ArDhika SS - ch7 pg24 - 09/02 - Against all odds - by jey3ram - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
Awesome update..
Jealous Arjun and confident Radz.. Loved it,
pls complete the next chapter and so the story.. Don't leave it incomplete pls..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Angelpureness...plzzz continue wid dis ss...dyin wid curiosity imagining wat happens nxt...continue soon plzzz...eagerly waitin...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ok...frankly speaking 2day only i saw this story...

wen i read ur prologue really liked it...

i really liked neil and radhika...liked angry n possessive arjun ...caring sam n piyali...yah nandhu too..

i totally liked all parts...


i hope u r continuing d story...
gng to follow...thanks...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi readers,
I know you are all disappointed that my stories are incomplete. Some of you are even more disappointed because I raise your expectation by committing to write and then there is no updat.


I am finding it very difficult to write... It is more of a headache... Hence I give up and put it on the back burner.

I recently committed to updating my stories. I tried adding to chapter 4. 3 days and all have managed to add is 3 paragraphs. Am struggling. I am not that connected to the characters or feel the story, hence it is very difficult for me to continue with the stories.

It is like I have a writer's bock or something.

You will have to forgive me, I don't think I will be able to complete any of my stories in this forum.

Lots of love

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow..completely loving this story..
continue soon n do pm me..😊
Edited by rana. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear readers,

I would like to thank you for the love and support you have given me through this story.

I am unable to continue with the story as mentioned in my previous note.

Renu aka jey3ram has been kind enough to volunteer to continue with the story.


Renu,

I just want to say thank you very much.myoir offer has lightened my heart for I too was disappointed over struggling to find the connect in order to continue writing out the story.

As leaving chapter 4 incomplete. There are too many likes hence feeling quite heavy hearted to erase it.mi have made a note that you shall repost it and add to it.

Looking forward to see how the story progresses in you capable hands.

Lots of love.

Fuzz
Edited by angelpureness - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: angelpureness

Dear readers,

I would like to thank you for the love and support you have given me through this story.

I am unable to continue with the story as mentioned in my previous note.

Renu aka jey3ram has been kind enough to volunteer to continue with the story.


Renu,

I just want to say thank you very much.myoir offer has lightened my heart for I too was disappointed over struggling to find the connect in order to continue writing out the story.

As leaving chapter 4 incomplete. There are too many likes hence feeling quite heavy hearted to erase it.mi have made a note that you shall repost it and add to it.

Looking forward to see how the story progresses in you capable hands.

Lots of love.

Fuzz


Angel,..This post really brought me tears in my eyes yaar,...Sorry,...I dinn like deleting a single line from your chapters but I forgot how you feel,...Really my heart felt apologies to you yaar and Even now M saying,If you are in a mood to continue this SS,...Then,I'll stop there right away dear,...

My wish is you to continue cox this story really deserves a proper end not abrupt end or Incomplete,...

Friends,I doubt,I could do justification to Angel's,...But will try to continue this story from Chapter 4 without deleting her's and If angel and you ppl like the flow of story,..Then,I'll try to move forward,...I'm not a good writer like Angel but will try to give my best,...




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Posted: 9 years ago
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@jey3ram

Check pm :)

Looking forward to your story telling.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi renu u will b able to do justice with this story. All d best renu. Am waiting for u to take over.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey friends,...I know,..I couldnt do justification to Angel,...But just updated this chapter in a belief to end it in a good note as Angel too wished the same,...I hope She will like this flow of story,...Please Excuse me for many grammatical errors,...I dinn owned the characters or this story,...I hope you all will like this chapter,...

Chapter 4:Against all the odds

Arjun felt some storm has hit him for real after knowing Radhika moved on in her life,...He cant digest the fact that she was living happily even after everything happened btw them 3 years back,.. But, Here He couldn't do anything rather living with her mere thoughts for all these years,...He stepped up towards his room furiously carrying those haunting memories of her with him even ignoring his staffs and his Di Downstairs,...After a while,All were shocked hearing a loud noise from upstairs,...Nandhini asked everyone to leave from there just to check what happened to her Brother suddenly,...

