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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update
Finally they all going to help bring them together
Please do cont ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello..its me again! Thnks for your lovely comments
I really appreciate it..next part updated and i'm sure you will enjoy!

Part 8

Raghu was on cloud 9 when antara said yes for the village trip! Everyone was extremely
Excited for this trip. .this was the first step in mission rantara milaap! Antara's cell phone falls
On the floor. .she bends to pick it up. .when everyone gives thumps up to each other! Raghu
Had a wide grin on his face. .he started to think and plan how he'l spend time with his miss kaul
In the village. .aji cleared her throat and that brought him out of his trance. .
Mm, ruksana Were loading the jeep with ajii's stuff. .antara was also helping. ..on her way out..
Aji called her..antara beta ye cup kitchen me rakh de..ji ajii and takes the cup to the kitchen. .
Antara went into silent mode when she saw him pouring chai for himself. .he was blowing on
His hand as if he just touched a hot tea pot! Simple si kaam nahi kar sakta ye..gosh! Antara
Shooks her head in disbelief! Hatye may kardeti hu..raghu stood there numb seeing her so
Close to him..he wasn't moving. .raghu plz move I will do it..like a innocent little child he obeyed
And moved from there. .she poured a cup and handed it to him. .he took the cup without shifting
His gaze from her face. .he touched her hand in the process. .antara felt shock waves going down her
veins! Raghu felt the same. ..she lifted her face ..her eyes met his. .mera mahi tu moment...their eyes
spoke volumes. .she shyly lowered her gaze. .and he before he could speak she left...was she blusing?
Omg she was blushing! Raghu smiled and said:ye to shurwaat hai miss..aage aage dekhti ja...ek din
Aayega jab tum mujhse toot ke pyaar karegi..he runs his fingers in his hair...
Antara bids good bye to mami. .apna khayaal rakhna antara. .ji mami...she takes her lunch n back
Pack n leaves. .at the jeep. .oh gosh! There is no room for me! MM and ruksana sitting in the front.
Aji at the back with all her stuffs..where will I sit she thought. ...aji's voice startled her. .antara beta
Tu raghu ke saath uski car se aa..GREAT! Now I'm stuck with him again! God. .whatever you are doing
With me I don't like it! She heads towards his car. .opens the back door to sit. .to her surprise
The seat was all packed with stuffs! Her bag. .raghu's back Pack. .lunch containers and etc etc!
Oh God! Ab kiya hoga?
Raghu comes and opens the front door for her..miss kaul there is no room at the back so you
Have to sit in the front with me. .and he winks at her! Antara felt butterflies in her belly! Dont tell
Me I have to travel with him all alone! And sitting close to him...pls God save me!
Raghu standing there holding the door. .he was trying to read her expressions. .miss kaul. ..
Kiya huwa..baith na..we are getting late. .antara left with no option slowly goes and sits in the front
Raghu sits and looks at her..Raghu felt antara was nervous. .miss kaul. .seatbelt pls..antara quickly
pulls the belt..but it was stuck! She kept on pulling but nothing happened. .raghu was watching all
This..miss kaul may karta hu..raghu leans on her body to pull the belt..his hot breath on her face and
Neck..their faces just inches apart. .was too much for both to handle. .while pulling the belt he rubs
her soft bosom with his arms. .antara choked. .raghu felt shock waves in his veins. ..he shifted his
gaze to her deep blue eyes...they share a heated eye lock! Both were searching something in each others
eyes. .Their heart beats racing! He shifted his gaze to her pink lips..he lowered his head to kiss her. .
Antara pushed him..raghu. .she said..raghu quickly came back to his senses. .sorry he said and started
the car and drove away. ..
On the way..both were silent..raghu was stealing glances of her every now and then. .then finally he
said. .miss kaul tere moan vrath hai kiya? Nahi..fir chup kiyu ho? Fir say something na..otherwise
I'll fall asleep while driving. .mujhe sannata pasand nahi samjhi..antara thought if I don't talk he
might get upset. .and might pull over. .what will happen then? He might. .he might. .oh God may bhi
kiya kiya soch leti hu..miss kaul. .kaha kho gayee? Nahi woh may soch rahit thi ki..ki..aji gao me
Kitne din rahegi. .
Raghu:shayad 1month ya usse bhi zyada.she has a herbal treatment to go through. .
Antara:I see..does she has families in the village? Antara wasn't looking at him while talking. .his looks
were too much for her to handle. .his black attire. .back jeans. .black vest. .those muscles. .uff...
Why I'm so attracted to him? There is some kind of a force that is pulling me towards him. .do I feel for
him?nahi antara. .you have to stop..you cant fall in love remember. .stop thinking about him girl!
