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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Hello everyone here is arpita with one more chapter of this TS . AND I really want to thanks Mitali for such a warm welcome and all d other people who praised the previous chapter 😳 . this will b a long chapter so before I start blabbering and boring u guys let's start.

Chapter 2

Shravan brings suman to the car and opens the door of the passenger seat for her .they both sit in the car but are lost in their own thoughts.

Shravan thinks while luking with a consoling at suman who luking outside the window of the car just to hide the tears that were threatening to fall.

:kyun sumo ,kyun tumne mujhe is kabil nahi samjha, kyun nahi bataya mujhe ki tum mujhse itna ..

His thoughts were disturbed by sumo who sumhow found the courage to speak

:shravan abhi andar to bada keh rahe the ki main apne bhai ki shaadi main koi bhi deri nahin karna chahta' ab kya gadi mahurat khatm hone par chalaoge and she chuckled a bit to ease the depressed atmosphere.

When he came out of his thoughts he said in an amusing manner

:soch raha hun ki tumhe driving license kisne diya

Sumo in a bit of shock -kyu abhi to main drive bhi nahi kar rahi

He points towards her seatbelt ,she luks in the direction he is pointing and realizes that she hadn't put her seatbelt and smiled back at him finding him nowhere on the seat but leaning on the dashboard of her side of the seat to put the seatbelt , she felt nervous , as he is too close and says

:main kar lungi and removes his hand in a hurry

A sad expression appears on his face as he sits back on his seat and again luks at her sorrowfully and the sad edkv instrumental plays in the background during the whole scene. Then he finally starts the car on her signaling him to.

Sumo stares at shravan and the sumo song (zindagi kahan kahan se) plays ,for a while and the guglu incident comes to her mind how shravan was jealous when she flirted with shravan, when they were constantly speaking to each other and a smile appears on her face but this beautiful memory was diminished when the memory of ramnath telling her to stay away from shravan rose fresh in her mind ,the feeling was just like someone had scratched old wounds and her smile changes into a sorrowful face which doesn't have any hope for its future. She luks around the car and then shravan and starts thinking to herself

:shaayad yeh aakhri baar hai jab hum iss tarah mil rahe hain, shayad yeh aakhri pal hai jo tum mere saath ho and she luks at her mehendi in which S & S is written and her thoughts cum back to her aur yeh shaayad ek yaad jinhe main zindagi bhar sahej akr rakhungi.

Shravan luks at her to ask to ask her sumthing about the custom of the pherro ki chunni to end the awkward silence, just then he sees her looking rather glaring at her mehendi and he also notices the S & S right in the middle of her palm timid palm ,he smiled and asked her

:accha sumo kal tum mehendi lagwa rahi thi na, to tumne kisika ka naam likhwaya

She in hurry turned her palm to the opposite side and wipes the silent tear on her face that just escaped and says

:nahi, kyu

Shravan continues in a mischievous manner

: kuch nahin bas voh abhi tumhaare haath par S & S likha dekha

Suman is finding for an ans and after a while says

:voh toh suman & sumo, mere dono naam, voh kya kehete ho tum main bohut (thinks for a while) haan, self-obsessed hoo na and hides her weeps by a sheepish smile. Shravan also responds with a smile and thinks to himself

:self-obsessed voh bhi tum jaisi ladki apne parivaae ki khushi le liye apne pyaar ko chod sakti hai who kabhi self-obsessed nhi ho sakti aur voh suman & sumo nahi suman & shravan hai jaanta hu main

He was looking at her with so much love that he couldn't hide or ignore his feeling any more , his motive of bringing her with him

:sumo, main janta hoon dad ne tumhaare aur mom ke saath kya kiya ,in a shaking yet confidant voice.

It takes time for sumo to process what she just heard and then luks at shravan I shock only to find him weeping and seeing shravan who was the ever strong person for her in this state made her throat clench with pain and to comfort him she kept her hand on his ,which was holding the gear with as tight as possible which made him luk towards his only support sumo.

