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Hi everyone, I noticed that there are only two fanfics for DSK, I went through all the pages and found two that havent even been completed yet. So I thought I might right one because they are such a cute couple. Anyways, first of all a character Sketch, then if you enjoy I will post Part 1.

Character Sketch:

Vikram Kapoor: A wealthy business man. Has two daughters, Ridhima and Anupama Kapoor. Is a widower, his first wife Kiran died on the day Ridhima was born. Has an adopted son Veer, he was in the hospital the day Ridhima was born and he was orphaned on that very day.

Anupama Kapoor: The daughter of Vikram Kapoor. She is the eldest at 21 years of age. Wants to become a fashion desginer. She wants to go to Delhi Arts University and study there, but doesn't know if her dad will allow her to go to Delhi from Mumbai to study. She is a creative, smart young girl who has her share of fun. She is her dad's favorite daughter.

Ridhima Kapoor: Everywhere she goes something bad happens. She goes to the temple there is a storm and the diya blows out. She goes to the mall and there is a blackout. She goes home, someone falls ill. Goes to the office, the business suffers huge losses. Therefore her dad despises of her and also because she is the reason Kiran died. Hates everyone, especially Anupama and Veer. Hangs out with a man in her college whose name is Mohit. She is 19 years of age.

Veer Kapoor: Adopted son, loved by his 'dad' and his sister, Anupama. There is a hate-hate relationship between Ridhima and Veer. Will do anything for his sister Anupama's happiness. He is 20 years of age.

Those were the Kapoor's now lets meet the Shikhav's (I think that is Chatainya's last name)

Shrada Shikhav: A caring mother, has one son and one daughter who is happily married. The son is older. They live together in a mansion in Delhi, they are rich people like the Kapoor's.

Chatainya Shikhav: A son who is willing to do anything for his mother's happiness, and is always in a heavy mood on his father's death day. His father died on the same day as Ridhima was born. but he doesn't know that, yet. He is a smart young dashing man who is always up to fun, but not on the day his father died. He is 23 years of age.

Aditi Verma: Chatainya's little sister. She is spoiled and pampered by both mother and brother. She is happily married and now lives in Mumbai, her husband's name is Rahul Verma., They live in a small flat together in Mumbai. She is a fun loving character.She is 22 years of age.

Those are the character's in this fanfic. If you like it please comment, if you don't like it still comment. Good or bad all comments are accepted.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: KripAngad-Kyph

Gr8! Can't wait to read!

thnx for the comment, but one comment is not enough to make me continue writing...please commment people😛

Edited by neha^^ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great work.. vikram hates ridhima.. i'm waiting for the story. 👏
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Riddima is manhoos?? 🤣

continue soon 😊
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Part 1
Sorry for the delay guys, I was very busy and schools starting in only two weeks and I haven't gotten my classes yet, so a bit tensed. Anyways enjoy. 😊

A young girl wakes up due to the ringing of her alarm clock. She gets up and doesn't bother to look at the time. She goes into the shower taking with her a light, white pyajami suit. She comes out dressed in it, her hair dripping wet. She sits infront of the mirror and combs her hair. She put on light masacra on her eyes and faint pink blush on her cheeks. A light pink lip gloss on her thin lips. She put on her lucky braclet gifted to her by her loving father on her 21st birthday. She wondered what she would get today.
She ran across the hall to her younger brother Veer's room. She opened the door and ran to his bed. She lifted the blankets only to find pillows and more blankets. She looked around and saw no one. As she was about to leave two hands covered her eyes.
??: Guess who?
Anupama: Veer
Veer: How did you know di?
Anupama: It was a lucky guess.
They laugh aloud on their sarcasm.

Veer: See you down in two minutes, di.
With that Anupama ran downstairs to see her father sitting on the sofa reading the newspaper. He was looking at the newpaper with confusion. Anupama came laughing to her dad.

Anupama: G..Good M..Moring Papa
Vikram: Good morning beta.
Vikram looked up and saw her daughter laughing.
Vikram: Kya hua beta?
Anupama: Papa, agar aap paper ulta paredenge to husi toh ayigi na? (If you are reading the paper upside down, then obviously I will laugh)
Vikram: Voh kya hai na beta, mera dyan nahi tha (I wasn't paying attention)
Vikram: Anyways, aaj tumhare jaanam din hai, tumhare liya ek chota se tofa hai.(Today is your birthday, a small present for you.)
Vikram gives her a little slender box wrapped in shiny pink paper. Anupama slowly opened it and found a beautiful watch. It was a light purple with a silver chain, her favouite color with silver. She gave her dad a hug.
Vikram: I'm glad you liked the gift beta, but do you want anything else for your birthday.He smiled at his now 22 year old daughter.
Anupama's smile slowly faded away and she hesitated. As she opened her mouth to say something, Veer came running down the stairs with lots of balloons in his hands, a huge box wrapped in silver and a big pink teddy bear. He ran to her and gave her the balloons and the teddy bear and the huge box. She gave the teddy a hug and put the box and teddy on the table and gave her brother a huge hug. He began to sing.

