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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Dear EBIans

yeh kuch aese likha hai jese

Viraf ko apne dil ka haal batana ho

so this is purely for viraf !

Bas khwaab hi bunte rah jaata hoon,
Ki haqeekat mein toh koi fasaana bhi nahi aata..

Chahat kitni hai tumhare liye dil mein,
Tum ko ye bataana bhi nahi aata..

Zindagi mein aa jao hamari zindagi ban kar,
Ke tere bin mujhe zinda rehna nahi aata,

Na roothna tum hum se kabhi,
Ki mujhe toh manaana bhi nahi aata..

Badi kathin hai ye raah-e-muhabbat,
Iss mein koi safar suhana nahi aata..

Intezaar karta hoon tum se kab milon,
Par tum se milne ka koi bahaana bhi nahi aata ...!

Tujhe chahta hoon be inteha par chahna nhi aata,
Ye kaisi mohabbat hai k mujhe kehna nahi aata

Har pal tujhe bus tujhe duaon me mangta hoon,
Kya karon k tumhare siwa kuchh mangna nhi aata.

Umeed hai pasand ayega apsabke piyar ka shukriya jiski wajah se mein likhpati hoon Love you All !!

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Nira Mukherjee

@M_Nira

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Di , jab meine dekha ki is mei likha hai Viraf ko apne dil ka haal batana ho

Mujhe laga bahot romantic honge

but you know ye sirf romantic nahi bahot jyada romantic aur beautiful hai

Intense hai

dard hai is mein...

Personally ye meri favourite ban gayi

Specially last do lines

*Killer*

Apko kya tareef karu...

words nahi hai mere pass!!!!

Aap please likhna maat chodna

Likhte rahiye aur share karte rahiye!!! 😊

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Khadeja Akter

@Khadeja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Mesmerizing shayeri Di 👏 👏 👏

Aap kitna acchi likhti hoo 😊

Yea padke aisa laga har jo fans hote hai sab ki mann ki baat 😛
Bohot romantic and beautiful hai 😳

Aap bas aise likte raho 😃
Viraf will surely listen someday 😉

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Pooja trivedi

@kumari27

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome lines !!!

Great work on virafs feeling!!!

All lines r awesome!!!

BT ye line toh kamaal hai ...

Zindagi mein aa jao hamari zindagi ban kar,
Ke tere bin mujhe zinda rehna nahi aata,

Bs unhin continue likhte rahna...

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Fantastic!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

The poem describes Viraf's feelings perfectly!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

The way he expresses his love and longing for her is sooo beautiful and romantic!!!!☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It is so intense and has so much pain!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭

I especially loved the last two lines!!!!

The poem is simply mind-blowing Sam!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

That was just touchy and so emotional. 😭 😭 😭

It seems as if he wanted her in his life any how and that's why in his each prayer he wants her.

Lovely and magical Sam.

Just love u for such sentimental poem. 👏 👏 👏

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mon.sayan17.com
Di , jab meine dekha ki is mei likha hai Viraf ko apne dil ka haal batana ho

Mujhe laga bahot romantic honge

but you know ye sirf romantic nahi bahot jyada romantic aur beautiful hai

Intense hai

dard hai is mein...

Personally ye meri favourite ban gayi

Specially last do lines

*Killer*

Apko kya tareef karu...

words nahi hai mere pass!!!!

Aap please likhna maat chodna

Likhte rahiye aur share karte rahiye!!! 😊

Thanks Nira like kerne keliye

🤗

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Khadeja
Mesmerizing shayeri Di 👏 👏 👏

Aap kitna acchi likhti hoo 😊

Yea padke aisa laga har jo fans hote hai sab ki mann ki baat 😛
Bohot romantic and beautiful hai 😳

Aap bas aise likte raho 😃
Viraf will surely listen someday 😉

Thanks Khadeja

Pasand aya

I am happy

sach mein Viraf ko dekh ker feel hota hai

woh aesa sochta hoga

🤗🤗

for you !

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Samreen

@SamreenJ

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27
Awesome lines !!!

Great work on virafs feeling!!!

All lines r awesome!!!

BT ye line toh kamaal hai ...
Zindagi mein aa jao hamari zindagi ban kar,
Ke tere bin mujhe zinda rehna nahi aata,

Bs unhin continue likhte rahna...

Thanks Pooja

yeh lines meine aone husband ko likhin thi when he was out of town

jab yeh poem likhi to luga ke yeh iss mein honi chaiye

tumhein pasanad aya

mein khush howe