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Posted: 8 years ago
Firstly 🤗 for dedicating this to me .. I was excited to see the PM for update after so long & this is cherry on top .. I'm overwhelmed .. Thanku ..😊
Ya the words have the capacity to ruin things , the way he ruined ShraMan by those words in disc,similarly she hurt him by "faiyada utha rahe ho" coz she doesn't know many things and his underlying intention for forcing her for marriage ..

but the best part was she missed him,knows that she was harsh with her words & shouldn't have said that .. He was no better .. sleepless nights & his guilt & pain made it difficult for him too ..
But still I feel Sumo deserves an apology and thorough explaination,coz she did suffer a lot in all this tussle between Aditya,nanu & shravan whereas she only loved him unconditionally,infact she deserves a thanku too for she came as a breeze of fresh air,a ray of hope in his all broken heart and life;made his willpower strong enough that he could move again,he owes it to her .. Ofcourse these things will happen only when they both keep their egos aside,which is their biggest enemy ..

her mental convo is always best .. kyu dosto ne khana ni khilaya .. lgta hai ab sare furniture tod dega .. these were like 😊in all emotional scenes ..

His sassiness is no less that company ka faiyda utha ra hu to make her realise indirectly that he wasn't doing anything of that ..
The car journey was very emotional & the song added to misery reminiscing their beautiful moments of past😭
Urvashi's confession was a surprise package .. But they say rightly Karma is a bitch .. Glad that Sumo now knows the reason behind his outburst was her vile words .. But still it won't make him completely right/guilt-free coz he gotta trust his love & flow with ppl's instigation;he needed to talk about his insecurities to sumo & not hide it .. & see Aditya used his insecurities for his benefit ..
Atleast she made a start .. That part was romantic dude and cute too,he putting his hand to save her ⭐️(unique idea)
& that was funny her accepting not knowing dance & just to break ice she went ahead & asked him for it .. but "mai tumhe girne nahi dunga" stole hearts .. & dude everytime he twirled & left,she got scared of separation & "we can't break the pattern" how sweetly he reassured her ❤️ .. but I was having that feel that kuch toh hoga .. Who's this man .. Aditya ? Or someone else ?
(Dude,Infact the father-son duo are a lingering threat too..won't settle down so easily,coz after all he lusted over her & not loved her,so how wud his ego settle down until he quenches his thurst😡.. I hope Shravan saves her again,before the damage is done..)
All in all , a fantastic update this is ..👏
Edited by adityasingh.246 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Oww Shravan avoided her for 4 days kya ladka hai yeh khud bhi suffer karega saat mein Sumo ko bhi suffer kar raha tha.. She could seen dark circles around his eyes... His taunting uff apna company hai toh fayda toh nehin uta sakta na.. Party was going on full swing it was Valentine's Day party... Humari do love birds toh angry bird ho gaye hein... He hurted himself to save her from the nail. They were dancing well but who took Sumo away from there .. Was she kidnapped yeh kiska kaam ho sakta hai kahin Aditya toh nehin... Lagta hai usse apne aap ko pitwane ka bahut shauk hai... Shravan won't leave that person whoever tried to kidnap Sumo, woh banda ut jayega...
Nice update...

Thanks for PM

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wah !!wah kya chapter hai
Firstly shravan is ignoring suman like a hell
He is not sleeping and going to his room
And also not tallking to her , feeling sad for suman but she needs this silent treatment to understand what kind of gem shravan is ..
I like the ramnath and nirmala character in the story they are so mature and calm in the story unlike in the show
And that car part is too good from where their love story starts and slection of song is 👏
But i think is its alisha and akshay who are married but nevermind their conversation is too good now suman will realise shravan importance in her life
And when shravan hurt himself but not touch is wife is too heartbreaking 😭
And that dance part was mindblowing and again the song is mashalla for that situation
But at the end again cliffhanger 😭
Who is that person may be additiya
Or maybe shravan .. to surprise sumo !! Oh god mera romantic dimag but cant help it out ..kuch jayada lamba hoh gaya na
But plz update soon
Waiting for next
And all the best for your studies and exam
Much love
Tina

Edited by Tiiii28 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
beautifully penned...
loved it...
thanx for PM...😊
all the best for exam's
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Posted: 8 years ago
Finally u update I was waiting for this like hell.. Awesome and mind blowing it was but plss don't let anything wrong happen with sumo dear. Well u r amazing writer so I know shravan don't let happen wrong with her life sumo. Now with this twist will wait for next chapter. 😳 abhi to BAs intezar hi Kr skte hai 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
meri Juju behna!!!!!
🤗🤗🤗
kya update diya hai

picchlee waale update pe maine itna badha comment dala phir india forum ne mujhpar spamming ke charges laga diye 😭😭
3 baar likkha phir mera dimag kharaab ho gaya aur maine try bhi nahin kiya😆😆
but ye waala update was👏👏

pehle😭- ladhte hi rehte hain yaar
then 😕- yeh dono apni feelings ko bolte kyun nahi...i doubt both of them being mute
then the song part was❤️🥺 at the same time😆

then i developed an instant liking for alisha
"just try to make shravan happy" *sorry agar dialogue sahi nahi hai, tera writeup copy protect hai😆*

sumo ka dimaag thikaane par aa gaya
''may i have a dance with you??'' woh alag baat hai ki bandi ko dance karna nahi aata😛

koi nahi humaare Shravan ko to aata hai na
"main tumhein kabhi girne nahi dunga"

"mujhe tumhaare siwaye kisi ke saath dance nahi karna"

"mujhe bhi"

aa gaye dono line par😆😆

yeh acche khase dance main kaun kameeena aa gaya...mera bet aditya par hai
woh hi karata hai aise kaam, such a dog he is

badha maaza aayega jab Shravan din dahaadhe pitega usse, actually evening main party thi to raat ke sannate main pitega aditya 😃😃

mera comment ki length kuch zyada hi badh rahi hai...sweetu se inspire ho gayi main bhi😳😳

love
arpita

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Posted: 8 years ago
That was amazing sanj... Loved it.. Plz update soon ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
I loved Sumo's thought process in the beginning ;D she's funny!
The songs were matching the situations perfectly!
Bomb blast at the end like always 😆
All the best for your exams, rock them!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dhamakedhar update!!!
Lekin suspense mein tho chod diya...
So update soon...
But not on the expense of your studies...
All the best for your exams..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey bhaghu awesome update dear... Sooo cute. This is called love shikwa bhi aapse shikayat bhi aapse... Fir se wahi Hua " Na bole tum na Maine kuch kaha " . Rocking update dear

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