Suvan Drabble: Choose to Love You - Page 2

Originally posted by: Vageeshwarics

Alinaaa!!! I miss you😭

I loved the drabble, you beautifully portrayed Suman's emotions and dilemma!👍🏼

I am missing you and your work too much😭❤️

Aww Vagee, miss you too. Wishing you a speedy recovery 🤗 come back soon

Originally posted by: MishtiNew

This is amazing, Alina!

We miss you!

Thanks for writing this amazing work inspite of your hectic schedule.

Miss you too Mishti!! LOL I needed a break from studying...my brain was going

Originally posted by: Meena_J

amazing drabble..nice job

Thanks Meena! Hope work is less hectic for you now

Originally posted by: Bucky

This was so real and beautiful! Loved it Alina!

Miss you bud!

Thanks Bucky! Miss you too! I was listening to some golden era songs the other day and though of you

Originally posted by: MusicOfTheHeart

That's so so good! Beautifully penned down Suman's emotions!

Thanks Razia! I wish the CVs had explored Suman's emotions more...if they could give a whole month of Shravan falling in love with Suman and week of his crying...our Suman deserved at least a week of her feelings exploration. TBH I find her a more interesting than Shravan because she doesn't open up easily so I would have liked to see her confusion and realization alongside with Shravan...her confession seemed to sudden to me

Originally posted by: sambag

u r one of my favorite writers so I loved it!!

Awww Sam that means so much coming from you! I'm literally such a big fan of your writing and am always waiting for the next chapter of your story ❤️

Originally posted by: --Shamoo--

Beautiful and great Drabble

Very well written!

P.S: come back soon, we all miss you!

Thanks Shamoo...I try to drop in on weekends 🤗 miss you all too

Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Amazing job Miyan!

You portrayed Suman's feelings very well!

Loved it

Thanks Miyaan 😳 Means a lot ❤️

Originally posted by: Isabel

Engulf, destroy, mistake.......counting......all the negatives......all negatives together will nullify the negativity and will bring the positivity.......you know what...I have not read all of your writings....lemme be honest but whatever I did this is the best one...so far...

Oh boy you read this too...I always get nervous/embarrassed when you read my writing 😆 LOL double negatives make a positive I guess 🤣 Thanks that's really sweet of you to say ❤️

This is nicely written and gives a context about Suman's feelings better than what CVs did in rush.

Originally posted by: raahiyaan

This is nicely written and gives a context about Suman's feelings better than what CVs did in rush.

Aww thank you

Suman deserved more exploration of her feelings...she's a very complicated yet intense character and to see that gradual self-realization would have been so interesting to watch...they could have showed this alongside Shravan's love track too because they it wouldn't have seemed too sudden

Originally posted by: alina.b

Thanks Razia! I wish the CVs had explored Suman's emotions more...if they could give a whole month of Shravan falling in love with Suman and week of his crying...our Suman deserved at least a week of her feelings exploration. TBH I find her a more interesting than Shravan because she doesn't open up easily so I would have liked to see her confusion and realization alongside with Shravan...her confession seemed to sudden to me

IKR! I wish they at least gave her those 10 days! But the confession already happened so we'll have to let it go...

Originally posted by: alina.b

Aww thank you

Suman deserved more exploration of her feelings...she's a very complicated yet intense character and to see that gradual self-realization would have been so interesting to watch...they could have showed this alongside Shravan's love track too because they it wouldn't have seemed too sudden

@ bold : I agree. Her feelings for Shravan has always been so subtle, so i too wanted a gradual development in this department like the we saw the growth in her individual characterisation and shravan's likeness turning into love.