Veer: Happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday to di, happy birthday to you.
Anupama: Thank you Veer, voh papa mein aapse kuch baat karna chathi thi. Mein apni paradi katham karne chathi hoon. Maine college katham kardiya, par mein university jaana chathi hoon. ( Papa, I want to talk to you. I want to finish my study. I have finished college, but I wish to go to university.[I don't know if that system is in India but it is here in Canada.])

Vikram: Of course beta, kaunsi university hai? ( Which university is it?)

Anupama took a deep breath and said: Delhi University of Art and Design
She closed her eyes...


Read on to find out happens next 😃
Edited by neha^^ - 18 years ago
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Part 2...ENJOY

Vikram looked at her daughter and thought..Delhi? She wants to go to Delhi? ...Why not? But who will she stay with, who can I trust that my daughter will stay with? I know, Shrada bhabhi..yes I will send her to Shrada bhabi's house. He smiled to himself. He looked up at Anupama again, she was scared he could because her eyes were closed tightly and she was breathing deeply.

Vikram: Beta....
Anupama opened her eyes and looked at her father.
Vikram: Beta, tum jai sakti ho Delhi, lekin ek shaart par. He smiled. (You can go to Delhi, but on one condition.)
Anupama: Kaunsi shaart, papa? (What is the condition?)
Vikram: Shaart yeh hai ki tumhe Shrada bhabhi ke ghar par rehne paredega. (You will have to stay at shrada-ji's place.)
Anupama looked confused but agreed. She thought that she could finally be a fully secure fashion designer. 😃

Veer: Ab yeh bathen chorde, didi aap boliya aapko kahan jaana ha birthday maina ne ke liya? ( Where do you want to go to celebrate your birthday?)
Anupama: Hmm, mein? Mein toh dinner par jana chathi hoon. (Me, I want to go to dinner.)
Vikram: Kyun nayi beta? Hum chalenge na. (Why not child, we will go.)

A few hours later.

A girl comes down the stairs and goes to the kitchen. Everyone has eaten and she is the only one left like usual. She was used to the lonliness now. In fact, she enjoyed it very much. The girl was wearing a pair of jean capris with a green tank and yellow jacket. Her hair was tied in a messy ponytail, she hated her hair..it was always so curly and puffy.

She began to eat cereal when her phone rang. She looked at the screen of her cellophone and it flashed MOHIT.
??: Hello.
Mohit: Hello Ridhima darling. Yes this young lady is none other than Ridhima. 😔
Ridhima: Hey, Mohit. How are you? Where do you wish to meet today?
Mohit: How about in the park, it's a great day to go to the park today.
Ridhima: Seeya there in twenty minutes. Bye, love you.
Mohit: Bye....love you,too.
With that they hung up.

That night.

As Anupama, Vikram, and Veer head to the restaurant they were going to dine at, Anupama was listening to a romantic song in the car, which annoyed Veer alot, but he didn't say anything, afterall it was his di's birthday.

They reached the hotel. Anupama got out. She was wearing a green and magenta churidar with golden embroidery on it with a matching set. Veer came out wearing a pair of jeans with a white shirt and black blazer, the collar of the shirt folded out on the blazer. Vikram was wearing a black tux with a white shirt and black tie.

Vikram and Veer walked to the restaurant while Anupama realized her hand-bag was missing. She walked to the car and retrieved. She headed inside and sat down at the table Vikram and Veer were seated. A waiter came to them and they ordered their food. Veer ordered a champagne bottle.Vikram looked around to see if there was a restroom but noticed his friend, Milind instead. Vikram waved to him and he came over.

Vikram: Arre Milind, tum yahan? (Milind, you here?)
Milind: Haan mein yahan, koyi atraaz hai? He smiled. Arre mein toh apni pyari si betiya ko birthday wish karne gaye te ghar pe. Wahan patha chale ki tum lok yahan ao ho, toh phir mein, Veena, aur Ved yahan par chale aya. (Yes, me here. Do you have any problems? I went to your house to wish my lovely daughter but found out from home that you guys are here, therefore Veena, Ved, and I came here.)
Vikram: Ved bhi aya hai? (Ved has come too)
Milind: Haan. (Yes)

They show a pair of brown loafers and go up to show jeans and a pink shirt and with a white blazer on top. The show his goatee and then his sunglasses which he takes off with style. And Ved is introduced. He greets Vikram politely and shakes hands with Veer. When he gets to the birthday girl, his heart skips a beat.


