manvi about his condition and manvi replying with the same old kissey, but then virat telling manvi about the actual condition wanting to marry her ASAP, for their suhaag raat ☢️ virat mere dildaar control sabar ka phal meetah hota hai 😉. Also loved the bit about their college virat and manvi back to their normal routines without manan was described as an English man would say absolutely positively marvellously 😃. Yay manvi and virats dates were being discussed 😳. Ooh a spark igniting between he jeevika and viren soo cute 😳. All rasms done and dusted. That was soo sweet of dadaji to take all the responsibility and not let beeji carry any burden, described how would I say it excellently 👍🏼.
Naina the pics were beautiful and all in all just like the update 👏
Thanks for the pm, update soon and ooh pm me please ( I know you will no matter what 😉)
Lot of love for reading my bakwaas and sorry for the long and big comment which is half as long as the update 😭
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I am really happy after reading your comment...!!!!!!!!! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃

i really dnt know for what all should i thank you... for leaving me speechless or for giving my a bful feedback or for making my day...!!!!!!

yes i will pm u no matter what... 😉

and dnt be sorry, infact i would love to read many more long comments from u... 😃
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey read all the parts in a go must say yar it was awesome amazing... They wr really good and do pm me the next tym wuld luv to read it DONT FORGET TO PM ME...
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Posted: 12 years ago
SO THIS A SWEET AND A LONG UPDATE FOR ALL OF U GUYS OUT THERE...

PART 21

so finally the day of their marriage was one day far... the day manvi and virat were dreaming of from the day they fell in love with each other... the day that would be a beautiful phase in their love story... the day that will unite them forever... they would be man and wife.. they would be mrs. n mr. virat vadera... oops junior mrs. n mr. vadera... this mere thought delighted them...

just one night before the marriage...
manvi was lying peacefully in her bed ... she was really tired from all this marriage thing going on... the rasams have literally sucked all the energy and power she had in herself... but she really couldnt get sleep... there were n number of things going in her mind... first was the fear of leaving everything behind - her house, her family, her di, her room, her belongings, her childhood memories, her happiness, her dreams, her laughter, her sorrow, her each and everything behind may be even her soul... but the next moment she miled thinking about virat and how she cant leave her heart behind as her heart was already with virat... her heart was something that was now buried in virat's chest... he was the rightful owner of her heart and her herself... she was elated thinking that after few hours she would belong to him officially and the whole world be the witness of the seven vows that they will take... she was thinking about her life and how it would change there after... she was thinking how will it feel like to be the daughter-in-laws of the vaderas... how will she manage all the things together.. how will she be able to fulfil all her duties skillfully and efficiently towards that family and the family members and virat... how will she suddenly change from a loving, compatible girlfriend to an ideal wife... will she be able to give virat whatever he deserves... will she be able to prove herself as a compatible and loving wife as well... will she be able to satisfy virat as his wife... earlier he was her boyfriend and it really didnt matter whether she satisfies him or not... but now she had to had to satisfy her hubby and give in to his demand.. she have to be his ideal mate... and what if she fails in doing so... will he leave her and go behind another women... will he look for other women for his pleasure...
manvi muttered " no... no this cannot happen... my virat will never leave me for any other girl... this stupid maya... she had put all these things in my tini mini brain... she has polluted my thoughts... i shouldnt have listened to her adult talks... i shouldnt have listened to any of her suhagraat tips or stories... but who knew i would be effected by them so badly that i would have goosebumps thinking of my first night... ohh god if this maya wasnt di's best friend, then i might have murdered her now... she is married that doesnt not mean that she will scrae the hell out of me by telling me to shed in all the inhibitions and... chhii... how can she say stuff like this openly without any shame... shameless woman...!!! and on the top she gifts me that revealing night wears... she is just disgusting... but never mind i know my virat is not like that... he is really nice and will not... but what about the condition thing he said that day...?? is he really going to... shit... i want to run away... i dont want to get married... i never thought getting married was such a feeling... it is so scary thinking of all this sex thing... i hate this maya... gosh why did she have to tell me all this... maya why did u do this to me... you have replace all my joy and happiness with a feeling of nervousness and shyness... ohh god virat... "

