2 States: An Estranged Love Story.. - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
Awesome character sketch!

Looks super promising!

Can't wait for the first part! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Finally updated a chapter. I am sorry its a short one and totally horrible..

Read it at your own risk!!!..🤢


"Nahi maai, mujhe Delhi nahi jaana plz",Raghu pleaded. "Tumhe Delhi jaana hi hoga",answered DM. "Aai, plz Raghu ko yahin rehne do na. Bhai hai vo mera",requested Machmach. "Tum chup hi raho Machinder. Iss Raghu ne tumhara dimag khrab kr dia hai",said DM angrily. "Maai plzz...",they both started simultaneously. "Bas, Raghu parso Delhi jayega! Ye mera aakhiri faisla hai. Ab koi kuch ni bolega. So jao ab tum dono",DM shouted. They both went back to their rooms without speaking a word.

The next day, Raghu started packing for the journey. He held the tickets in his hands and kept staring at them. He did not want to leave his city but he had to because he could go against DM. He wanted to pursue a career in psychology. Many colleges in Kolkata offered the courses but they were not so elite class. DM could not compromise with her dignity in the society. So she decided to send Raghu to Delhi where he would study in a high-class college. Raghu was missing his mother alot that day. He remembered all the moments they had spent together. The way she used to love him; the way she treated him as her prince; the way she ignored all his mistakes; the way she used to feed him with her own hands. He always longed for her. He always missed her. Remembering all the precious moments, a tear trickled down his cheek and fell on the ticket. "Aunty ki yaad aa rahi hai?",Machmach said from behind. "Arey Machmach tu kab aaya",Raghu asked, trying to sound happier. "Abhi abhi, jab tu ro raha tha",Machmach replied. "Yeda hai kya,main nahi ro raha tha",said Raghu replied."Bhai 15 saal se tuje jaanta hu. Itna toh pehchaan hi gaya hu tuje. Chal naatak band kar ab",Machmach said. Raghu couldn't control his tears anymore. He burst out and started crying loudly. Machmach hugged him. "Bas kar Bhai. Tuje pareshan nahi dekh sakta main. Chal rona dhona chod aur apni 400 watt wali smile de jispe saari ladkiya marti hain",Machmach broke the hug and said, laughing. Raghu smiled. No one understood him better than Machmach. He was blessed to get such a brother. They hugged again. "Main tuje bohot miss karunga Bhai", Machmach said, almost in tears. "Main bhi",Raghu said,about to cry again. "Apna Dhyan rakhio aur koi item mere liye ho toh btaio",Machmach said. "Hehe, Yeda! Haan bata dunga aur tu b apna khyal rakhna",Raghu said laughing. And They spent some precious time together.

The next day Raghu left for Delhi.More adventures of Delhi to come your way..

I am sorry again for this crap. Everything you feel like throwing at me is welcomed.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
What a super duper start jass 👏

Oh..DM is so dominating 😡

Aww..I love Raghu and MM's brotherly bond 😆

I'm waiting for Raghu.and Antara's first encounter 😳

Thankyou for the pm and continue soon 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

fantastic update

i loved it
DM urghhh hate her
pls cont asap cant wait for rantara to meet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
it ws nice dear...thank god atleast mm
is dere fr raghu..who loves n cares fr him..
waitung fr rantara frst meet...
so update soon
thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Interesting CS and update
Awww my Raghu is very sad he doesn't want to leave
But that daya dayaan 😡
Thank God MM is there for him 😃
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Super duper amazing start Jass!

Loved it!

And I hate DM!

Don't call it crap! 😛

Thanks for the pm and update soon!
Edited by Wahian4lyf - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
Nice update 👍🏼
poor raghu really misses his mother 😭
dm is so bad 😡
Jus loved d brothers bond 😊
do continue asap
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
I loved the update so much!!!!
It was awesome! 👏

You write so well jass!!

I think I would like to thank DM for the first
Time for sending Raghu to Delhi. At least he is
Going to meet Antara there...and then they will fall
In love! Yay!! I can't wait! !😳

Please update soon and tfpm. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Hey jass!!!
Finally u came here!!!😛
Dont call it crap...Beautiful character sketch!! & a wonderful start!!!
Do continue & update ASAP!!😃
Coming to the update...
DM is so rude🤔
Loved the Bonding between Raghu & MM...
Poor raghu...has no other go..& must listen to DM...eagerly waiting for Antu's entry!!

P.S: Suggestion- U can add pic's if u want :)
Edited by Josederose - 11 years ago

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