What did you guys think?
Please leave comments. No one leaves comments, but there have been lots of views. Therefore I am only going to continue if I get 10 or more comments.

Edited by neha^^ - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg thats da best ff eva plz continue s00n
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Only one comment, not bad. Guess you guys dont like it. But this is for the people who do like it. It took alot of thinking to write this so enjoy...I didn't get a chance to edit it..so sorry for any errors.

Part 3: ENJOY

Ved looks at her. Meanwhile Anupama greets her uncle with hug and aunt with a hug too. She turns to see Ved gaping at her. There was a bit of drool about to escape his lips. It looked...well disgusting. Anupama took a tissue and handed it to him. He took but didn't know what to do with it. He just stood there clutching the tissue. He was mesmirized. Her beauty was too good, he presence was too much. Anupama waved her hand in front of him. He came out of his dazed trance. They were all looking at him, he was embarassed. They all broke into laughter.

Veer: Ved, did you see a girl for the first time? Seems like it, you were just gaping at my di..
Ved was more embarassed.

Laughing they all sat down. Ved drank a glass of water to ease down his embarassing scene. This is how everyone was seated. Ved sat down next to Veer, Veer was next to Vikram, who was next to Anupama, who was next to Milind who was next to Veena.It was a round table.

They began their dinner. Anupama ate little spice while Ved ate lots. Accidently, there orders got mixed. So Ved was eating what was supposed to be Anupama's food. And vice versa. Everyone else got their own order. Anupama took a bite. So spicy she thought. I thought I asked for little spice? She took another bite..This is defeintely not my order. Meanwhile, Ved was eating his. This is so plain he thought. He took some more bites and decided he needed more spice.Ved decided to call the waiter. Anupama thought the same because she now had tears running down her face. Luckily no one noticed. She wiped them away and called the waiter.

Ved/Anupama: WAITER.....they stare at each.
Ved: kya hua? (what happened?)
Anupama: mere khanna bahot he mirchi hai! ( My food is too spicy)
Ved: Mines too plain.
They stared at each.
Anupama, after a while,: I think are orders got changed.
They switch plates. Ved eats it and thinks its perfect and gobbles it down but Anupama walks up and throws hers away. She couldn't eat something that is already jhoot.(something eaten by someone else already..get it? 😕

She ordered something else and ate that. For desert there was something special. She got her ordered choclate pudding with whip cream and a strawberry on top with chocolate shavings on top, but it was in the form of a cake. The cake had one candle on it with, Happy Birthday Anupama written across it in a light purple. She was shocked. She blew out the candles and made a wish. A wish of keeping her loved ones safe. She cut the cake and fed the first piece to Vikram, who fed her back. Milind, who fed her back, Veena, who fed her back, Veer fed her back, and Ved, who she just fed...for some reason she didn't want to eat from his hands. He seemed like a weird person. Like he would take her eating from him a good way..she didn't know what that meant but she just didn't like Ved. Especially how he had stared at her when he first saw her. It was just disgusting.

After the cake, Veer pulled out the champagne bottle. He shook it with all his might and gave it to Anupama. She opened but didn't drink any. She didn't drink. She poured a glass for Veer, her father Vikram, her uncle Milind, Ved who drank about 4/5 glasses...in one gulp each. Veena refused. While the boys had their drinks, Veena and Anupama talked about Anupama's studying, etc.

After a while, they decide to go home. Anupama thinks she should drive to be safe. Ved and his family go their seperate way, while Anupama and her family go their seperate way.

When Anupama reaches her home, she gets a call on her cell. It's from her university, Delhi University of Art and Design.

Anupama:Hello?
??: Hello, this is a message for Anupama Kapoor.
Anupama:Speaking
??: You have been accepted to the college. We would like to meet you one Wednesday at 1:00pm. That is three days from now. Can you make?
Anupama: Can you hold on for a moment, please?
??:Of course
Anupama runs to her dad and tells him...he agrees.
Anupama: I can make it. Thank you for the message and waiting.
??: Your welcome. Bye
Anupama: Bye

Vikram:arre beta, do you really have to leave that early. Can't you stay back a few days.
Anupama:No papa, I will have to take the next flight there. I want to get to know the people I am staying with too. 😊
With that Anupama booked the earliest flight which was tommorrow at 9:15 am. She began packing immediately. She packed all her belongings checking not once, not twice, but thrice.

