Love will find a way- A shraman OS - Page 3

Priyammm 🤗 , luv u jaani thanku , thanku , thanku that's exactly how I envisioned it , the car break down , sumos outburst the love just luv everything u pen down everything perfectly . Thanku again for doing this u r one amazing writer

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I really should go to sleep now. I'm not a fan of RESing but I don't want to wake up and forget about this and miss an amazing ShraMan story. 😛

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WOW Priyam
Such a beautiful, BEAUTIFUL story! :')
Shravan being jealous is so adorable! 😳
And the confession was so thought out and written I was just
Amazing story and brilliant writing, Priyam!
Keep more of them coming 🤗

absolutely brilliant
totally awesome
loved it

This was really nice

This is amazingly beautiful Priyam🤗

How do you manage to come up with such beautiful piece always?I loved,loved loved it completely.You are brilliant darling.

Jealous Shravan is a treat to watch. I've already started visualizing the dance sequence. Sumo in Red and black saree and Shravan in Black sherwani and the song...aur kya chahiye hume.

Sumo ki concern Shravan keliye and her fear of losing her loved ones. Ramnath ki guilt.Sumo in angry mode and their cute banter

And the confession OMG! I so wish to see this actually happen in the show...My most favorite part❤️

Priyam, 🤗

Originally posted by: SleepyPsycho

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Priyam Di😳

This was the magic I was talking about.

Such a beautiful OS.

You never fail to surprise us with such things.

I loved each and every bit of it,jealous Shravan,guilty Ramnath,broken and confident Sumo.

I loved how the proposal took place.Sumo rocked it and I loved the dialogue where Shravan said ambassador mein Ferrari ke speed se ayi ho😆

"Kuch cheezein ko suljhane ki koshish nhi karni chahiye. Unhe suljhane ki koshish me humari zindagiyan aur ulajh ke reh jati hain" These lines are beautiful.Stole the OS for me.

Keep Writing.

Eeshaal Thanks for the idea😳

Aww your comments always make me blush 😳
Thank u sooo much bachcha 🤗
I really want sumo to confess first...bande ne bda intezar kiya hai uska
I knew u wud love those lines...again telepathy 😛
Thanks again sweetu ❤️

Originally posted by: -AnnieQueen-

Priyam my love 🤗
This was absolutely ShraManlicious 😃
OMG!!! That sizzling dance and combination of red and black.
I'm already imagining they would look super hot!☺️
And then she hurt him again 🥺
Poor ShraMan
Bloody Ramu 😡
And then Sumo in search for her love
Awww that was so emotional 😭
Poor Sumo her fear of loosing her loved ones 😭
And they confessed 🥳
Hahaha Sumo is so cute when she's angry 😆
Arey baap re!!! Ramu ki mind change!!! 😲
I hope this happens in the show though I know it won't 🥱
Love u loads for this beautiful ShraMan piece 🤗
❤️

Riyu my darling 🤗
I wish sumo wears a saree .. she wud look smoking hot
Ramu is a certified kameena but i thought why not give him a chance of redemption
Thank u sooo much for your lovely comments 😛
Love you ❤️

Originally posted by: mineforever

Loved,loved ,loved it Priyam.. 😳
Show par toh kuch aata nahi hai ..OS par kar hi dil behelana padta hai.. 😆

Thanks alot ayesha 😃
Hum bhikhariyon ke naseeb me os ki hi khushi hai 😆 😆

Originally posted by: aanvi98

This was super amazing dear! Loved it!😳

Thanks a lot dear!!