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M_Nira thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: sohag

<font size="2"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Magnificent Update...πŸ‘
How beautifully you described Viraf and Chhavi's mind turmoil...!!!
As i can see directly what is going on...
Viraf finally spoke out his feelings for Chhavi.. πŸ˜›
Everything was just perfect ; the rain , the song ...
With each update i am becoming more eager to read more..😊
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Thank you so much for liking it
Will update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: watchdesi1tv

This is exceptional and breathtaking my dear
You are an artist

Viraf and chhavi's feeling towards each other ..,, you described it beautifully πŸ‘
Super job
A+ for you
Thanks for the update
I was eagerly waiting
Or viraf ka izhar-e-ishq hi milgaya just perfect.



So sweet of you Sam Di
Thanks a lot :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: kumari27

This chapter was full of excitement & suprises !!!!


Its not only chhavi heart beats bt mine also.

This rain was like "kudarat ne kiya sazis"

Finally they r together

Eagerly waiting for next



Yes they are together now
Sahi mei 'Kudrat ne kiya sazis'
Thank you for liking it :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
Superb update... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

My words can't explain how lovely this update is...


The lovely part both realize their feelings for each other...


I just loved the way how he confessed his feelings for her all of a sudden making her understand that never take a decision to fulfill others happiness. It should be for yourself as well.

I am hoping soon he will be her strength and she will just refuse to marry that idiot.

Would be happy to see them together soon when Chhavi confessed her feelings for him..

Update soon..



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Posted: 10 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Superb update... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

My words can't explain how lovely this update is...


The lovely part both realize their feelings for each other...


I just loved the way how he confessed his feelings for her all of a sudden making her understand that never take a decision to fulfill others happiness. It should be for yourself as well.

I am hoping soon he will be her strength and she will just refuse to marry that idiot.

Would be happy to see them together soon when Chhavi confessed her feelings for him..

Update soon..




Thank you Mahak for liking it
will update soon!! 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
First of all sorry for being late in commenting 😳 😳 😳

Chapter 2:

What an update Nira πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Loved their thoughts about duality of modernism πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Yaha too khusboo ne baat badhai ...waah πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰

Loved their convo in room πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Ohh...light chali gayi...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Aww...he is so sweet...

Chhavi ke liye matchsticks se roshni kar raha hai πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Kumbhkaran...that was epic 🀣 🀣 🀣

No words to describe how beautifully he explained road ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

I was able to imagine themπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

uff...ye generator bhi naa kitne wrong pe start hua

Arre...apna number bata deti ...πŸ˜‰

Do they will meet on reception??? πŸ˜•

Kitna lovely song chose kiya hai πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Sweet and lovely update with lots of laughter ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—


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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Chapter 3:

Poor Shekhar ...

Chhavi's beauty was magnificent . Specially that kundan part was superb⭐️⭐️⭐️ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


You described it wonderfully.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Ah...She is waiting for him.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ

Ye mobile companies ke offer...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Finally he arrived.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

The way he praised her ...

Gift!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

I love how he keeps quite on many questions 😳

Inner void

These lines are very trueπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

⭐️ "Eye- contact is a dangerous, dangerous thing, but lovely. God so lovely"⭐️

Urmila seems very strict . Particular about her likes 😳

I must say Shekhar is handling his wife very well, otherwise it would be hard for anyone else to handle her πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

So , Chhavi is Papa's girl πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Papa daughter convo was very heart warmingπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

How she was talking about Viraf with him

Please Chhavi don't plan your honeymoon with Parth, our artisan of smell will take you to some better place where there will be love ,no loneliness, no so called modernization .πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

OMG!!! Shekhar is going to be unemployed in 3 months😲😲😲😲

What will happen next?? 😳😳😳


You are writing beautifully , expressing emotions very well with perfect words πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—


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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Chapter 4:

He loves his mother so much that he left job and started his own business so that his mother should not feel alone and broken. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

How can his brother leave them for sake of his career? Its family after all that remains with you always.

He has a Science club too.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Savitri seems mysterious . I hope further chapters will reveal her more. For now my wild guess is she is Parth's relative.😳

Parth is mean. For him money matters more than family. 😑😑😑😑

Urmila's reaction was right when she saw her to be son-in-law unattended. 😊😊

Shekhar's reply ⭐️ "They are spending time together" ⭐️ πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸ‘

,ya they are very strangely spending time together. They are sitting in same room but busy in their own world 😊

I loved Viraf's thought about killer , who was the killer ?? πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜‰

Definitely the girl was killer.πŸ˜‰

Viraf the perfume she used that day had her essence in it. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

She was trying to recall this description of road . πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Viraf and Chhavi are at different places , but they are in each others thought. πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Why she is so feared of going to Delhi?? Is it distance from her family? Or Parth's point of view about relations. πŸ€” πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”

Loving your writing Nira, how you are expressing things and emotions are great. β­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Chapter 5 :

Chhavi is right people can live for dreams. πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

But why Urmila thinks its people can't live with dreams?? About what mistake she is taking?? Her marriage with Shekhar??πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”

I hope future chapters will clear them. 😊😊😊


⭐️⭐️You said it correctly Chhavi too was fighting with storm in her head . ⭐️⭐️⭐️ πŸ‘πŸ‘

His faces comes reappearing in her thoughts.

Poor Viraf slept in office.

⭐️⭐️The boy said correctly "Do it now..life is too short to wait"β­οΈβ­οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Yes Viraf go and tell her how you feel. 😊😊

Why I am so dumbo ?? I should have known that he was going to meet her at college.πŸ˜›πŸ˜†


Viraf's question about marriageπŸ‘πŸ‘ just after her statement ...greatπŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Aww...the way he held her checks...

I loved the whole rain scene, the way she looked at him when he asked about her feelings. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

And her reply was clear declaration that she wants him.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


I loved his answer to her question ⭐️⭐️" because I can't look away..."⭐️⭐️ πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Oh...Chhavi let your heart exclaim your feelings.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ


⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️That hug⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

...you described Chhavi's state and feeling perfectlyπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘


Excited to know what will be Chhavi's replyπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

waiting for next update

Thanks for writing this ficπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—


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Posted: 9 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Archi21

First of all sorry for being late in commenting 😳 😳 😳

Its alright...I know you are busy but you still commented ad that is enough for me!! πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ

Chapter 2:

What an update Nira πŸ‘

Thank you!!! 😳 😳 😳

Loved their thoughts about duality of modernism πŸ‘πŸΌ

Yaha too khusboo ne baat badhai ...waah πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜‰

Loved their convo in room πŸ‘

Ohh...light chali gayi...πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›

Aww...he is so sweet...

Indeed...he is!!!

Chhavi ke liye matchsticks se roshni kar raha hai πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Kumbhkaran...that was epic 🀣 🀣 🀣

No words to describe how beautifully he explained road ⭐️

I was able to imagine themπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

uff...ye generator bhi naa kitne wrong pe start hua

haan...aur kya!! 🀒

Arre...apna number bata deti ...πŸ˜‰

Do they will meet on reception??? πŸ˜•

Kitna lovely song chose kiya hai πŸ‘

Thank you 😳 😳

Sweet and lovely update with lots of laughter πŸ‘


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Thank you Archu...!!!! πŸ€— ❀️


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