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Adenah.NiShal

@Adenah.NiShal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: shaimah
awesome start
continue soon and thanks for the pm!

Thank you so much😃I'll cotninue soon and ur welcome for the pm🤗

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Jaya

@screen22

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Nice start to the story, loved the flashback, memories are all that we have!

Could not get the Hindi words very well but got most of the story, Please if you could English translation the Hindi words then i will enjoy the story much more, just a suggestion?

Please continue and pm me please

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Adenah.NiShal

@Adenah.NiShal

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: screen22
Nice start to the story, loved the flashback, memories are all that we have!

Could not get the Hindi words very well but got most of the story, Please if you could English translation the Hindi words then i will enjoy the story much more, just a suggestion?

Please continue and pm me please

Thank u dear! Glad u liked it, i'll try to put translations or make it mostly all english😊I'll continue soon and will pm u😃