VirMan OS&SS : Note - pg.70 - Page 2

Originally posted by: NivRenDeewani

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MY dearest Ashuma🤗🤗🤗Ohh i cant thank you enough for this OS...can u make it into a FF soon? Like i keep saying ur my Fav writer amongst IF...u knw what a pagali i am about ur vampire FF and this adds to it. When i asked u to write a OS i so knw it will be what i want to read but u knw what...this is EVEN better.

My God u kept the characters intact...the masti...nok jhok is still there...alongwith Virat's worry for manv...fun and sweet alltogether...Ohhh i love it,i can go on forever...ok PLEASE telll me u will continue, DONT leave me hanging on...u will continue for ur shovu soon naaa?? and when u do email me plz... dont want to miss it for the world.

again supurb...Especially ur ending...heheee cant wait to read the next part. Also this OS shout be read by Sid sir...really this is too good, i hope we see something like this in the show

Originally posted by: lakshm

god loved it was imagining the scenes good one...

Originally posted by: roking_nidhi223

really nice
loved reding it

Originally posted by: ashred12

thanx dear 🤗...luv u too...
wasnt sure how much true to their char it was...glad it was upto ur expectation..
ff? d last time i wrote an os, it turned into an ff but i'm still confused how to proceed dat storyline...let me think abt it...maybe few more scenes...but no promises atm...