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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations Cas for the 500th post. That's a big achievement. 🤪 🥳
RES.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Shravan in a white dress shirt is your favourite look on him na sweetheart 😉...
Mine too 😳😳
Rang saawla would go so well on Sumo. ..could actually imagine her dancing on it. ..
And that ripped shorts beneath the kurti. ..swag man..
The number of times I have gone Awww on your different works...I might as well totally give up on sweets😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Awesome os...beautifully penned
The whole club scene was amazing...shocked shravan coz of suman nd sumo😆
Btw congrats on ur 500th post😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Its nice to have post of your's... Next post will be when cross 750 post... 😆
Story was nice Shravan ki haalat kharab ho gayi thi when he saw Sumo in the party in a entire bold avatar Seeta to Geeta... 🤣

Keep writing


Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
AWESOME...JUST LOVED IT..
Please do write more...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Exceptionally good!!!
Your story made me feel very happy...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Sunain

Ressi res😃
wil surely unres by now as soon as i finish reading it😉
wil be back soon😳
****
Unress



Casi!!!😃
Hii at this ungodly hour😆
Casi i wanna say i didnt liked it...na aa...but just Loved it...ALOT!!!

Just finished it...n i must say u have adapted a healthy obsession of spellbounding me by ur incredible writting skills😳😉
As always ready to present us a beautiful update which only not bring smile on my face but makes my heart swell with adoration n respect for u...really u killed it!
Outstanding OS...was quite different.
U knw u made my one wish come true...i'll tell u how..by the bar scene...i so wanted a scene like tht n finally u wrote it so thanks for tht😉
Coming to the songs choice...apt one!...larko beautiful is my fav😳...tht was perfectly placed];)]
The part where thy both asked their respective Moms tht why thy choose thm for eachother...tht part n their Momz reply part was❤️...truly loveliest!
The ending was cute but made me upset...coz i wanted MORE..i dont knw but u always end a chap in such a way tht i tend to crave for more n more n cant help it😳
Really u did a stupendous job!👏
Hope to get more n more such cutiii upiizz from u soon😛
big beary one for my pumkin🤗



Love
Sunain ❤️



Hey Sunain 🤗

Hugs for reading this at an ungodly hour and commenting!! 😳
You loved it? I'm glad! 😃

Oy hoy!! Ittni taarif?! Hai me toh sharmaa gayi 😆 😳
The bar scene is not a product of my imagination but a real life cliche incident 😉 😛

And Ladki Beautiful, since day one reminds me of Sumo man!!
Its just so apt for her...don't you think so too? Yeah I know...

And what about Navraai? Was it good too?

Mom walle saare parts dramatic they but I liked writing those this time... 😉 😛

Thank you so much Bud! Your comment just made my day yaar ❤️

Till next time

Love
Cas 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deltadawn

ladki beautiful would go so well on Sumo.. bombshell u created..

👍🏼 awesome OS.



Thank you so much D! 😃
That song always reminds me of Sumo...*sigh*
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Shravan in a white dress shirt is your favourite look on him na sweetheart😉...

Mine too😳😳
Rang saawla would go so well on Sumo. ..could actually imagine her dancing on it. ..
And that ripped shorts beneath the kurti. ..swag man..
The number of times I have gone Awww on your different works...I might as well totally give up on sweets😆



Hey Reshma!

I don't know, but man there is something inherently sexy about Shravan in a white shirt

Haina?! That song just perfectly suits her!

You know I love sweets and I will take this as the biggest compliment that I have ever got 😆 😛

Thanks Resh for this comment...it means a lot 😳

Till next time

Love
Cas 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
awesome...
beautifully penned...
thanx for PM...😊

Edited by arshuaar - 8 years ago

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