ShraMan OS : Little Things - Page 2

Originally posted by: anukulgr8

RES
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UNRESS

sorry for being late...laptop was juz stuck up..really sorry..😳
Congratulations for ur first OS.🤗..M first to comment...Iska matlab ye OS superhit hoga..😆
The OS was too good...fantastic..👏
Nirmala was so understanding...😊
Preeti n Shravan plan...👍🏼Yaha ke preeti smart hai...😆
Three expecctations from husband...Best friend mode active..That was cool..😃
Active in my husband mode..hayye..Shravu kinna cute hai..
need to perform husband duties as well 🤣Mauke pe chauka...😆
Bhukkad the bhukkad he rahoge...aagar na badala toh sumo ka shravan kaisa...😆
Over all Fabolous update...👏
Do write more...u r an amazing writer...👍🏼
Love,
ANU😊

Originally posted by: orion23

This is brilliant!

For your first work pretty damn good!

Very consistent with both characters here...

Loved the expectations bit and Shravan being in husband mode..

Keep the good work up!

👏

Originally posted by: Sunain

Tht was Fantastic ⭐️
beautifully penned! Loved it alot❤️
Best element of the story was tht expectation wala part..tht was outstanding..
Shravan realised his mistake n amended it soon..soo sweet of him.
Really loves the ending..was cute..bhukar thay bhukar hi rahoy gay😆
Really loved the way u potrayed their chemistry..was damn cute
😳
hope to get some more from u soon..keep writing dear 😉

Originally posted by: Namiksfan

Firstly welcome to the forum..and i really can't believe that this is your first piece because by your excellent writing skills it seems as if you are writing since ages..😆

Coming to the os...it was brilliant and i loved it and every part of it you fulfilled my wish of nirmala giving motherly gyaan to shravan ...so thanks for that...i really liked that shravan realised his mistake and ammended in such abeautiful way...this was beautifully penned...so this makes me asking you to write more on Shraman so pls do that...pls write more soon

-Dolly

Originally posted by: CarpeDiem_

Superb...!!

Amazing story... complete package !

Choti Choti khushiya aur tera mera saath,...👏

Liked nimmo ki daal for a change 😉 gyaan was so on point...😃

Laddo...dabboo...pretty preity ...cuteness!😛

Nanaji n shravu... game on point...😆 Nanaji rocks...

ShraManilacous!😳

Keep writing. . .😊