Better Half - ShraMan OS - Page 2

This is amazing👏👏

Lovely OS!!😳

amazing update
totally loved it
superb

Originally posted by: Nimik

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am from Dehradun!

Hey wow wow wow!!!!
😊

Originally posted by: crazy_vaish

This is amazing👏👏

Their thoughts as they get into this marriage are penned so beautifully.

Nothing has really changed, it still them Sumo and Shravan, the same family, same house yet something fundamental has changed between them and your write-up about it is fantastic bro!

Would love to read more from you.

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Thank you... Thank you... Thank you :)
Glad I could write that up...
ShraMan have known each other for a very long time...they are in love...but Marriage is something which will bring a radical change in their lives...
Very happy you liked it bro...
Will try and write when I feel about ShraMan for sure :)

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Lovely OS!!😳

Thanks for the pm😊

Glad you liked it dear...
Welcome :)

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

amazing update
totally loved it
superb

Thank you...thank you ...thank you...
Happy you loved it :)

Chestha I love your stories
Your take is so different from the show but lovely
Infact better than the show !!
This one was no exception
Absolutely fantastic 👏
Loved it!!!!
Thanks for the pm 😛

hey chestha...ur this os was lovely as others
..have read some of ur OS's ...
waiting for the day when they'll get married

.u beautifully penned their feelings, happiness, hesitance, emotions...loved ur os dear :)

Originally posted by: Faith28

That was a lovely read😊

:) :)
Glad you liked it dear