Ardhika FF: kaisi ye manmarziyaan (new)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii guys this is Nandita.I am a crazy ardhika fan so thought to write a short story. Please bear with me. I have read all stories of this forum. And they are simply mind blowing. Dmegha Di, tehsina di, swaralika Di I am a big fan of your stories. Pls forgive me for any mistake.😊
Here it goes :
Kaisi Ye Manmarziyaan :

It was a bright sunny morning...when radhika opened her eyes. Today was her best
friend's marriage. samaira khanna, The girl who made her believe in herself, who
make her realize that even she has the power to do something. But strangly
enough Radhika wasn't happy. There was turmoil in her mind. She knew Something is
wrong with Arjun sir & his mysterious sister Nandini di. After seeing the video of the
fire she was sure that somehow Nandini was connected with this and she was not a good
person at all.
" I have to stop the marriage..any how...but how can I do this alone.." thought
radhika..
The first person Come in her mind was Neil. Radhika knew Neil cared for Sam even
more than her. She took her phone out and dialed neil'.
At Arjun's place :
Arjun was lost in a dark place. He couldn't find anything...every side was darkness
only. He was afraid...yes the person who claimed that he love darkness was afraid of
darklness. Even he needed the light. The light of hope &happiness.. The light of love. He was madly finding a way to
escape when someone hold his hand and said "Mere sath aiiye Sir..."
Radhika..
Ohh!! He could recognize her voice at any where at any condition. How melodious it
heard. He was not afraid anymore. He followed her. She took him to a new place filled
with light, happiness.
"will you always clear the darkness of my life like this??"he asked caressing her
beautiful face.
" I am the light of your darkness sir.. and I will never let darkness to engulf you..."
"Promise..???" he asked
She circled her hand around his neck and touched his forehead with her and whisper
"Promise.."
"Arjun utho...aj tumhari shaadi hai... vul to nahi gaye??" said nandini as she opened
the window of Arjun's room.
He opened his eyes...and the most beautiful dream of his life had broken.
"It was a dream, which can never be true..." he thought.
Today was his marriage with Samaira Khanna...but what cruel game fate had played.
I
He was dreaming of Radhika, day and Night. The best friend of his fianc.
"today our revenge will be fulfilled.." nandini was very happy indeed.
The thought of marriage made him sad. The beautiful dream, he had just seen does
not exist anymore. this thougt made him impatience.
"Kya ye shadi sach me jaroori hai nandu?? Sam ko takleef dekar humara dukh kaise
kam ho sakta hai?? Radhika kaheti hai Dard ko srif pyaar aur Khushiya kam kar
sakti hai... badla nahi .." somehow Arjun dare to say in one breath.
Nandini was boiling in anger... "Tum pagal ho gaye ho arjun... ab tum piche nahi hat
sakte ...waise bhi ye faisala tumhara tha... how can you think this??" nandini shouted
at him.
"par nandu.." he tried to say..
"Tum fresh ho jao...ye sab uss RADHIKA ki wajah se ho raha hai.." she stormed out of
the room.
Radhika...
His heart skipped a bit as her name echoed in his mind. Yes this was all because of
her.
He closed his eyes...the smiling face of radhika came flashing in front of his eyes.
Those sparkling eyes of her saying thousand words, her long hair flying in the air.
"What you have done to me Radhika ?? see what you have done to me..!!" he whispered As tears rolled down his eyes.

Please comment how is it? Should I continue or not?😊
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-Enigmatic- thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww such a wonderful write up 👏👏 beautiful story 😳
Poor soul arjun 😭
I'm waiting for next update. 😃 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start update soon next prt.
waitinggg...
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Originally posted by: -Enigmatic-

Awww such a wonderful write up 👏👏 beautiful story 😳
Poor soul arjun 😭
I'm waiting for next update. 😃 😃

Thank you so much dear 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

nice start update soon next prt.
waitinggg...

Thank you for reading😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful Nandita!!!👏👏👏👏👏Dis was awesum!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
I m so hooked into dis,and I did not find any mistakes really.😛Eagerly waiting for ur next update,and I especially loved Arjun's dream.It was so beautifully described by u!Hats off to u girl!Plz update soon!!!And ofcourse u have to continue!😡Or else I will haunt u!😆😉🤗Update soon and plz pm me!Will be waitng!😃
Posted: 10 years ago
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If you don't want me searching for you, then attempt your murder and then haunt you day and night the you better continue this!😳
Eeehh sorry abt that dhamki..😆 I get carried away when it comes to ArDhika and wonderful stories.
I L.O.V.E.D the start of the story. Everything was perfectly described.
My favourite moment was Arjun's dream. I was imagining it all!!!
Update soon and PM me the future updates too!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TehsinaJFJ

Beautiful Nandita!!!👏Dis was awesum!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
I m so hooked into dis,and I did not find any mistakes really.😛Eagerly waiting for ur next update,and I especially loved Arjun's dream.It was so beautifully described by u!Hats off to u girl!Plz update soon!!!And ofcourse u have to continue!😡Or else I will haunt u!😆😉🤗Update soon and plz pm me!Will be waitng!😃

Thank you so much di😳 for reading. You liked the story...it's enough for me. Will surely pm you. 😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dmegha

If you don't want me searching for you, then attempt your murder and then haunt you day and night the you better continue this!😳
Eeehh sorry abt that dhamki..😆 I get carried away when it comes to ArDhika and wonderful stories.
I L.O.V.E.D the start of the story. Everything was perfectly described.
My favourite moment was Arjun's dream. I was imagining it all!!!
Update soon and PM me the future updates too!!


You scared me dii.😭 but I will definitely continue. Your comment means a lot.😃😊 will PM you. Thank u.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful update nandita😊
Please continue writing this story👍🏼

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