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Chapter 9- home sweet home...ghar toh bada hain...but gharwala sarfira hai...kitna man handled karta hain yeh raghu...pain mujhe ho raha hain...lolzzz...i m truly eager to know the dark side...loved it...love u tooo...

lovely yaar ...really story is very gripping...waiting for next updation...👏

Hey divya finally got to read the chapters...
it was a thrilling experience to read.. this story os really nerve recking and the darkness really scares me sometimes..😆.. but no offense... its the essence of dark story which i always like to read...

so finally the secrets are revealed... they are gangsters... as usual i guessed already when they made their first appearance..

i have a doubt... did they kept the girls forcefully for them... the another girl living with them... she also seems not happy being there?! Now i want to knoe the reason that why they kept the girls forcefully with them... also want to know more detail about the gangs... how they are involved in crime world and what kind of works they are involved with... along with rantara's story if you give some little details about these facts i think it will be really interesting to read...

Feeling so bad for antara... poor girl stuck in such a bad situation with no escape.. god knows what's gonna happen with her...

the fact is that, in every FF whenever antara get into trouble we assured ourself saying that.. 'don;t worry.. raghu is there for her..." but here raghu is the biggest trouble in her life... so we can't even give us the small assurance..such a mind boggling situation u have created and i can't praise u more for that... ⭐️

and cudoes to you for portraying this dark raghu... never in my wildest i can imagine him like that... in such utter dark, harsh type... i really can't fantasize about him in this story even if i try hard😆(sorry for that)... but instead he freaks me out sometimes....

but you don't need to worry about that,.. i am enjoying fully this beat of raghu from my heart... i won't ever tell you to make him softer cause that's the essence of dark raghu which haunts me to the story..⭐️

now i hope u don't mind a bit criticism. Divya no doubt this story concept is mindblowing... and i loved to read whatever u write... but for some updates i felt like the story is being a bit slow.. well we are loving the portrayal and tashan between headstrong antara and this dark raghu... but its being repetitive somehow,.,... in all the updates raghu is being harsh to her, manhandling her, trying to dominate over her and antara is reacting and screaming on him... no doubt i love that rather than being dumb she give it back to raghu... but now i think that instead of screaming around i want antara to think sanely now and take the matter with cool mind... i mean she could get herself involved into knowing more about them so that she can hatch a fullproof escape plan... may be the other girl can help her too and they can get along well with each other...
its just my POV... i won't say to follow it fully... i just gave my opinion... please don't mind... i love whatever u read but have more expectations as u r one of my fav... i won;t ever say it if antara was a naive timid girl here but u portrayed her as equally headstrong and determined so i would like to see her playing a bit mind game... as i always love to see a headstrong, mindful heroine rather than a timid one.. and u are exactly giving that...
sorry in advance if my words hurt you...

and please if possible update never go back.. missing that story so much as its on my fav list...😳

and now its all for today...😆... take care and lots of love..

Awesome story.. read it all at one time...

pls update soon. It's been do late.

pls update nxt part. it's been so long n now as a penalty u hve to make it really really long 😉 pls yaar don't scrap it midway. D story is awesome n has a lot of potential. Hope ull update soon n it will b a large 1.

Thanks for Support Everyone😉😉😉

Tere FF ke end tak mai jaroor physco ho jaongi...raghu ka aisa roop dekhkar...yeh kam tha jo rehan bhi nazar daalne laga bechari antu pe...

So Rehan love antu that y raghu kidnapp her...