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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

res

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unress

who puts all this in your mind.
is this utter crap then why did a stupid grin not leave my face while reading this one. get some brain human😕
thhis was actually really cute👏
must say not bad
sumo sumo hi rahegi
SHRAVAN MALHOTRA ARE YOU SERIOUS? Mene pura bhashan jhaad diya ye batate hue ki me tumse kitna pyaar karti hu or tum ek simple sa i love you bhi nahi bologe?
but the best line was
lagta h hum sab ke paas jald hi ek wedding invitation ayega

keep writting
love
arpita


Arpi ne daata *starts crying* but how sweet you are...thanks a lot chotu 😆 okay sorry...love you arpi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This really good thought... Story could have turned like this also in the show... But Shravan Malhotra tehra teda Malhotra where he will realise so early & easily.!..
U did good job... I love you bolne ke liye bhi kitna bashan sunana pada... Akal ke ande ko...

Keep writing

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Namiksfan


Arpi ne daata *starts crying* but how sweet you are...thanks a lot chotu 😆 okay sorry...love you arpi

Kya din aa gaye tere bacche se daant kha rahi hai.😭
Again chotu, ..tera update cancel🤢
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Pehle Toh mujhe ye samaj nahi aaya ke aap isse crap kaise bol sakte ho yaar... 😕
Aagar aagli Baar crap kaha Toh dekh lena tu... Khabardar Aise Cute se OS ko crap kaha Toh... Warna mera zehrili chidiya mode on Ho jaayega 😆
This was so so cute yaar...
Jis tarah aapne uss terrace scene ko recreate kiya... 👏 Fab yaar..
Dialogues were awesome... 👏
Do give us such fluff regularly.. 😉
Love,
ANU 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Seriously Dolly. ..the terrace scene was so special. ..I was actually expecting a confession there. . It was just apt a scene for Sumo to confess. ..and the way you have treated it is just wow...and he actually bought her a ring with his first salary ..that's supercute. ..please don't stop writing...let the sweet Shraman moments flow!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Wow dolly.. My don.. Lovely... Loved it thoroughly! And don't you dare...crap kaise bol sakti hai... Live you bae.. Please write more and more. Till then...🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ArpitaSingh1806

Kya din aa gaye tere bacche se daant kha rahi hai.😭
Again chotu, ..tera update cancel🤢


Sorry😭😭 update cancel mat kar pls...achi arpi h na?😆 aj k baad tujhe kabhi -- nahi bolungi (dekh abhi bhi nhi bola )
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: anukulgr8

Pehle Toh mujhe ye samaj nahi aaya ke aap isse crap kaise bol sakte ho yaar... 😕

Aagar aagli Baar crap kaha Toh dekh lena tu... Khabardar Aise Cute se OS ko crap kaha Toh... Warna mera zehrili chidiya mode on Ho jaayega 😆
This was so so cute yaar...
Jis tarah aapne uss terrace scene ko recreate kiya... 👏 Fab yaar..
Dialogues were awesome... 👏
Do give us such fluff regularly.. 😉
Love,
ANU 😳


Thanks a lot zehrili chidiya...and no aap pls...We are almost same age
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: reshmanair356

Seriously Dolly. ..the terrace scene was so special. ..I was actually expecting a confession there. . It was just apt a scene for Sumo to confess. ..and the way you have treated it is just wow...and he actually bought her a ring with his first salary ..that's supercute. ..please don't stop writing...let the sweet Shraman moments flow!!


I loved the scenes too...thanks a lot
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful OS... Terrace scene made me feel nostalgic...Wish shraman has confessed there itself...
Do write more

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