Back to the wedding venue

Manju - are bhai ,ye suman chunni laane gai hai ya silne, yahan mahurat nikla jaa raha hai aur madam ko kuch hosh hi nhin (in frustration and anger)

Sameer - manju kya bol rahi ho pataa yahan se ghar kitni dur hai aarahi hogi (being protective about his niece)

Everyone is worried and concernt about shraman then kamini say in a loud tone (because she wanted her words to reach to ramnath who was sitting at a quiet distance)

:arrey aap log chinta mat karo shravan puttar he na suman puttar ke saath vo rakh lega uska khyaal

Her words didn't go unheard not only by ramnath but also everyone in the hall. Pushkar got an thought about shraman and mumbled to himself with a mischievous smile

: der to hogi hi saath main jo hain dono akele (stressing on the last word a bit too much)

Just then the pandit announced that ther was only 1 hour left in the mahurat to end. Then everyone started panicking especially manju. She started searching for the medicine for headache as her head was blasting with stress of the wedding and then she cursed the ancestors for making a rule that the pherro ki chunni will be brought by by ladki walas

:are batao kya zarurat thi bade - buzurgo ko ye reet bannane ki bhai ladki wale hi pherro ki chunni laenge ab na bani hoti ye reet to kam se kam hamari beti ki shaadi me der to na hoti

Will finding the medicine her eagle like eyes went towards something under the bags and there she found the white bag under all the bags, she hurriedly opened the zip of the bag in this process the chain broke and preekar smiled at each other on this gesture of hers and when finally she opened the bag there was the pherro waali chunni in it for which there was such a big controversy. Sameer and the other members of the finally looked at her annoyingly, to which manju had no ans as it was actually her mistake.

Sameer - kya manju tum bhi ek baar dekh to leti bhej diya dono bechaaro bachcho ko itni raat ko .

In all the previous occurrences when half an hour passed away no one got to know so the pandit gave the final call for the bride and the groom

Sameer - chalo ab suman ya shravan ko phone lagao

Pushkar as soon as he heard it acted like he was on phone with shravan

:haan bhaiya ,kahan ho aap hum sab aapka aur sumo ka intezaar kar rahe hain ,accha apana aur sumo ka dhyaan rakhna

He said all the lines giving space in between as if shravan was answering his questions on the other end and he also acted according to the things he spoke and that made both the families to belive on his lie to save his bhai and best friend

Lalaji in a questioning tone : ki hua puttar shravan aur suman puttar khan reh gaye

Pushkar: lalaji ,voh bhaiya ka phone ayaa tha ki main sab ko bata du ki un logo der ho jaegi kyonki gadi kharab ho gai he aur unke phone ki battery abhi khatam hone vaali thi to unhone phone karkar batta diya taaki koi chintaa n kare aur vo keh rahe the ki unki wajah se shaadi main koi der na kare

Pushkar's explanation was convincing enough to the family so he kind of saved shraman from questions yet preeti opposed in a disappointed manner

:lekin suman di ke bina ...

Pushkar stops her to speak further by pinching her after wihich she gave him an angry luk and he winks at her naughtily she didn't get much but nods ok confusingly. The marriage happens successfully they come to take the blessings of the elders all of them were standing were standing in a line suddenly shraman appear with their hands intertwined and much of confidence and they stood in the que of the people preekar were taking blessings of ,they mistakenly take their blessings too and they smiled at each other as if no one else existed in world.

So here was another part of this TS😊

I really want to say SORRY for a few reasons:-😆😭

If u find the chapter too long its just bcoz im diagnosed with high fever hence im on medical leave from school so all day long im just typing and typing on my phone.

If you think the main leads do not speak much, its bcoz the basic character shraman can understand each other so well that even without speaking their heart out they both know wat the other is going through.

If u think preekar wedding was a bit rushed ,it was bcoz I just wanted to concentrate on shraman in the next part and not he wedding .