Veer came to her room as she finished checking everything. She realized she had forgotten the most important thing to her, a picture of her family. In this picture Anupama was standing between Vikram and Veer with badri kaka standing next to Vikram and Ridhima standing of to the side with her face barely visible. What you could see of her face was pure evil, that was Ridhima, pure evil. Veer came and dragged his di down where Badri kaka and Vikram sat.

Veer: Aaj raath aap nayi sone wali, aker aap ja rahi haan. Aur bahot din ke baad aange. (Tonight you are not going to go to sleep, afterall you are leaving and aur gaan come back after lots of days.)
Anupama, she wanted to disagree but couldn't bear to break his little brother's heart: Okay

They talked and talked about how she would settle in her university, and shrada-ji's house. (By the way, Vikram had called and made the arrangements before they went to the birthday dinner, Shrada ji had agreed happily but said her son wasn't home. He had gone to Goa with his friends for a few days on her request, so she would come and recieve her.) They laughed all night while Ridhima heard this and envied it. Her day at the park had been great. If you think making kids cry by taking the last ice cream and throwing it away is fun, then yes it had been a great day.

Morning came, Anupama was waiting in the car for Veer who had insisted on coming. She waited for him and he finally came with his hair gelled up, a pair of jeans with a pink t-shirt, he was ready to roll. He let the driver go and drove. He drove really fast and Anupama just loved it. He put the music on blast and made a 45 minute ride into a 25 minute ride. Anupama got off while Veer got off and took her luggage out. She was just in time for her flight. It was in 5 minutes. She quickly got her luggage checked and boarded. She waved to Veer as she said bye. She sat down and thought about her trip to Delhi, about staying away from her dad, brother, badri kaka, and her ......sister..

With that thought she dozed off.
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Part 4..Hope you like it.

She opened her eyes when she heard the speaker announce that there flight was about to land. She looked around and noticed a couple other people were sleeping. She waited for the flight. She was nervous now, really nervous with whom she was going to stay with. Last time she had visited Shrada aunty was 6 years ago. When she had turned 16. The flight landed and she unbuckled and got up. She walked out with her handbag. She waited for her luggage in the waiting area. Her luggage was checked again and she walked out. A sign flashed before her eyes. "ANUPAMA KAPOOR" it read in bold red. She walked towards the sign and looked at the person who was holding it. It was Shrada aunty. She gave her a hug.

Shrada: My, my you have grown so tall. And you are as beautiful as you ever were. Dare I say more. ..She laughed a kind laugh while Anupama smiled. They walked out of the airport and went to the car. It was a silver mercedes...it was luxiurious. She enjoyed the ride to her temporary home. She talked to Shrada-ji about her birthday and flight.

Shrada: Im glad you enjoyed your birthday. Well we are almost home. I wanted to tell you that there are only ladies in the house. My daughter, Aditi, she is going to be a mother soon, myself and you.

They arrived to the house and Anupama was astonished their house was beautiful. She walked in and the atmosphere was a kind atmosphere. Shrada called a servant and sent him to put Anupama's luggage in her room.

Shrada: come and eat something, you must be hungry.

Anupama: No aunty, it's okay. Can i go and freshen up first?

Shrada: Of course.

Shrada showed her room to Anupama.

Anupama freshened up. Her hair was wet and dripping and she combed it. She came downstairs in a simple churidar that was purple and green. And saw a lady. She looked pregnant, she must be Aditi, Anupama thought. She walked to her.

Aditi: Yeh lo, isse press kardo aur phir mujhe mera kaamre mein baj dehna. (Here take thesem iron them and send them to my room.) Yeh mera bhai ki shirts hai. Aur, kya tum is ghar ki nayi naukar ho? (These are my bro's shirts. And are you the new servant of this house?) And the iron is over there..she pointed to a ironing table and walked away.

Anupama..she thinks I am the new servant of this house.huh. Well I'll show her. She went to the ironing table amd burned all five of shirts. She folded them so the burn wouldn't show and went looking for Aditi.

She found Aditi in the kitchen. Anupama decided if she wanted to her plan to work, she must act like a servant.

Anupama: Mein yeh kahan par rak doon? (Where should i put these?)

Aditi was eating so she just pointed at the room next to Anupama's.

Aditi, she finished the bite that was in her mouth, : that is my brother's room put it in there.

Anupama went and put it in there. The room looked interesting.

That's it for now. Tell me what you think. 😃 Leave comments please.

Edited by neha^^ - 18 years ago
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plz plz plz cpontinue i love it soo far amaizing u are 😊

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