Ignore se Insult Tak: Shravans journey.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ignored you; thats what you did to me.

Indulged you; you did the same to me.

Insulted you; I do believe in returning favours.

I don't care?- I happen to, whether I like it or not.

Insult you again?- I don't need to.

Consider this a final parting gift from an ex- friend you won't be seeing ever again.

Since some of you asked me to write from Shravan's POV- I hope I got him right.😳


Sister post- Ignore se Insult Tak- Sumo's Journey:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4594798/ignore-se-insult-tak

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You should keeps these posts open and amend it ever week 😃
Hissab rakna zaruri hain !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ttt1

You should keeps these posts open and amend it ever week 😃

Hissab rakna zaruri hain !!


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Over weeks, I suppose. It took this long to pen down 5 lines afterall.😉 They believe in taking it slow, kya karein!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup


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Over weeks, I suppose. It took this long to pen down 5 lines afterall.😉 They believe in taking it slow, kya karein!

I think one or 2 London trip /cancellation ,emotional assault (not sure who will be the victim ), one or two action sequences debt increasong exponentially alk these will happen every week I feel
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chicksoup



Ignored you; thats what you did to me.

Indulged you; you did the same to me.

Insulted you; I do believe in returning favours.

I don't care?- I happen to, whether I like it or not.

Insult you again?- I don't need to.

Consider this a final parting gift from an ex- friend you won't be seeing ever again.

Since some of you asked me to write from Shravan's POV- I hope I got him right.😳


Sister post- Ignore se Insult Tak- Sumo's Journey:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/ek-duje-ke-vaaste/4594798/ignore-se-insult-tak


Lovely !!!
Tells you so much about the character and in so few words too. Our shravan n sumo to the T.
Infact sums up the story till now too.
You should think of continuing with this...keep updating and adding as the story progresses like how ttt mentions .You seem to be pretty good at it.
But be warned the way these two are doing hisaab baraabar with each other over evry little thing ...you will have your hands ful with tallying and keeping track of all this getting even and odds.😆
but frankly I am though enjoying this tussle thoroughly if you keep aside the matter of who is more right or more wrong.
Ps: I noticed sumo limping I yesterday's episode ...what was that? Anybody else feels we are gonna have a shravan carrying sumo scene during holi revelry?!! 😆Ummm now that I wouldn't mind at all.😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rummykub


Thank U.
Yeah, This hisaab barabar thing is going to test the capabilities of the best book keepers too.😉😆

Wondering if the story is shifting gears...anyway love catching up with these two.
That is a wonderful suggestion on the aftermath of that limp...I hope the CVs do something about it.😉

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bang on <3 You got Shravan's characterization completely right!

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