" yes baby " as she heard these words she jumped off the bed and was about to shout when virat covered her mouth with his hands...
" shhh... manvi its me baby... virat.. take it easy..." virat whispered in manvi's ears with his breathe tickling her neck... manvi replied with a "hmm.."
virat : what was this hmm...??? speak up na... trailing his finger along her neck...
manvi : virat... stop seducing me na...!!!
virat : was i seducing you...?? no, i wasnt...
manvi : accha... ask me... i was getting seduced not you...
virat : shit...!!! how can i let a golden opportunity like this slip from my hand...???
manvi : virat... go away...
virat : oops...!!!! i didnt mean that... manvi baby listen to me na...
manvi : first listen to me... what are you doing here now at this time of the night...???
virat : came here to meet my would be bride... what else...???
manvi : dont u remember what dadaji and beeji said...???
virat : what did they say and actually when...??? how can i remember each and everything they say manna...?? they keep on blabbering whole day long... what can i do...???
manvi : how can you say like this about them...???
virat : ohh pls you are still my girlfriend so pls behave like that baby... dnt behave like a wifey already...!!!
manvi : what are you trying to say virat...??? am i being bossy...??? do u want me only as your girlfriend...??? i knew it...
virat : baby... i dint mean that... pls dnt spoil the mood manvi... and i remember what mogambo said.. he said that we both cannot meet till we get married... right...???
manvi : absolutely... so why are you here...???
virat : to see you beautiful... *winking at her*
manvi : really...??? stop flirting my to - be hubby...
virat : how can i...?? when i drool over you whenever i see you...
manvi was now blushing thinking of her future hubby's flirting skills...
virat : haaye... maar daala...!!!
manvi : now leave...

virat : oh hello... actually i came here for something else...!!!
manvi : something else...??? what is it...??
virat : woh actually na some of our college friends have organised a party and they want us to be there...
manvi : wow that would be great... when is the party...?? we will surely go virat...!!!
virat : now... right now...
manvi : what...???
virat : yeah... so get ready...!!! we have to leave soon...
manvi : i cant virat... i just cannot.. we are getting married in few hours...
virat : i know but it wouldnt be good na if we dnt go in the party which our friends organised only and only for us and for our happiness...
manvi : i understand but beeji very strictly told me not to step out of the house before the marriage...
virat : baby who will tell her that we went out... you or me...?? no way we are gonna tell them... so how will they know...???
manvi : oh yeah... i never thought about it...
virat : so just get ready fast manna...
manvi : but there is one problem...???
virat : what now...???
manvi : i dont have anything to wear...!!! what will i wear...??? and on the top everything is in a mess... how am i supposed to find a dress for me...???
virat : when virat is here, not to fear... i brought a dress for you already and here it is (showing her a shopping back)
manvi kissed him and said : thank you...!!!! i love you soo much...
virat : manna lets drop the plan of going out, we can enjoy here also...
manvi : shut up...!!!! you are so naughty virat...!!!
virat : that you will see tomorrow...!!!
manvi was now red blushing...
virat : manna have a look at the dress first and then blush...
manvi : wow... its so beautiful and its favourite colour as well...

virat : i know... now change it in...
manvi : so go outside... how can i change in front of you...???
virat : i wouldnt mind... it would be my pleasure...!!!
manvi : go outside na...!!!
virat : okk... turns back to go to the balcany...
manvi : virat... hold for a minute...
virat : what..?? do u really want to change in front of me...???
manvi : how did u come here...???
virat : pipe...
manvi : what pipe...?? what if u got injured...???
virat : injured..??? i can even die for you manvi...???
manvi : stop it virat... dont say like this...
virat : okk... okk... you change, i am waiting outside...
manvi : hmm...


i will update the other part as well... actually planning something different thats why taking some time... hope u all dnt mind... 😊
Edited by naina927 - 12 years ago

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