DeVga OS: ~Jazbaat nayee se mile hai~ - Page 2

Originally posted by: indian10

Very nice love it

Originally posted by: Abray

Un-reserved.

That's an awesome OS.. You described the DevGa scenes beautifully. Do write more. You should start a FF on DevGa

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Hey Nabz!!🤗
Yaar this is amazing,loved it❤️
Nicely written👏 Good job👍🏼
A pleasure to read😉
Do write more soonx😉
@Ty for the PM😃

Originally posted by: khisher

Heart touching OS...
beautifulll loved it

Originally posted by: sree_swaron

Durga's inner turmoil is very perfectly protrayed & I absolutely loved it.

do write more & if possible pm me. Loving DevGa these days 😊

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome update mere Akbar.

Tu to yaha bhi cga gyi.

Loved it very much.

U described her inner turmoil beautifully.

She started doubting.

This is an OS ya phir waha ki tarah yaah bhi OS ke nam pe SS ban jyegi?😆

But loved it and love u.

Do write more.

Ooops.

U are the busy queen.

Okay then do write more if u have time...

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

loved it nabi

awesome os

U describe emotions beautifully

Thanks for the PM

Loved it 😊

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Very nice. You gave words to all those Durga's expressions

Originally posted by: MonaAppu

Awesome, nice interpretation of Durg's expressions

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

lovely os...