Shravan and Suman OS - S is for ... *UPDATED 24/08*

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys! I know this is long overdue and you guys may have forgotten but I've at long last written the OS, as promised. I've been getting anxious about GCSE results day hence why I've not uploaded anything. Results day is tomorrow so please keep me in your prayers/du'aas. Remember to leave your comments!! Lots of love, Fatiha x


SUMAN


"S is for the person I love most in this world! S is for..." I started but was cut off by Shravan who was stood at the door. He was staring at me intently, waiting for my answer. An answer that I couldn't give him.

"S is for Suman, right?" Aditya joked.

"Yeah, it is. Actually, I love myself. There's nothing wrong with that," I said, though it sounded more like a question.

LIAR! S IS FOR SHRAVAN, SHRAVAN MALHOTRA...

"Yeah, because that's the only person Suman Tiwari loves. HERSELF. She's the most egotistic, self-centered person you will ever meet. Tell me Aditya, how can someone so selfish have the capability to love anyone else?" he spat, smirking.

What? Is he serious? How can he say that?

"It's true though," he said as he walked off upstairs.

"One minute Aditya, I'm coming. Let me go and teach Qutub Minar a lesson," I said fuming.

"Okay, I'll just be here," he said awkwardly.



SHRAVAN


I knew I had gone too far. As soon as she looked at me like that, hurt and disappointed I knew I had said too much.

STUPID SHRAVAN!

I still walked away from her. Why?

I sat on my bed wondering when I saw her barging in my room.

DAMN SHRAVAN! SHE'S ANGRY...

"SHRAVAN MALHOTRA HOW DARE YOU? WHO DO YOU THINK YOU ARE? WHAT GIVES YOU THE RIGHT TO SAY THOSE THINGS TO ME?" she shrieked.

"Sumo, calm down. Look .." I said meekly before she cut me off.

"SELF-CENTERED? EGOISTIC? THAT'S WHAT YOU THINK?" she said, quivering.

"Sumo, I didn't mean it. I was just ..." I tried to explain.

"JUST WHAT SHRAVAN?" she yelled.

"I was jealous okay! I was jealous that you didn't write S for Shravan!" I replied.

"What? Seriously Shravan?" she asked with an emotion in her eyes that I couldn't fathom.

LOVE?

NO SHRAVAN! SHE DOESN'T LOVE YOU...

"I mean..." I attempted to say, but was cut off yet again.

THIS GIRL WON'T LET ME SPEAK...

"Shravan, actually the S is for ..." she mumbled.

"Who Sumo?" I asked, looking straight into her eyes.

"S IS FOR SHRAVAN! OBVIOUSLY S IS FOR SHRAVAN BECAUSE I LOVE YOU YAAR!" she yelled.

SHE LOVED ME?

SUMAN


Obviously that's not how I wanted to say it but at least it had now been said.

I LOVE SHRAVAN!

"Sumo, really?" he asked in a whisper.

"Since childhood Shravan. But if you don't feel the same then..." I mumbled as I attempted to turn around.

"Are you crazy? I LOVE YOU SUMAN TIWARI!" he declared.
As he had said it he instinctively grabbed my arm and pulled me in to a hug.

HE LOVES ME!

In return, I let my arms wrap around his torso and placed my head into the crook of his neck.

God knows how long we stayed like that, in each other's arms. But to us, it felt like home. This is what we had been waiting for.



Bheegi Bheegi Sadkon Pe Main, Tera Intezaar Karun
I'm waiting for You on the drenched streets
Dheere Dheere Dil Ki Zameen Ko, Tere Hi Naam Karun
I'm giving the land of my heart slowly slowly to You
(I'm dedicating my heart slowly slowly in Your name)
Khudko Main Yun Kho Doon, Ke Phir Na Kabhi Paoon
I want to lose myself in such a way that I can never be found again
Haule Haule Zindagi Ko, Ab Tere Hawaale Karun
I'm giving away my life slowly slowly to Your refuge

Sanam Re, Sanam Re, Tu Mera Sanam Hua Re
O my beloved! You have become mine (my love/darling/sweetheart)
Karam Re, Karam Re, Tera Mujh Pe Karam Hua Re...
This is all due to Your benevolence upon me
Sanam Re, Sanam Re, Tu Mera Sanam Hua Re...
O my beloved! You have become mine

Translation from: http://www.bollynook.com/en/lyrics/18395/sanam-re-title-song/

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Posted: 9 years ago
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TEASER:

S is for ...

SUMAN

"S is for the person I love most in this world! S is for ..."


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GUYS GO READ THE OS I JUST WROTE PLEASE!!

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