Raghu:Kiya soch rahi thi jo itna pasina nikal aya?antara quickly touches her temple..she was sweating
..she quickly wipes it with her wrists. .raghu smiled at her actions. .
She grabs her water bottle from her bag..and starts drinking. .tumme chahiye? She asked him..
Raghu:ha chahiye na..sab kuch..
Antara:what sab kuch..I'm asking you for the water. .raghu quickly realized what he just said. .ha.chahiye
Na paani..antara takes out the straw and hands the bottle to him..miss kaul tu dekh rahi I'm driving
how can I drink..aur why did you take out the straw? Dekh kiya rahi ..straw wapas daal ke paani pila
Antara was speechless. .he wants to drink from the same straw! Miss kaul. .kitna sochti hai tu..I'm
thirsty. .paani bina marogee kiga?antara quickly puts the straw back and takes it to his mouth. .
They both look at each other. .he starts drinking while still looking at her. .Antara lowered her gaze
as she was turning red! Raghu.. aage dekho u r driving. .he stops the car..ab to koi problem nahi hai na?
He covers her hand with his rough one..squeezing it a little he drinks the water never letting her hand
go..his miss kaul was all red by now. .her head still down ..was she blushing? Raghu was enjoying
her facial expressions. .he massaged her hand..she hissed in pain. .raghu plz mera haath...raghu quickly
released her soft hand..thnks..he said and with a grin on his face and he starts the car...
May do din isske saath kayse katongi? What if i start liking him? She was searching for answers
when a policeman stopped them..
Raghu:kiya huwa inspector. .is everything ok?
Policeman:we just had a terrorist attack in this area and in the town. .incoming and outgoing
vehicles are prohibited. .there is curfew order in effect. .
Rantara:what?
Policeman:pls park your car..get your Stuffs and follow me. .
Antara:but where are you taking us? She was really worried now!
Policeman:can u see that hotel there..you'll have to spend the night there..all rooms are full except
one..you guys are lucky to get that room..warna raat kaha kaattha..
Raghu:kuch nahi hoga miss kaul tu dar mat..may hu na..kuch nahi hone doonga tujhe samhji. .
antara nodded. .they took their stuffs and followed the policeman. .people fighting and screaming
could be heard...guns fires..omg! Antara covers her ears as raghu slides his hand around her shoulders
..dar mat miss kaul. .policeman escorted them to the hotel. .they were about to reach the door when
felt something and turned. ..a gunman was pointing a gun towards antara who was anware of this..
he fired...raghu pushed antara inside and took the bullet on his shoulder! Antara screamed!
The guards pulled them inside and closed the door! Antara saw the blood on his shoulder. .she starts
crying. .raghu ..goli..goli lagi hai tumme..hospital jana parega. ..she was scared! Kuch nahi hoga
miss kaul. .goli lagi hai..nikal jayega..dont worry. .antara was tightly holding raghu's hand as they
were taken to their room..
It was big room with big bed..sofa and tables. .and also a small kitchen too...guards came in with
their bags..listen guys..one of the guard said..not too much noise and no lights after 6 is allowed. .
any kind of light is not allowed otherwise terrorist will be alerted and they can attack any time at night
So lock the door from inside. .the main switch will be shut down by 6 pm..saying this he leaves. .
Raghu sits on the bed. .he was bleeding. .miss kaul tu karam paani leke aa..a towel and knife..
Antara:knife. .knife se kiya karoge? Goli nikalunga aur kiya. .Antara dar ke maare kaamp rahi thi..
Miss kaul jaldi karna dard ho raha hai! She collects everything and brings it to him...raghu removes
the bullet with intense pain. .antara covering her ears and eyes closed was crying non stop...she
cant see him in pain. .his pain was felt by her. .she sat there rubbing his back. ..and crying. .raghu felt
her tears falling on his back..miss kaul rona band kar yaar..I'm fine. .she cleaned him..wiped his face
with warm water..cleaned the wound and hands...then bandaged his shoulder. .seeing her caring
for him he forgot about his pain..her face spoke volumes. .she was sad and worried. ..tears streaming
down her cheeks. .raghu..she spoke softly. .tumne meri jaan bachaai..dobara..she looks at him. .
he looks at her. .may ne apni jaan bachai hai miss kaul..his eyes were speaking. ..her eyes were
searching for answers in his eyes. .mahi tu moment. ..their cute eye lock was broken by his phone
ringing. .it was MM. .he narrates everything to him. .he is shocked! Raghu told him that him and antara
will be in the village next day..not to worry. .mm and them have reached the village safely...
After talking to raghu he looks up..bole to ye tera plan hai na? He smiles and explains everything
to ajii n ruksana who were quite worried about them..aji takes a sigh of relief. shayad ye upar
waale ka plan hai ki woh dono aaj saath rahe..n she smiles..

