Imaginary episode #16

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello edkvians and shramanians 🤗

sunday night 😛 that means one more imaginary episode is on the way😉

So lets start our imaginary episode #16😃

this imaginary episode will be based on precap of imaginary episode #16

so here is the glimpse of the precap :

Shravan and Suman engaged in an intense, very intimate staring contest.

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try to include the precap in the imaginary episode #15

So its already 10 pm IST.

note :

1) this episode will end by 11 pm IST.

2) if you put a res for writing episode, then you will have only 5 min to write (unres) your part of story after previous res is unresed by other writer.

3)anyone can participate.

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res

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Shravan stood there trying to calm his rioting nerves. He was at a loss of words. Only one thought rang in his mind. Sumo wasn't happy, this jerk didn't deserve her, what do I do!

He looked up to see sumo staring intently at him. He couldn't decipher her right then. Was she angry? Was she confused at his behaviour? Was she upset he came to her rescue? Wait, is that a glint of tears forming in her eyes? Oh that Aditya is a dead man. He made his sumo cry. He's is going to pay... wait what? His sumo? Did he still claim her as his?

He just kept looking into her deep brown eyes. Oh he could drown. What surprised him was that she didn't tare away her eyes. As if drowning in his was taking away all her worries.

To anyone else who saw the two, the temperature had risen. Their orbs penetrating each others souls.

Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

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"Sumo"
She didnt reply
"Sumo" he called her again. Still no response
He shook her. She ran in his arms and hugged him tightly.
He was too shocked to react but hugged her back.
She sobbed clutching his shirt.
"I...I ...am sorry shravan " she said between her sobs.

He looked at her in disbelief. This girl was apologising him when she was not at fault. He was so blind in his rage he insulted her, called her names. He was so ashamed of himself.

"Sumo ...listen to me. You were never wrong. It should be me who must be apologising. I failed as a friend sumo. I failed. I didnt trust my best friend. I let you down . Sorry." He said .

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

I might be late . No chappals plzz 😆

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

RES

Ek aur res.. 😆 aj hum khush hai!

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"Nahi Shravan, tum galat nahi the.. galti meri thi. I pushed you away!"

"Sumo! After everything I did, everything I said, tum abhi yeh kahogi?"

"Haan shravan, kyunki tum aaise nahi ho. Tum kisi ka dil jaan kar kabhi nahi dukhate aur mai toh tumhari sumo hoon. Maine jo kia, tumhe bohot dard diya, tumne jo kia woh sirf us dard ka ehsaas tha, tum jo mehsoos kar rahe the, tum chahte the mai bhi mehsoos karoon"

Shravan had lost her at 'tumhari sumo'. Everything else after just made his heart soar higher and higher in an unending euphoria.

"Tumhari sumo" He breathe out

"Haan?" Sumo asked a bit bewildered.

"Tumne kaha, tumhari sumo." His eyes glittering with pride. "MERI SUMO?"

And blush crept up her face. Had she just admitted that to him? So easily?

Shravan kept looking on, "Kaho na.. meri ho tum?"

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Aj koi aa kyun nahi raha!

Come on people..

Join the bandwagon...

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Wiccamaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Suddenly he saw his reflection in her tears ... and blow of realization pierced his heart ... his Sumo. Only mine...

Everyone can see the calm rage on his face, when he took time to remove his watch ... Aditya will pay for my Sumo's tears by his blood ... in his bliend fury Aditya lost his image, courage and respect... in front of everyone including his mother ... no Sharavns's mother.

no one was able to stop him when ramnath requested Suman to stop him...

A simple tug on his arm and he stood still... its his love who is asking him to stop...