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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
Maya+Virat=Yuck!!!!
Manvi+Virat=VirMan!!! Yay!!!
Awesome Os But U Better make it pure happy ending
And aww the dream if Virat that manvi had was too cute lookis like someone is falling and realising her love for HER virat
Continue asap and pm
Me please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Awesome...👏Luvd the way u had written Maanvi's pain...waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
i literally had "goose bumps" when i read 'Maya weds Virat'
luved ur writin👏👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Dis is really very interesting plz continue dis soon:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Hey awesome it was a great ending I loved it to the core
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
pls pls update it.. i knw it's an OS but a humble req.. :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

I know u all must have been forgotten about this OS!!!!actaully I also kind of forgot.😆 as I had told u all,due to my brother's wedding was not able to update it n the other SS but now I m even more busy 😒damn with college & privates😡...but still have time for my VirMan fantasy😍😆 so here is the 2nd part. 😊


Part 2

The day had come.It was the day of the marriage.Virat was in his room.He had no excitement going inside.He did it only for her,to fulfill her wish.She wanted it to happen.She brought Maya back.She thought Maya was better for him than her. Though he was not happy with this marriage but Swamini was very happy with it.She finally found the perfect younger daughter-in-law for Vadhera family.Suddenly he turned into a responsible son.Well if it was true then she should thank Manvi for making him an ideal son of Vadhera family...He was wondering about her,how she was keeping!He knew that was not fair with Maya.He had no choice.He was helpless.

Someone knocked the door.

'Come in'

It was Swamini bua.She brought the wedding sherwani for him.She had done all the arrangements with full zest.She always wanted everything to go on her way & all was happening the way she had wanted.She put down it on the bed & sat beside Virat.

'Virat hume tum pe bohat naz hain.hume pata tha ke tum ek din jarur samajhdar ho jaoge!apni zimedariyan samhal loge!'

It was true he started going office & joined Viren in his work.

'Dekha acchi sangad ka asar accha hi hota hain!hume pata tha ki Maya hi tumhare liye sahi jeeban sathi sabit hogi!'

She said it wrong.Maya did not have any influence over him.All of this was because of Manvi.He would not mind,he knew she would never give the respect to Manvi that she deserved.But at least she should not have gave the credit to someone else knowing the truth.

Jeevika was getting ready.Soon they had to leave for the venue.She was not happy with this marriage at all.She knew about Manvi's feelings.She didn't have problem with Maya.To be frank,Maya had changed a lot & did many efforts to be the daughter-in-law of this family.She respected it.But she wanted her sister to be happy.She knew Manvi would never tell it to her but it was killing her to go away from Virat.Instead she made her promise not to tell anything Virat.She was helpless because of Manvi's promise.What she could do!On a side she had to perform the duties of Vadhera family's daughter-in-law,on the other side her heart was yearning for her sister's happiness.She could not even tell it to Viren.And she didn't have the chance to slow any of these down.Everything happened in the blink of an eye.If she got one chance to meet Manvi & make her understand!She was morning over her helplessness.Right that moment she received a call from Hrishikesh.

Virat was ready.He was looking like a perfect groom.But the charm was missing from his face.He wanted everything to happen as soon as possible.He didn't find all these meaningful.Even he was thinking about Maya.He was about to do it wrong with her.She deserved a good man than him.He would not be able to give her the happiness that she deserved.

Viren came to Virat's room.Viren saw him sitting with a heavy heart.He knew his younger brother was about to do a big sacrifice for the person he loved.He tried to make him understand that it would not turn out right.There is no use of such a marriage where u don't love the other person but he didn't listen.He was filling guilty inside.He had won so many cases for others & brought smiles back on so many peoples' faces but what was the use of it!He was not able to brought a single smile on his own brother's face.He approached Virat.

'Virat,best of luck mere bhai!'

'thanks bhai...'

'dekh Virat abhi bhi waqt hain soch le!kahi yeh sari zindagi tujh pe bojh na baan jaye!'

'Kaisa bojh bhai.yeh toh Mnavi ki marzi hain.woh hi toh chahti hain ke main Maya ke sath khush rahoon aur main bhi yeh hi kar ne ki koshish kar raha hoon!'

Viren again lost words to see Virat's love towards his saali.He never thought that his immature brother could love someone so much.But his this love made Viren afraid.How would he be able to live without her!

Viren was about to took Virat downstairs with him.They were about to go & suddenly Jeevika came running.She was in a hurry.She stopped Viren from taking him down.She asked for a few minutes.She had to say something important to Virat.Virat gave her the time.

Maya was ready in her attire.She looked gorgeous as a bride.Virat entered her room.She was surprised to see him.She could have took in a romantic way but she didn't.It was clear from his face that he had something serious to say.She stood up & approached to him.She stood in front of him.

'Maya,mujhe tumse kuch keh na hain.'...but he was not able to say it.He found himself selfish.On their wedding day,he had come to say this to her!He should have done it before.He was hesitating.

'Virat tum bina kisi hesitation ke mujhse jo bhi keh na hain kaho...main sun sakti hoon!'

He explained everything to her.She was still calm.

'yeh baat keh ne se itna hesitate kar rahe the!actually Virat mujhe pata tha aisa hi kuch hoga that's why maine zyada kuch hope nahi kiya tha!'

She put her hand on his shoulder,'go Virat!aur zyada time waste maat karo!...agar tum chahte ho toh main jaake shadi ke liye mana kar deti hoon!'

'No Maya..isski koyi jarurat nahi hain.main khud hi jaake sab se baat karunga!tum chaho toh mere sath aa skati ho.'

'nahi Virat...mera role yeh hi tak tha.ab iss story mein 3rd angle ki koyi jarurat nahi hain..!'

He was leaving her room.His heart was filled with gratefulness towards her.She had changed in a positive way.If she had been the previous Maya,she would not have left him so easily but this Maya was different.She had become a great human being.The credit went to none other than his partner.Before leaving he turned around & said 'Thanks Maya!'

Virat was coming downstairs.Everybody was ready to leave for the venue. Everybody was in a happy mood especially Swamini bua & dadaji.Finally they found their ideal son.But he knew what he was about to do would not let him be their ideal son any longer.


To be continued...

sorry guys for d late update 🤔...but hope u'll like it😊.there is still anther part.will try to update it soon 😃
plz leave your comments 🤗

Edited by jesmin.farjana - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
good part
m excited for next part
m thinkg he is going ot hrishikesh to meet manvi
cont sooon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
Very interesting story. So Jeevika stops Virat's marriage. What happened? Please update soon? Is it possible to guve English translations? It would help to understand the whole story :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Ahw, this is an awesome part, I love how you made
Maya change by the influence of Maanvi.
And what did Jeevika tell him? And how about
Maanvi? So many questions, I guess I will have to
wait for your next awesome update.

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