And the last sorry bcoz I could not reply to all the comments individually , bcoz I still have to catch up on these contents of IF.

I hav written all the parts but if there are any suggestions pls mention I'll try inculcating them in the next chapter. And I'm also sorry if u got bored to listen to my chit-chat .

Regards,

Arpita⭐️

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12

Hello everyone im back to the forum and back to health. And now I present to u the last part of this TS. And sorry for the inconvenience caused due to my stupidity and this is regarding posting the previous chapter. This chapter will be the longest one so pls bear with me.

The venue of the wedding

Shraman have reached the venue at the time when preekar are taking blessings of the elders and they also stand in the line of people preekar were taking blessing off. Unknowingly they also touch the feet of shraman and they realize that its them and they laugh hugging and shraman simultaneously and shraman together say

: sada sukhi raho mere baccho

And they luk at each other in amazement as they speak exactly same words at the same time. Everyone noticed the laugh of preekar and shraman and the way shraman were smiling at each other made pushkar and preeti to pinch them to reality. Shraman together

:ouch

Shaam:oh shravan puttar ji gadi thik ho gayi

Shravan in confussion :kaunsi gadi (and he noticed puskar's face and his restlessness)and thenn he said haan voh gaadi garam ho gayi thi, jaise hi thandi hui to hum aagaye (holding hands with sumo and especially luking towards ramnath in a disappointed manner)

Ramnath gets curious to know what happened between the two that they luk so confident yet faked smile.

And then seeing the happy atmosphere around him shravan lowered his gaze and continued chattering with pushkar

:thanku bachaane ke liye AND SIGHS nahin to gharwaale Sherlock holmes ban kar jaan hi nikal dete

The hands of shraman were still intertwined and puskar noticing it asked teasingly

:vese bhaiya sach batao bhaiya aap dono 3 ghanto tak kar kya rahe the akele (stressing on the last word a bit longer)

At this sumo wacked his arm

Pushkar-ouch sumo tu bhi na, ab main officially tera jija ban chukka hun kuch to izzat de aur ab ye maarna-waarna band kar

Preeti trying to fake anger :haan suman didi, kahan the aap mere shaadi bhi miss kar di

Sumo narrawed her eyes and said : shaadi huye ek din nahin hua abhi se hi pati ki haan main haan

Preeti blushed at this.

Shravan: aahan sumone is blushing

They all chuckle at preeti's innocence

Pushkar-lekin bhaiyaa seriously they kahan aap dono

Shraman luk at each other in the eye and recall the event

When shravan stopped the car and sumo held his hand and he was in tears. His tears were of anger, pain, betrayal and what not. Her throat clenched at this sight. She couldn't see her love, her shravan break like that. She had witnessed a similar sight when he heard the news of his dad's death but this time it was even worse. However she managed to get him out of the car ,she was also in tears but she knew she had to keep strong to support him in his time of need. They both were now out of the car. Sumo was still holding his hand as she knew that if she would leave him he'll break into a million pieces.

Sumo had her eyes full of tears dropping down on her face one by one. But she still gathered herself enough to comfort him

:shravan, kuch bolo pls baat karro mujhse, shravan main hun tumhaare paas, tumhaare saath tumhaari sumo

The tumhaari sumo' part caught his attention and luked at her with teary eyes with an expression of defeat and no hope. Now he finally spoke in a voice which conveyed nothing but sorrow and defeat.

:sumo papa mere saath aisa kaise kar sakte hain, maine aaj tak unki saari baatain maani, saari expectations par khara utra aur unhone...mujhe meri maa se hi dur kar diya sirf apni insecurities apni eo ki vajah se...mujhe vishvaas nhin hota ki papa jinhain main duniya main sabse zyada pyaar karta hun, sabse zyada trust karta hun, voh mujhe tumse mere pyaar se meri zindagi se dur kar sakte hain.

