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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello everyone i am a silent reader on this forum,

i couldn't control anymore and decided to write a drabble on sumo ,

and i love suman -puskar bonding ,

this drabble is for them.


She was crying ,

Asking him not to leave her and go away,

But he didn't listen to her and went away,

She fell onto her knees ,

She sat there for God knows how much time ,

She was still thinking that maybe ,maybe he will come and take her away from this cruel world,

But alas nothing like that happened,

She was still waiting on her knees all alone there in that not so crowded park,

Lost in her own world,

Crying to herself ,remembering all the memories with him,

When suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulder,

Her face brightened up thinking it was him,

But all her happiness went into vain,

It was not him it was someone whom she knew,

It was her best friends brother, whom she thought she had lost because of her best friend,

But no he was back and ready to forgive her for everything,

And he wanted a chance for them ,

She thought to herself and thought that maybe she should agree ,

And then she couldn't remember when was the last time she was so happy,

She was glad that she decided to move on and now she is happy ,

With him, her new bestie, life partner, lover...

This was her love story...

Sometimes it is good to forget bad memories and move on in life .

And yes true love does exists...


chappals and tomatoes are most welcome ,

do leave clikes and comments and for more buddy me.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey shano🤗
wow i red something by you after so long

haha you kicked out shravan😆 it was sumo n pushkar😳 but i will still prefer SharMan with shravan mending what he broke😃 but it was good

i must say good try👏🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

hey shano🤗

wow i red something by you after so long

haha you kicked out shravan😆 it was sumo n pushkar😳 but i will still prefer SharMan with shravan mending what he broke😃 but it was good

i must say good try👏🤗


thanks appi
will do it
next one with suman shravan
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nano and sumo shares a great camaradie...and that should be only to that...😳.
as far as Kuch to taras ka jayo ,mere MR obhodrooo Shravan lambuuu ji par...

ITns sitammm hyyy🤣

BTW its so sweet..and beautiful👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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LOL!

Firstly I got confused with Best friend and his brother, then you opened an exclusive chapter😛

Nice😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhhaanii

LOL!

Firstly I got confused with Best friend and his brother, then you opened an exclusive chapter😛

Nice😆

😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's nice... Well written... Like Suman and Pushkar bonding... But love Suman and Sharavan chemistry... But thanks for this Hattke story ...

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