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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: chicksoup
Ah, Beautiful, Beagle. 👏

This one for Sharanya:

Out there in the middle of nothing,
Lay everything that mattered to me.
Frozen, as my mind had been,
Lifeless, as my senses had become.

Love.
Life.
Loss.
Grief.

Never will I feel the comfort of his lap again,
Or hide mine self in his arms.
Lose myself in his warmth,
Or have him breathe life into me.

Yes, death has snatched him away,
Yet, blessed is the feeling.
I once loved,
And was loved in return.

Empty, I was.
Plundered, now I am.
Love keeps me going,
Revenge is mine.

Thank you Chick! I'm SO glad you have written this- its lovely. Yes, it is better to have loved and lost in love than never loved at all...or so they say. Every so often actors perform so well that it inspires one to write because you can empathise with the roles they play. Do write some more.

Edited by beagleboy - 7 years ago