At that point sumo realized that he just confessed his love but in the worse of situations. She knew he needed her but was to numb to ask or to even realize wat he said. She just pulled him into a hug and tuk him into her embrace. One of her hands was around his shoulders and one in his hair trying to calm him down. He also reciprocated her hug and hugged her as tight as he could. She felt sight pain in her muscles as his tight arms tucked her petit body. Shravan felt a bit relived just after telling her about his pain. And he spoke

:aur sumo us din jab tum aur maa mujhe sach batana chaah rahe the maine tumhaari baat nhn maani aur maa ko kitna burra kaha, tumhe bhi kitna kuch sunaya, uss Aditya ki wajah se tumhaare baare main kitna burra soccha aur inn saalo main maa ke baare main kitna burra socha, tum dono mujhe kabhi maaf nahin karoge aur main deserve bhi nahin kar karta tum logo ke saath rehna, jo log meri khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain unpe maine ...

He was prompted by sumo

:bas ssshhh, kitna bologe aur mujhe bolte ho ki main kitna bolti hun (shravan smiled, that's the power of sumo she can make him smile even in the toughest of situations)shravan situations buri hoti hain insaan nhin tumse nafrat karvai gai hai ismain tumhaari koi galti nahin hai aur tumhaari maa tumse bohot pyaar karti hain vo kabhi tumse nafrat nhin kar sakti aur rahi baat meri main tumse hamesha se hi payaar karti thi aur hamesha karti rahungi aur jahan pyaar hota he vahan nafrat ki koi jagah nhin hoti Mr. Lawyer (and hits his forehead playfully) aur mera shravan kya deserve karta hai voh to voh bhi nahin bhi nhin janta pls jaake usse batao

They both had big smiles on thier faces. They parted from their hug but hey were still too close, they could even hear each other's heartbeat. Shravan had forgotten all his worries ,all his tensions and opened his heart in front of her and with the biggest smile he spoke

:I luv u sumo... I always had and will be loving u forever and ever, to banogi meri humsafar?

Sumo was so happy, so spell bounded that she couldn't say anything but just nod in positivity. As soon as her response came shravan pulled her into a bone crashing hug and tears of happiness escaped her eyes. They didn't know for how long they stood like that and the silence of the roads and the coolness of the breeze made it even more difficult to guess and showed them their way towards eternal luv. Sumo finally moved a bit away yet they were in a side hug. Then sumo finally asked drawing back her way from their world of rainbows and sunshine into reality. And asks on a serious note but still in a calm way sit that he doesn't loses his cool

:shravan tumhain iss sab ke baare main patta kesse chala

A frown replaces the smile on his face as he told her about the incident the flashback played

:shravan was pissed off to see Aditya flirting with suman and wanted to calm down himself and went to take sum water and sum friends of pushkar caught him and asked him to come along with them. He was hesitant but they tuk him along with them, they unknowingly sat on a table near the table where ram and kamini were discussing about shravan. All the others were busy playing truth and dare but he was least interested in it so he excused himself and started walking towards lalaji, but before that he saw his dad and called out: papa

But as ramnath was discussing sumthing with kamini he didn't heard shravan. Shravan was facing their back so he went closer now he was about to call his dad but he stopped at the place he was standing when he heard something fishy and his expression changed into a questioning one (the discussion)

Kamini :bhaisaabh aap samajh nahi rahe hain shravan puttar suman ki taraf khicha chala jaa raha hai

Ramnath :kamini tum nahi janti ki main shravan ko kitni acchi tarah se janta hun, voh chaahe usse jitna bhi pyaar karle jab mujhmain aur ussmain se use koi ek chunna pade to voh akhain band karke mujhe chunlega. Jaise Nirmala ko uski zindagi se bahar nikala tha usshi ka vaasta dekar, aur uss becchare ko to ye pata bhi nahi hai k uski maa uske liye hi chod kar gai thi. Jab Nirmala uski maa hokar usse mujhse dur nahin kar pai to ye suman kya chiz hai, bechaari pushkar and preeti ki shaadi ke liye khud ke pyaar ke baare main ek second ke liye bhi nahin soccha. Hoti hi hai kucch aurte saari zindagi apni family aur apni self-respect ke liye jeeti hai

Kamini:lekin bhaisaabh apne dekha nhin tha suman ko jab shravan ka kuch pata nhi chal raha tha kaise jaan nikal gayi thi uski.