In Birdsong

Sam was puzzled by Arjun's action of leaving the conference hall all of a sudden,...

Sam:Chasni,..What happened yaar?,...Anything wrong chasni?,...Why Arjun leaves angrily from here and that too without attending the conference yaar,..Are you guys already discussed anything regarding the Ad?,...

Radz after taking a deep breathe faced Sam with her smile began,

Radz:No sam,...I dunno,...We just Discussed about some youth centric ad concepts in general,...But,I too was puzzled seeing him leaving the hall suddenly,...

Neil understood something which Sam couldn't began with a known smile,

Neil:It's ok sam,..We will discuss about this latter,...I think, Now We should concentrate on other things too,...Am I right Chasni?

Radz:Haan neil,...You are right,...There are so many things in our life to discuss rather wasting our time in some unwanted things,...You people continue,...I had light Headache now,...So,M heading to home with Ansh,...Bye Sam,...Bye Neil,...

Saying So,Radz left the hall hurriedly leaving neil and Sam alone,...

Sam:Neil,...What happened to Chasni yaar,...I was asking about Arjun,..But,Why she lost in some thots yaar,...Whether Her past again haunting her,...

Neil:Sam,..Dont worry about chasni yaar,...Whatever Happens is only for Good,... Couldn't understand,...

Sam looks him puzzlingly began,

Sam:What good yaar?,..I couldn't get anything,...Why Arjun left angrily or Why Chasni left worriedly?,...But you are saying coolly that whatever happens is Good,...Stop it man,...,...

Neil:Sam,...You believe me na,..

Sam nodded yes,...

Neil: Then, Just be cool yaar,...Ok,...Cummon let's work on this presentation a bit,...

Sam:Hmmm,...I hope everything will be fine sooner as you said,...

Both started working on the presentation,...

In Arjun's house,...

His anger,His hatred for Radhika occupies his nerves completely,...He could see the rage of his veins,which wants to kill Her for moving on in her life with another man,...How could she?,...HE shouted literally and started throwing all the objects on his dressing table and He broke the table as if he was trying to feed some food for his huge anger,... He was successful in punching his face on the mirror for pretending to be calm when Neil touched his Radhika,...He understood that he was never successful in destroying her not now and also then,..She was happy,...No,She cant be,...When He couldn't move on in his life after spending that night with her,...But here she moved on,...Arjun cant accept the fact,...It only increases his rage to another level,...He continued punching the broken mirror till he get his calm back despite his bleeding Knuckles,..Till yesterday,She just stole his sleep but today he lost everything in destroying her,...His frustration came out louder in his voice almost frightened everyone in that building,...

Arjun:No,...I wont leave her,...I wont leave you Radhika,..I wont leave you,...

Nandhini,who entered Arjun's room slowly was extremely shocked seeing Arjun punching the mirror with his hands,...She ran towards him and hold his forearm from punching and began,

Nandhu:Arjun,..Are you became mad?,..What are you doing??

Arjun felt somehow his anger was suppressed seeing his Di with his reddened eyes,...He began furiously after gaining his lost breathe,

Arjun:Nandhu,..Leave me,..I want to kill her,...

Nandhini made him seat on the bed, Caressed his hair affectionately started applying ointment on his wounds,. While tying the Band aid on his wounds, She slowly began,

Nandhu:What happened Arjun?,..Who you want to kill? And Why Arjun?,...

Reality stuck him after hearing these questions from his sis,...Arjun distanced himself from his sister and began,...

Arjun:Woh,...Nothing Nandhu,...I just remember some unwanted past,...you don't worry about these,...Have dinner,...Ramu kaka,...Ramu kaka,...

Arjun yelled Ramu kaka's name loudly,...

Ramu kaka: Haan Beta,...

Arjun:Clean this room before I come,...And prepare Dinner for Nandhu alone,...

Ramu kaka:Ok beta,...

Nandhu:Arjun,Where are you going at this hour?,..You was already tired and now had wounds on your knuckles too,...

