FF - If Only I Could (Updt 24-35) Pg 16-18 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Worldpeace

Why have you ended this... Why... Why... 😭

from 30th chapter till 34th i just cried reading each line...

And after that i literally had to close down and went out for a walk...

Came back couldnt hold back to read the last part and then it left a smile on my face...

Love you so much for this...

K.. I dont know if anybody did this but i want to request you for an os...

Pls...

🤗 first and foremost a big hug to you...

I cried too whilst writing...the reason I ended because I am travelling and due to major lack of time

I am unable to write if I dont feel the scene, and this takes a lot of time and personal space.

Hope I make sense to you.

yes I will do an OS on a particular situation or scene...

Originally posted by: ddFan2012

🤗 first and foremost a big hug to you...

I cried too whilst writing...the reason I ended because I am travelling and due to major lack of time

I am unable to write if I dont feel the scene, and this takes a lot of time and personal space.

Hope I make sense to you.

yes I will do an OS on a particular situation or scene...

i realy hope some scene realy get you put down something..

Hehe see i m so selfish...

You r travelling means you r enjoing your vacation..

And look at me fron second jan i have my university exam... 😭

Oh my, DD, what a writer u are! Absolutely marvelous storytelling. Soul touching and emotional.

👏

I've read the whole FF at one go, can't believe how brilliantly you wrote each scene and chapter - u sure need to be writing scripts for TV, gal!

Go on Saba ji, hire our DD.

Are you listening BBC waalon?

Originally posted by: thrower

I've read the whole FF at one go, can't believe how brilliantly you wrote each scene and chapter - u sure need to be writing scripts for TV, gal!

Go on Saba ji, hire our DD.

Are you listening BBC waalon?

ROFL...thanks for the awesome comments...its just amateur stuff...can write only if it affects me...otherwise nothing comes out...

It's a beginning DD, u have it in you, it's just a matter of time before someone hires you to write their show...u are good..u know how to setup a scene...how to take it to it's highpoint and how to close the scene...that is what is important and u do it so brilliantly. (sorry haven't read any of your previous stories or FF's, if u have the links, please forward them to me as PM)

Beautiful updates. I have no words. Loved it. Continue soon