rantra ss (dark n mature) : a mistake

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  • hey everyone m harshita singh after reading all the ff, ss and os finally m writing a story ... hope u all give it a try...
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she was all shattered standing der all numb she jst cnt believe wat she heard!

"no...no..no u cnt do this to me...t..tum..tum mazak kar rhe ho na raghu" she asked him stammmering tears were constantly flowing down her cheeks.." he laughed wickedly n said" mazak...ha ha ha mazak!! Haan antra yeh sab ek mazak hi toh hai hamara relation mera tumse pyaar karna yeh sab ek mazak hi tha" she ws hell shocked n asked him "no raghu don..dont say dat i..i..knw dat u luv me i hv seen it in ur eyes( nw she cupped his face wid her hand) y r u doing dis to me raghu" she started crying loudly . he freed his face from her grip n phushed her " luv?? wat luv? ohh u mean jo humare beech mein ha..ha..ha..ha tumhe..tumhe laga ki mein TUMSE pyaar karunga ?? raghunath naik tumse se pyaar kareya?? kitni bewakoof ho tum( he held her tightly from her shoulder so dat it pains) " raghu u r hurting me" she cried

raghu " tum ladkiya kitni bewakoof hoti ho meine pyaar se baat kya ki tumhe laga ki mein RAGHU tumse pyaar karne laga hun?? meine kabhi tumse pyaar nhi kiya antra mein infact i nvr luved u it ws jst a game i wnted to show u dat raghu gets watever he wnts" n he pushes antra so hard dat she hit d wall n her head start bleeding..

she cry loudly in pain"ahhh...(sob...snif...sob) den he turns n start moving out of d room whn he feels a soft hand on his wrist he turns n see dat antra is holding his wrist she says" plz raghu dont dont do dis wid me...dont..(sob..snif) leave me alon...i cnt live widout u raghu...cries...i luv u raghu i luv..!! " he shout" i dont care wat u feel n wat u think!" saying dis he releases his wrist frm her hand rudely n moves out!! leaving antra all alone hurt n shattered

she ws nt able to stand anymore n fall wid a cry n she shouts loudly as if wnted her all pain to get over"RAGHU!!!! ahhh..."!!

i hope u all like it plz tell me if u want me to coninue it or not

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harshita

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Rasika9 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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šŸ‘ plz continue it,plzzz
oshinchaudhary thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Nice start. Continue pls


thank u so much will continue it soon
oshinchaudhary thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rasikap_99

šŸ‘ plz continue it,plzzz

will conti nue it soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey harshi...😊
i m suchi..
prologue is interesting dear..šŸ˜›
antu is heart broken...šŸ’”
plz plz plz continue soon😃

n yes..give fantastic name to ur story 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

hey harshi...😊

i m suchi..
prologue is interesting dear..šŸ˜›
antu is heart broken...šŸ’”
plz plz plz continue soon😃

n yes..give fantastic name to ur story 😳

hii suchi..
m glad that u find it intresting...
will surely continue it soon...
well m trying to find one good name...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: oshinchaudhary

hii suchi..
m glad that u find it intresting...
will surely continue it soon...
well m trying to find one good name...

coolšŸ˜›..
congratulations n best wishes!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tsuchi

coolšŸ˜›..
congratulations n best wishes!!!😃

thank u so muchšŸ¤—
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey harshi (hope u dont mind me calling u that)
this is amazing and different
waiting for mroe
pls cont asap and PM me :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

Hey harshi (hope u dont mind me calling u that)

this is amazing and different
waiting for mroe
pls cont asap and PM me :)


hi
and of course u can call me harshi...😃

will continue soon...

luv ya
harshita


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