Ramnaath:haan jab baat kuch aur thi lekin in dinno dekha nahi kaise shravan se bhaag rahi he, kaise use hurt karne ki koshish kar rahi he, uss din caf bhi mere kehne par nhin gai thi

Kamini:bhaisaabh man gaye aap ko bhi

And ramnath on his face and a kamini had a smile of disgust. They both left the area. They both didn't notice shravan. A shravan who just heard the deepest truth of his life, shravan who was about to breakdown, a shravan who was shattered, a shravan who wanted to forget everything. He immediately needed to sit or he will fall down and sat on the nearest chair, he had his breath racing faster than the winds. He closed his eyes and all the places sumo tried to hurt him, he saw the pain in her eyes which was masked by fake anger. And her face came into picture ,he needed her, he needed her, he needed his life back ,he needed his sumo back. But he was brought out of his tradegy by vandy

:shravan tum yaha kya kar rahe ho, sab tumhaara bahar intzaar kar rahe hain aur tum yaha par baithe ho

Saying this she pulled him with her. He wasn't ready to face the crowd but when he saw his sumo he found the strength and she was the first person who deserved to know the truth

***Flashback ends ***

She hugged him very tight seeing the anger on his face. He asked her while he reciprocated her hug

:accha sumo should I forgive papa ()

Sumo: haan(without a scond thought)

he asked confusingly:sumo yeh tum keh rahi ho jiske saath dad ne itna burra karra

Sumo said with confidence evident in her voice :haan shravan yeh main keh rahi hun kyonki uncle ne jo bhi kiya isliye kiya kyonki unhe apni past ki galtiyon ki wajah se tumhain khone ka darr tha aur khone ka darr hume sirf uska hota hai jisse hum pyaar karrte hain aur phir unhone tumhaari parvarish main koi kami bhi to nhi hone di, hamesha tumhaare liye best kiya he na?

Shravan nodded in positivity and was amazed that sumo after having so many conflicts with dad still is taking his side. He was so proud to hav someone like her in his life and he could do nothing just smile at her proudly.

Sumo : kya hua?

Shravan: kuch nahin, bas soch raha tha ki sabko kesse batau humaare baare main ?

Sumo blushed but managed to speak

:voh hum jaake preekar se poochenge unke paas zarur koi na koi idea hogaa, aur haan unki shaadi thi aaj,hell pagal emotional kar diya na ab jaldi challo nahi toh gharwaale CID ko phone kar denge. Chuckles

Shravan was so amusingly watching sumo talk like a small child watches his favorite cartoon. They both drove back to the venue

They were pulled back into reality by their cousins who were too bored to see the duo staring at each other. They actually sprinkled some water on their faces, then the duo came out of their dreamland.

Aaah Preeti ,aah pushkar were the voices of the two that came together.

Pushkar: toh batau

Shravan : kya

Pushkar: kya kiya aap dono ne tin ghanto tak

Sumo: kissi aur din puskar bohot lambi kahani hai.(Smiles looking at shravan)

Maamiji shouted-chalo baccho ab Bidaai ka time ho gaya hai sab aa jao (with moist eyes)

The Bidaai ceremony takes place. All the people from the maternal side are in tears. Shravan couldn't bear sumo crying so he came by her side and tuk her by her hand and came on stage. Everyone luks towards them. Shravan takes a mic and starts speaking to the crowd:

Isse pehle ki aap log yahan par Ganga-Yamuna baha do mere paas aap sab ke liye ek khush khabri hai

All the lights were turned off only the spot light was on which pointed towards shraman. Shravan instructed pushkar to give him a small box to him. Sumo already had tears in her eyes but her widest smile made way on her face.

