Fate - FF CHP 17 pg 63 upd - 7/31/17

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deepoceaan

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Nicr, sound interesting

OS, TS, SS ,FF kuch bhi chalega for our ShraMan...

Thanks for PM dip

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Diya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Amazing dear !!

Loved it very much ❤️

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nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Aha! What the! Three freaking updates! A new story! What more can a Shraman fan ask for? Delta is back with a bang, and how! 😎

Coming to the OS, not-so-OS, definitely not an OS. Great start!

What? Nimmo was a budding actress? I haven't laughed so much in a while now. 🤣

Shravan as a firefighter? OOH! Chalo body-shody banane ka kahin to kaam aaya 🤪I like these rescuing kind of stories. So passionate! Can't wait to see machoman-meets-almondeyes.

Bring it on girl!

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Sanjh Bhattacharya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

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Isbar sidha unress! 😳 so this is his fate! Or should I say her too! The description of the rescue operation 👏

He already felt the pool, I am sure this time he won't just leave flowers! But, chained? Kinda odd! Deliberately or in hurry! Made me confused, or as usual I am overthinking!

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Reeba shukla

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

The rescue scene was brilliant.Awesome update dear...please PM me when you update the next part... Actually ajkl those km active hai hm.. And please lost k liye b...please

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lavanya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Wow as usual amazing update...

Loved the rescue scene...

Lady was chained???

Mm... quite interesting...

Please continue soon...

LavSriya

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nuttynuts

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Sherry as in Shravan? I thought Ben wanted a sherry on a saturday night. 🤣 But seriously, Sherry? ROFLMAO.

Sherry is not just gonna leave flowers for almondeyes (I so love that name now!), he will meet her too. ☺️

I really like this firefighter. Playing with fire and all that jazz. Waiting for the next part already.

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Harshi Arora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

I just love your 2nd part really they both meet even they hug and her brother... Waiting for know more about this story. And sherry really 😆but nice choice