Arjun:Nandhu,...Please,...Just a drive Nandhu,...Don't wait for me,...Kaka,. Serve dinner for Di,...

Saying so,Arjun walked out of his room ignoring Nandhu's repeated calls left her worried,...

In Piyali's house,...

Piyali:Neil,...It's good you came,...What happened to Radhika?,...I saw her upset again after that Goa Incident,...

Neil:Nothing mam,...I'll talk to her,...Where is she?

Sam:In her Room Neil,...She is not talking with Ansh too yaar,...

Neil: Ansh is still awake,...

Piyali:No,Neil,...He was sleeping in my room,...I'll take care of him,...You talk with Radhika,,...she din have her dinner too,...

Neil:Hmmm,...You both Don't worry,..I'll talk to her,...

Saying so,Neil entered Radz room,...

Whereas Radz was lost in cherishing her moments with Arjun in Goa standing on the window side,...She remembered Arjun's loving stares for her,..There in those eyes, She saw the real love for her,...It cant be fake,...Her intuition tells her that she was never be wrong,...He loves her and Ansh is the symbol for their love,...But,Why he ditched her,..Why he did this?,...Why He gave her such pain?,...Every women in this world wants her life partner to be with her while baring her first child in her womb,...But Arjun ditched her,..He used her,...How he could give such pain to her?,...She asked herself many times in these 3 years these questions,...Now,He was before her,..But,She don't want to listen anything from him,...She was living this life for Ansh and now,She achieved her dream by becoming one of the famous copywriter with the help of her friends,...So,She made her heart strong by deciding not to look back at some dark pages in her life,...Tear droplets automatically started rolling down on her cheeks,...

Neil witnessed this began,

Neil:Chasni,... What are you looking there?,...Looking for Rain,...I think,It wont come till you stop your Rain,...

Radz turned towards Neil began,

Radz:My Rain???,...Neil,...What do you mean yaar?

Neil:Ya,...all the black clouds which are responsible for Rain is in your eyes,...Then How we get Real Rain yaar,...

Radz wiped her tears averting her gaze from Neil,...

Neil holds her shoulder and began,

Neil: Chasni,...You cant hide anything from us,...I never ask why you are crying or what's the reason behind it?,...Chasni,...You know one thing yaar,...Just because Something ends your life,.Doesn't mean It never should have been,...Remember You lived those moments in your life,..You learned,..You grew,..You moved on,...You achieved your dreams yaar,...Today Radhika Mishra Means a Well known Writer,A strong woman,A girl of Altruism yaar,...Don't remember that pain which stops you to move on yaar,...Cox you get Ansh after facing that betrayal na,...So,Now Ansh is your world chasni,..We are always with you in all walks of your life chasni,...I want you as a old chirpy girl not like losing yourself in deadly past,...

Radz for a second didn't want to break herself again..she had already collected herself after all this... But hearing Neil's motivational words didn't helped her to bottle up her feelings..she just burst into tears and started sobbing while hugging him by clutching his shirt..her tears were soaking Neil's shirt,...Neil holds her shoulder after breaking their hug began,...

Neil: I'm there for you as your friend till my last breathe chasni,...Don't worry about anything yaar,...Just concentrate on your work and Ansh Chasni,...

Radz nodded yes smilingly and neil wiped her tears on her cheeks and began,

Neil:Chasni,... See yaar,..You drenched my shirt with your Rain,..Now,I have to dry it,...

Radz smiled at Neil amusingly and Neil feeds her Dinner,..Radz started Having her dinner Hearing Neil's jokes,...Then He made her laydown on the bed and continued his non stop jokes sitting beside her,which made Radz to forget all her pains for a while and let out herself in a deep sleep,...Neil stopped his jokes and wrapped her with Bed sheets ,..Then, He Went out of her Room silently after confirming she was fallen asleep,...

P.S.:This was a short update,...I dont wanna make a mock on this story,...So,Just wrote a little,...If you ppl and Angel liked this chapter,...I'll update further based on your reviews guys,...

Edited by jey3ram - 9 years ago

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