Shravan: toh madam bachpan ke dost hain to tum to mujhe jaanto hi ho, mujhse voh typical hindi film wala proposal nhi diya jaata

Everyone smiled at this line of shravan even sumo by this time had a tear or two dropped down to her cheek.

Shravan continued:sumo London jaane ke baad tumse nafrat ki, tumhain bhulane ki kitni koshish ki lekin kabhi aise kar nhin paaya.(he is repeating his lines from the preeti bhoj)

And he sat on his knees and continued:kyonki kuch hai hamare beech jo iss duniya ka sabse pyaara ehssas hai...pyaar (this time he said pyaar instead of dosti) to Miss. Suman Tiwari banogi Mrs. Suman Shravan Malhotra?

And took out the solitaire ring from the box and presented it to suman sho is gonna bcum his sumo forever. Suman was too overwhelmed to say anything so she just nodded in positivity, with her eyes oozing out with tears of happiness. And shravan sliped the ring onto her finger. And finally rose but they were stil hoding hands. Everyone clapped for them. They both were luking at each other's eyes as if nothing else in world existed. Everyone present there was genuinely happy for them except for ramnath (he had afrown on his face and a feel of defeat appeared on his face so he left the venue). No one was shocked at the happening as everyone knew that something was cooking between the two. Pushkar finally came to the stage and tuk the mic from shravan

:to ab bhaiya ne finaly apne dus saal purine pyaar ka izhaar kar hi diya (in a teasing tone) ab bhaiya aaj maine kya keh diya ki sumo aapki kya lagti hai aapne to propose hi kar diya kaash pehle hi boldeta pure din usko yaad yay a saari raat uski photo to na dekhte rehte, sumo behen purre din teri saari hiccups ka reason bhaiya hi hain ,kya bhaiya aap bhi bechaari sumo ko kitne hiccups dilla diye honge

Sumo was blushing so hard putting tomato to shame and shravan was feeling embarrassed and he said

:tu ruk chotte

He started running after pushkar and hid behind sumo:sumo bacha ter siwai bhaiyaa abhi kisi kin hi baat nhi manange

Shravan came towards sumo and found pushkar hiding behind sumo

Shravan: sumo tum hatto iski to aaj main khabar leta hun

Trying to catch him putting his hands to work. But pushkar pulled sumo in front of him wherever he went.

Sumo to shravan in a playful tone: khabardaar mere jijaji ko tang kiya to

She looked at pushkar and winking at him and giving him a thumbs up.

Pushkar proudly :saali power at its greatest (showing his tongue to shravan)

Shravan trying his best to be angry

:jija ko bacha rahi hai pati ko chodd kar

He murmured loudly so that sumo hears it. She chuckled at his childishness.

Sumo held pushkar with his ear and then twisted it and brought him to the in front.

Pushkar groaned: aaahh, sumooo

Sumo had a playful smile on her face and said: aur yeh hai mere pati sorry future pati ko chadhane ke liye

Shravan proudly said: patni power at its greatest (pulled sumo with her hand and twirled her around and now her back leaned on his chest) voh sir meri hai, sirf meri.

Pushkar: haan bhaiya sumo sirf aapki hai koi use aapse dur nahi kar raha koi madam ko do minute ghur, le aap aise dekhte ho jaise abhi ka jaoge dur karne ki baat to dimaag main aa hi nhin sakti kis ko apni shaamat laani hai.

Vandy was like they are : so sweet and so romantic and varun tum toh neem chada bittergourd. All laugh.

So finally it a wrap with the TS's last part. I didn't focus on the ramnath chapter as the chapter was already too long. Im not gonna say "the end" and coz sum stories never do. Pls tell me should I also write an epilogue.

Hope u like it.

Regards,

Arpita 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello Arpita welcome to the forum
Nice ..Lovely update
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