Focus on the main plot and progress towards it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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'kisi aur ki wife banne se pehle mein apni life banana chahti hoo'

The promo made me sign up to watch manmarziyaa to watch the hurdles in Radhika's life and her journey of becoming something before having her own future family...

one more show towards women enpowerment after Everest and Dream Girl...i thought.

Watched the first episode...who is tht anthr girl who came even b4 the lead? i thought. I read an article regarding the show wen promo aired but then it only gave main girl's pic and mentioned few other names as supporting roles. But only after the episode did i come to know tht the show has one main protagonist Radhika and along with her a parallel, Samaira...and tht this show also portrays their frndship.

Okay, i thought, it's more interesting to have frndship journey between two girls, more focused than showing love journey which is common. But only then i came to get tht they show 3/4th episode abt Samaira and 1/4th abt Radhika.

Samaira is ofcourse, charming, appealing it is easy to say, she is more experienced, while Radhika is just growing with each scene...but they do have to give her to grow, right? Samaira's bobd with her father, issues with her mother can be shown...yes, here comes a man who is playing love game with her. But is it more imp. to show than Raghika, the main girl's journey? Promo always show her as she's abt to do something..and then it's Samaira's story if we watch episodes.

Surely, after a long time..they showed something like Radhika is thrown out due to late and her mom wants her to come back. But still the pace is very slow and filled with many unnecessary scenes..with very few imp. ones. Also, the taking is very slow for a 10:30pm show.

Hope, they picks up before it is considered a flop. Still it is redeemable as it is a comparaitively new show. Focus on the main plot and increase the pace and reduce unnecessary scenes. Be straight to the point, You can do if u want bcoz the costume section is gud, sets and the actors r too.

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OmkaraKiParvati thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CORRECTION... The show has 4 leads and nt just one lead.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this show has 4leads out of which both sam n radhika r main lead.sam is not parallel lead.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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the promo's for this show is really bad. sam and neil I presume where shown from the beginning. I do not get why they where not include in the initially promo's because those promo's ended up being extremely misleading. I for 1 saw rads and I was not gona watch because I felt it was the same old same old. the promos have shown 1 thing the show is showing another. I wish there where more promo's of solely sam or neil or even that psyco Arjun so that fans would now that this show is not all ab rads
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Posted: 10 years ago
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they thought of promoting her as shez new but it backfired badly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Samaira and radhika both are main leads if you see the Montage you can get it. The show mainly about dosti of Sara like the title suggest dost yaarian manmarziya.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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The main problem of this show is nt the show by itself but its promos... they are always misleading... Should have shown all four leads from the beginning n it would have been a sure shot hit by now! They could have shown split screen n all four or maybe like they show in English shows all 4 sitting in different poses... would have been exciting! And evrybdy telling a smal introduction abt themselves... Rads abt hrr dreams, Sam abt finding herself, Neil about friendship n Arj something mysterious... Wud hv been rocking! Each person wud watch the show for their fav character leading to increased viewership.

Im saying this bcoz I wasn't inspired by the promos... I actually saw their rishikesh outing scene by accident when I was changing channels n luvd all three Sam, Neil n Rads hvng lots of fun! That hooked me to the show... So if they had shown all 4 evrybdy wud hv been interested frm day 1! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i agree with u the show should focus on friendship between two lead char
love and everything else we get to see everywhere
and if cvs really want this do well
then i think they should keep love tracks later
its too early to show love track
i mean common radhika came to mumbai to become something
they can't just show her falling in love with a guy and getting married !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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there r 4 leads but i agree wid u!!
they r smetimes dragging some specific unnecessary things!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -LovelyLakshmi-

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">'kisi aur ki wife banne se pehle mein apni life banana chahti hoo'

The promo made me sign up to watch manmarziyaa to watch the hurdles in Radhika's life and her journey of becoming something before having her own future family...

one more show towards women enpowerment after Everest and Dream Girl...i thought.

Watched the first episode...who is tht anthr girl who came even b4 the lead? i thought. I read an article regarding the show wen promo aired but then it only gave main girl's pic and mentioned few other names as supporting roles. But only after the episode did i come to know tht the show has one main protagonist Radhika and along with her a parallel, Samaira...and tht this show also portrays their frndship.

Okay, i thought, it's more interesting to have frndship journey between two girls, more focused than showing love journey which is common. But only then i came to get tht they show 3/4th episode abt Samaira and 1/4th abt Radhika.

Samaira is ofcourse, charming, appealing it is easy to say, she is more experienced, while Radhika is just growing with each scene...but they do have to give her to grow, right? Samaira's bobd with her father, issues with her mother can be shown...yes, here comes a man who is playing love game with her. But is it more imp. to show than Raghika, the main girl's journey? Promo always show her as she's abt to do something..and then it's Samaira's story if we watch episodes.

Surely, after a long time..they showed something like Radhika is thrown out due to late and her mom wants her to come back. But still the pace is very slow and filled with many unnecessary scenes..with very few imp. ones. Also, the taking is very slow for a 10:30pm show.

Hope, they picks up before it is considered a flop. Still it is redeemable as it is a comparaitively new show. Focus on the main plot and increase the pace and reduce unnecessary scenes. Be straight to the point, You can do if u want bcoz the costume section is gud, sets and the actors r too.

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that is the truth and I completely agree with you...and here the posts which u saw right they will talk something and they will never be acceptable ..thid is their usual

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