Imaginary Episode #11

zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

@puba

Wow..brilliant start ..really i loved it...there was everything in that small scene...very well written ..👏

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potterginny

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: sapphire3
Unressed my part.
Puja your writeup is outstanding 👏
Amazing start!!!
@ yagneshri you are back 🤗
Sorry for the typos guys

Puja, Priyam and Mitali! Great job girls!

Yeah Priyam!🤗
I missed this place..

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Shivangee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Unres on page 1
Yagneshri Go ahead

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@priyam

Now i want to strangle you for bringing adi to disturb shraman moment 🤣,.sorry just kidding

Btw, nicely written..nothing could have been better than this interruption to give a new side to this scene ..well done 👏

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Puja Bagchi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sapphire3
Unressed my part.
Puja your writeup is outstanding 👏
Amazing start!!!
@ yagneshri you are back 🤗
Sorry for the typos guys

Thanks hon! Your part was sooo realistic...something the CVs would certainly do if Shraman are intimate! 😛

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

@mitthu

Adi suman convo was cute..thank god his has some sense that shraman wanted to talk to each other..

Again shravan is sad 🥺

Bahut acha likha mitthu 👏

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@shivi

Haaye, shravan peck on sumo's cheek ☺️..shivi tussi kamal kar ditta i love this scene

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zindgidilse

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Posted: 9 years ago

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a confused sumo could not understand his words but she was hoping her internal voice does not come true which is echoing internally that he understood her feeling for him..her LOVE for him because his smile was saying a million silent words which she can only understand.,.their eyes were fixed on each other ..neither one is trying to break their eye contact as if they will lose these feelings if any of them diverted their attention from each other...they don't wanted to lose this moment which was creating an atmosphere of silent love ...an atmosphere that consists their love in their eyes and his smile...

This moment broke down when a tear left its place from her eye...shravan could not see sumo's eye in the tear and he reached near her and wiped the tear of her face as soon as it sheds.,.sumo was at lost of words seeing his love for herself that didn't allow him to see a single tear drop in her eyes..

their eyes again met...but this time to confess their feelings..

precap :

Shravan cupped her cheeks and said "sumo bol kyu nhi deti jo bolna chahti ho..kyu apne dil ki baat zubaan tak aane se rok rahi ho..."

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Ammiey

Priyam di how u unres your part between the other replies in previous pages???
Btw your part was really awesome n so was mitali di's n puja did very well👏

Hey! Thank You😳

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