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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello edkvians
It was fun yesterday writing imaginary episode #6

and today we are here with precap of yesterday IMAGINARY EPISODE #6 - BAATEIN KUCH ANKAHI SI😃


Here is the

Precap:
Sumo says she will drop Shravan home since she got him here.
They set out. Torrential rains. Sumo's not so faithful car breaks down.
Shraman have a moment!





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Try to include the precap in the imaginary episode #7 with no precap 😆
coz next week we will continoue with friday precap😉



Ps : anyone can participate



Its 10 pm IST..LETS START 😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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RES!!
_________

UNRES!

Shravan and Suman sat there for a while, lost in each other, when a shrill noise broke them out of their bubble.

"Sumo, tumhara phone."

"Ha-Haan? Oh haan... Hello, ji Nanu, haan, ji, ji aa rahi hoon."

"Kya hua? Sab theek toh hai?"

"Haan, hume chalna chahiye, ghar pe sab wait kar rahe hai."

Shravan paid for the coffees, Sumo didn't oppose. He for one took it as a matter of pride. First she didn't pull away her hand and then she let me pay. Shravan Malhotra, you're in luck.

"Chalo, kya khade khade soch rahe ho?"

"Kahan?"

"Chaand pe, chaloge?"

"Huh?"

"Duffer, tumhe ghar chod deti hoon, lekar bhi mai hi aayi thi na! Pata nahi lawyer kaise ban gaye" Rolling her eyes.

"Haan haan theek hai"

Shravan sat in the car and they set off to their destination. Sumo put on the radio, given that it was raining pretty bad, all radio stations were playing monsoon music. "Baahon ke darmiyaan, do pyaar mil rahe hai..." Shravan smiled mischievously while Sumo changed the station.

"Tip tip barsa paani, paani mai aag lagai"

By now Shravan was in splits and Sumo shot daggers through her eyes😆
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I am really Sorry cannot participate today. Early to bed early to rise
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I m not participating in writing but eagerly w8ing for U guyz to write 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I've unresed..
Go for whoever wants to continue!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Since no ones here
Res

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Unressed!

Yeh radio waale bhi naa! Hmph! , she told.
Shravan giggled at her puffy face. Thank god some of the Sumo was still left!
As they turned round the next corner, the car stopped with a jolt.

Chuk chuk chuk!

Sumo tried to start it but in vain.
She banged her hand on the steering wheel.
Shit, she mumbled.
Shravan rolled his eyes at that. Her frantic clutch was its own master and decided to break down anytime it wanted.

Lightning struck fiercely as Sumo wondered what to do next. She was sweating due to the closed car and also because it was time for her medicine.
Her claustrophobia plus overdue of her dose was sickening her.

She mindlessly opened the door and stepped out, only to meet with a thundering splash which drenched her every inch.

"Sumo!", shouted Shravan. He was annoyed at her antics. He stepped out without a second thought.
Edited by Artist_Forever - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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After the date, Shravan calls his driver and asks him to get his car. But he is informed that the car has been crashed by another car and hence it has been taken to a garage. Shravan gets tensed as he has a meeting in half an hour and has to reach office immediately. Sumo offers to help him and he accepts the offer as that is the only thing he can do now.
On the way, Sumo's car comes to a halt and doesn't start. She gets down to fix the problem but is unable to understand anything. So Shravan gets down and just when he is about to look into the engine, it starts raining cats and dogs. He is about to ask Sumo for the keys when he sees water droplets kissing her face. How he wished that he was the droplet on her red lower lip! She turned to him and saw him staring at her without a blink. There was no one on the street except them. He cupped her face and placed a kiss on her forehead. Her body burnt in the cool weather. He pulled her by the waist and sucked the water droplets on her face. She shivered against his touch and encircled her arms around his neck. Unable to take it any more, Sumo buried her head in his chest and listened to his heartbeat. He hugged her tightly. They stood still for a while, relishing each n every second. The broke apart and Shravan leaned forward towards her rosy, trembling lips. She closed her eyes, giving into him. Their lips were about to meet when Shravan realised what he was going to do and broke apart. He went away from there, all drenched. Sumo stood there for a while, unable to digest all that had happened a few seconds back. She blushed hard and thanked God for giving her a lovely bliss in the form of rain.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nimik

After the date, Shravan calls his driver and asks him to get his car. But he is informed that the car has been crashed by another car and hence it has been taken to a garage. Shravan gets tensed as he has a meeting in half an hour and has to reach office immediately. Sumo offers to help him and he accepts the offer as that is the only thing he can do now.

On the way, Sumo's car comes to a halt and doesn't start. She gets down to fix the problem but is unable to understand anything. So Shravan gets down and just when he is about to look into the engine, it starts raining cats and dogs. He is about to ask Sumo for the keys when he sees water droplets kissing her face. How he wished that he was the droplet on her red lower lip! She turned to him and saw him staring at her without a blink. There was no one on the street except them. He cupped her face and placed a kiss on her forehead. Her body burnt in the cool weather. He pulled her by the waist and sucked the water droplets on her face. She shivered against his touch and encircled her arms around his neck. Unable to take it any more, Sumo buried her head in his chest and listened to his heartbeat. He hugged her tightly. They stood still for a while, relishing each n every second. The broke apart and Shravan leaned forward towards her rosy, trembling lips. She closed her eyes, giving into him. Their lips were about to meet when Shravan realised what he was going to do and broke apart. He went away from there, all drenched. Sumo stood there for a while, unable to digest all that had happened a few seconds back. She blushed hard and thanked God for giving her a lovely bliss in the form of rain.

Hon you were supposed to res and continue after me... it's okay.. il adjust this.. if you want to write more, please res after whoever is currently writing!
Edited by orion23 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry darling!!
Actually I saw you post after I had finished writing!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: orion23

Hon you were supposed to res and continue after me... it's okay.. il adjust this.. if you want to write more, please res after whoever is currently writing!

i think first paragrapgh should be deleted and let the second para continue except @bold after yours first comment of story..
Edited by zindgidilse - 9 years ago

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