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Posted: 8 years ago
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sorry i late...


Beautifull os👍🏼
so here tara & mj marraiged again in difficult situation.

so mj going abroad & tara is upset by knowing this...

she is upset as he never showed his love to her...

she star packingh his stuff...

mj enetrs & want to what she think abt him

bt tara is in her own dreaming land...that he loves radha

this makes mj furious...

mj also thinking that tara doesnt love him...💔

so terrace already decorated...👏

mj bhi magicall words kahne ke baad prank bad...😕

his trick worked tara blurred all what she thinks & feel...👏

the hug was passionate


thanks for this os


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice OS!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏

I like all the preparation MJ did to impress Tara and they confessed their feelings for each other as well. 😊 😊 😊 😊

Great work 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshita

Interesting OS!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

One thing which surprised me like Vartika is if he loved Radha than how can he love Tara that easily? 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕 😕

Rest of your story was romantic and beautiful. 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳



Love is mysterious 😉

Thanks for loving it 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kumari27

sorry i late...


Beautifull os👍🏼
so here tara & mj marraiged again in difficult situation.
yes

so mj going abroad & tara is upset by knowing this...

she is upset as he never showed his love to her...
yeah

she star packingh his stuff...

mj enetrs & want to what she think abt him
yeah😊

bt tara is in her own dreaming land...that he loves radha

this makes mj furious...
yeah, sometimes her assumptions are wrong like in this case

mj also thinking that tara doesnt love him...💔
yeah

so terrace already decorated...👏
MJ is all ready for valentine's day😊

mj bhi magicall words kahne ke baad prank bad...😕
MJ knows how to make her accept what her heart wants

his trick worked tara blurred all what she thinks & feel...👏
yeah😊

the hug was passionate
yeah , it was😊

thanks for this os




Thanks for loving 😃😃😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry Archu...
I am replying on it very late ...

I have read this before 😛
As a MriAra story lover I have gone through the whole EBI library 🤪
And this is one of my fab from the contest's entries 😃
I am very happy that you have posted it again 😛

Wow! this was your first story 👏👏👏

On MriAra's first marriage anniversary MJ was going ...
Both were trying to understand each other feelings ...

They had been married in very complicated situation.
And MJ did love Radha .
They had become friend but ...

Now, MJ wanted to tell his feelings to her ..
But Tara assumed MJ still loved Radha 😔

MJ was angry to hear it and went from there.
And Tara followed him 😊

Wow!! the trip and catch scene
MJ said 'I Love You' 😛 but then said it had been prank 🤢
Poor Tara was shattered 😒
MJ grabbed her and tried to understand her feelings 😳
Finally Tara spoke out her words !!!
And how cutely MJ was just admiring his wife
MJ also spoke out his feeling that what Tara really was to him ❤️

They have found their happiness at last ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
And MJ had also planned to take Tara with him 😉😉😉
Awee...

This is such a lovely OS ⭐️⭐️⭐️
And You were great at your first writing 👏


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poorvi16

Nice OS!!!! 👏

I like all the preparation MJ did to impress Tara and they confessed their feelings for each other as well. 😊 😊 😊 😊

Great work 👏



Thanks for loving it😃

Yeah, his effort was commendable 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Nice. thanks for reply
keep on writing such OS
Edited by ronshaan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Khadeja


Sorry Archu...
I am replying on it very late ...
It's Ok😃

I have read this before 😛
As a MriAra story lover I have gone through the whole EBI library 🤪
And this is one of my fab from the contest's entries 😃
I am very happy that you have posted it again 😛
Thanks for reading it that time and loving it😃

Wow! this was your first story 👏👏👏
Yes😳

On MriAra's first marriage anniversary MJ was going ...
Both were trying to understand each other feelings ...
The unsaid words😭

They had been married in very complicated situation.
And MJ did love Radha .
They had become friend but ...
yes, they didn't had a normal marriage

Now, MJ wanted to tell his feelings to her ..
But Tara assumed MJ still loved Radha 😔
Yes, she assumed because he never told her about his feelings

MJ was angry to hear it and went from there.
And Tara followed him 😊
yes

Wow!! the trip and catch scene
MJ said 'I Love You' 😛 but then said it had been prank 🤢
Poor Tara was shattered 😒
MJ grabbed her and tried to understand her feelings 😳
Finally Tara spoke out her words !!!
And how cutely MJ was just admiring his wife
MJ also spoke out his feeling that what Tara really was to him ❤️
The trip and catch scene was inspired by Raj Kapoor and Nargis😃
He tricked her in speaking out her feelings😊

They have found their happiness at last ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
And MJ had also planned to take Tara with him 😉😉😉
Awee...
Yes, they finally found the love😃
MJ is smart😉

This is such a lovely OS ⭐️⭐️⭐️
And You were great at your first writing 👏
Thanks for loving it😃
I sometimes laugh when I read this how I use to write😆


Thanks for loving it sooo much 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Awesome OS Dear👏😊

MJ going abroad and Tara upset

Both love each other but don't know what other feels

Tara thinks MJ still loves Radha

MJ confessed and called it a prank

Tara got hurt😭
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Awesome update.
Beautiful written. 👏👏
Tara k sath Mazak kahin bhot mehnga na par jaye Mritynjay ko.😆
Interesting story.
Songs editions are really Nice idea.
Good Job @Archi21


Edited by RubabNoor11D - 7 years ago

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