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Hello guys 😊 you know I love to disturb u all.😆though I said I would not be disturbing u all for a few days but kya karron aadat se majboor😉.here I m again to disturb u all 😳...well after watching VirMan d whole week,I suffered from such an experience that I was dying to go through & believe me it took a lot from me😳...so I had to write something to let my heart be at peace.so here is d one 😊

Virat was getting ready for his concert this evening.He was feeling restless more than ever,the most.He decided to meet Manvi as soon as possible.Before every concert,he used to meet Manvi for once at least.Today he was really busy & at the same time restless so was a lil late to meet.The fortunate thing was there was no time limits for him to meet Manvi.He was allowed to meet her at any hour.The reason would be all have seen his love for her.That's why the doctors gave him this convenience...He reached hospital.She was lying innocently on her bed as always.There was always a hidden smile on her face.It gave him the power to get going.It was not exceptional this day also.She was lying in the same way.He came inside.The nurse was very familiar to them.She went out.He sat on the chair placed near her bed,in front of her.He looked at her & gathered the courage to sing,to sing for her.She had taken a promise from him that no matter what might come,he would not give up singing especially because of her.She didn't want to be another Maya.She always inspired him for singing while she was suffering from the worst.

He touched her hand & looked at the monitor but no,no special difference.He took her hand in his hand.He gently kissed her hand & held it tightly.

'Partner wish me luck,aaj mera ek aur concert hain...lekin tumhe chod ke jaane ka dil nahi kar raha.aaj bohat restless feel ho raha hain,pata nahi kyun!u will be okay na?'

He looked at her & felt that she made him remember her promise.He wiped his tears & decided to go for it.

'Okay partner,main jayunga!tumhare liye...ek bar phir main gayunga,tumhare liye.main aapna promise humesha nibhayunga!'

He got up & got himself going.He reached the door & turned around.He really did not want to leave her alone for this particular day.It became even more difficult for him.He finally took a deep breathe & went outside of her room.Outside the nurse was waiting.He requested the nurse not to leave her until he came back.

He stood on the stage.There was thousands of audience in front of him but he missed that person whose favorite audience he was used to be,his partner.In the midst of crowd of thousands,it felt really alone.He could not feel his existence. Because he only existed with her.Though she was with her,she was really not.She was nothing more than living a life of dead.She had not seen him for over two years.She was in a deep sleep.This was more scary than death.She was alive but dead.She was in coma.Her this poor condition made him feel like he was also not alive...He didn't get that why today it felt so bad.He again took a deep breathe & imagined her.He felt like asking God for Him being so rude with her & him.He wanted her back for now & forever.It had been his complain like for always.Tonight he wanted all his answers,her.He wanted to find himself because he resided in her.

nemat khuda kar zara ek dafa

dil dene ka keh zara falsafa

yeh nacheez ek cheez uski

maange hain tujhse

musafir yeh dehleez uski

maange hain tujhse

Khudaaya tu baata

kaha uska pata

pata kar

main uske bina bepata hoon

bepata bepata bepata hoon

His restlessness grew even more & made him feel guilty even more.The flashes of that night appeared before his eyes.....It was their wedding night,Manvi wanted to go out for a drive as she always had a wish to go out for a long drive with him & it was the best chance for her to make it come true.He knew that it was not safe totally.She was recovering from cancer very well with his support.She had a belief on him,he would not let anything harm her,He at last accepted it & decided to fulfill her wish.They both were out for drive.She was enjoying it at the fullest as always.He looked at her & feeling happy to give her this lil happiness.She also looked at him.They were sharing an eye lock.Suddenly he looked in front & saw a big light near the car & he was not able to stop it...He was still not able to forgive himself for what he had done that night.He should not have listened to her.He should have not loose the control over car.Because of his lil carelessness she was in such a state.After making such a painful journey,fighting against cancer & nearly winning it,he again lost her.He did everything he could have done to make her well but it didn't work.She still was miles away from him.

bas ek khayal uska hain din ki

fitrat badal de

dil dene ka keh zara falsafa

hain chaha usse shiddaton se

yun toot kar ke

woh kyun na mila muddaton se

yun rooth kar ke

He felt like breaking inside.He was not able to bear it anymore.He accepted his defeat before God's wish.He did not have the strength to continue his fight with Him.He let all the pains go away.He lose his strength to stand & got down to his knees.His eyes became wet & he closed them.He stretched out both his arms.He cried & sang at the top of his voice.

Khudaaya tu baata

kaha uska pata

pata kar

main uske bina bepata hoon

bepata bepata bepata hoon

Khudaaya tu bata

kaha uska pata

pata kar

main uske bina bepata hoon

bepata bepata bepata hoon

He opened his eyes & there was she standing in a white dress looking no less than a fairy.He stood up.She walked to him.She wipe his tears & hugged him.He closed his eyes.He was standing still,not able to move any part.She whispered in his ears 'Partner,let me go!!!!It's my time to go...Goodbye!'

He opened his eyes & she was disappeared in a second.He remembered that day when she had needed him while he had been busy in recording.At that day he had made it to reach her at the right time but for now he had a feeling that he would not be able to make it.He jumped off the stage & ran against the crowd breaking the rules & security...In the hospital he saw all the member of both families.He got more scared to find all of them there.He went to her room.The doctor put a white cloth on her face.He ran to her & pushed the doctor away. He put off the cloth from her face & cupped her face in his hands.

'What are u doing doctor?Manvi saans kaise legi?'

He noticed that all the life supporting systems were off.He at his horror shouted.

'aap log yeh kya kar rahe hain?abhi ke abhi yeh sab chalu karo!yeh sab kya ho raha hain?'

Viren came forward & hold him.He tried to bring him outside & made him understand.

'No bhai..mujhe kahi nahi jana...pehle aap inse kahiye ke sab kuch pehle jaisa thik kar de!'

Viren was trying his best to make him calm down.

'Mr.Vadhera plz!Try to understand,she is no more!'

He pulled the doctor by his colure. 'How dare u say that!Manvi ko kuch nahi huya hain...she is perfectly okay!'

'Virat unhe chod de...plz abhi yahan se chal!'

Viren with the help of chachu brought him out...They could not calm him down.Then the nurse came & told him that Manvi before closing her eyes forever opened her yes once.She looked for him.She could not find him.The nurse tried to contact to him as well as family members but they could not get him due to the concert.The nurse said Manvi before closing her eyes uttered very slowly 'Partner Goodbye'...






Sorry guys if u find it not good...tried to make it as good as i can😊

hope u'll like it & leave ur precious comments plz🤗

after reading it if u r interested here is

Index of My Works!

hope u'll like it 😃


Edited by jesmin.farjana - 13 years ago

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-happilyunknown thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I absolutely hate u for makin me cry im kidding girl i just loved it!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very sad but nice one. Please write a happy OS on Virman. I am still not able come out of yesterday's episode.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You made me cry!! 😭 Amazing OS Di!! Thanks a lot for the pm! 😃 ❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U made me cry...2morrows episode nd 2day u...
i think i had made a bukt full of my tears...ha ha ha
bt i swear its dam gd.i cnt express it.
nd i like to be disturbd by u so keep disturbing me
do cm wid more nd pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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too good ..i once again cried after reading this os...😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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After tomorw emotional filled episode.. ur this OS made me cry againnn...
really loved ittt awesome yrr

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Posted: 13 years ago
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omg amazing...😊 very sad and emotional...gr8 job 👍🏼
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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u made me cry...very emotional and touchy especially the last wordss. very well written...good job.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sad but good😊 do write more.

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