Antara freshened up..raghu was lying on the bed..he was watching her every move..it was 5 pm..
one hour then the lights will be off! Antara was scared of the dark..how will I spend the night with
him and woh bhi without light! She was lost in thought when said...miss kaul tumara sochna hogaya
hoga to hum kuch khaale..we have one hr before the light shuts off. .and I'm so hungry. ..
Antara nods and leaves for the kitchen. .thank God ki yaha kitchen hai She said. ..she heats up the food
and arranges everything on a plate and takes it to raghu...thanking mami in her heart for the food
Raghu sits up..he was in so much pain. .sambhal ke raghu lagjayega..she puts pillows behind his
back. .she hands him the plate..he takes it with one hand but how will he eat..his right hand was
wounded..he just sits there and stares at her. .Antara saw him. .he wanted her to feed him...
She understood and takes the plate from him..and feeds him..antara felt a strange feeling arising
in her..tu bhi kha na miss kaul. .nahi mujhe bhook nahi..may baad me kha lungi..baad me kab jab
lights off hojaye?chal kha abhi..she eats..one bite in his mouth and one in her mouth. .her fingers
touching his lips..she shivered! Raghu was so lost in her ..he took her fingers in his mouth and closed it
antara winced in pain! Raghu's action was sending shock waves down her body! Raghu..choro
mera haath...oucch!..raghu dard horaha mujhe. .her fingers stuck in between raghu's sharp teeth!
he released her fingers. .her fingers were burning so she quickly puts it inside her mouth and sucked
on it! Fingers still inside her mouth when she realized what she just did..she saw his killer eyes on her
she takes her fingers out. .her face was all red! Raghu was enjoying all this! I'm still hungry miss kaul
she starts to feed him again. .she was avoiding his intense look. .what's happening to me? Why am
liking whatever he does to me? Do I like him? Have I started to f...no stop it right there! This cant be true!
raghu:miss kaul mera hogaya..ji..she takes the plate and runs to the kitchen. .breathing heavily. .
Raghu:miss kaul half an hour left. .whatever you have to do..do it fast..hearing that her heart beats
started to race..I have to tell him ki I'm scared of the dark. .and I cant sleep alone. .she quickly washes
her hands takes out body lotion and rubs it on her arm and hands. .raghu was watching all this. .
miss kaul kiya laga rahi hai..it smells nice. .kiyu you want some too?.. she stands up and goes to
him and puts some lotion on his forehead...some on his nose. .some on his cheeks and some on his
chin..raghu was numb..miss kaul ye ladies lotion hai..ha to? She laughed at his face with white spots!
Finally miss antara kaul was laughing! Raghu was speechless..he was mesmerized by her Beauty
once again. .this was the first time he saw her laughing! Antara goes to him and rubs the lotion on his
face to make It even. .she massaged his face all over. .raghu's feelings were Rising now. .he was losing
control. .her hands on his face was driving him crazy!

What will happen next? Chalo comment maro ab!
More hardcore romance on the way! Take care. .love ya all!


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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
full on rantaraa... they stuck together... lol..
loved it
Edited by ifians - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Ohhh i love these terrorist...
Antara raghu kay sath stuck up...
Woww...
Raghu got a bullet and antara hell scared...
RaNtara romanve was perfect...
But what happens next??
Antara scared of dark and sleeping alone...
Ab kia hoga???
Update asap...
I m waiting...
Edited by hayakhan5 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Omggg kitna pyaara update tha
..raghu too much h yaar same straw se
Paani peena hai use toh..so god also
helping dem han struck in hotel all alone
So cute rantara moments...
Hmmm nxt update m rantara monents hobge..
Ab hw we vl wait
Plz update soon.waiting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Loved it
Finally they are alone together
Wonder what will happen 😆
Please cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
nice update with lovely journey..😊
oh! he got hurt by bullet...bt now fine..😊
antu applying lotion on his face..😆
continue soon😊waiting fr more rantara moments😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Pehle to PM ME !!! Its an order !!😊 Arre yaar, itna accha FF and I don't get PMs for it .. 😳 Lovely update . Oh god I need another update fast.. Plz update asap.
I'll give my review:
Raghu saved his Miss Kaul -It showed his love for her and his selflessness for her. I just loved it
Antara couldn't see Raghu in Pain - Her pain was more than his physical pain.
The feeding scene- So cute !!! Brilliantly written.
BTW ,You write really really really really reallly really well...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

Pehle to PM ME !!! Its an order !!😊Arre yaar, itna accha FF and I don't get PMs for it ..😳Lovely update . Oh god I need another update fast.. Plz update asap.

I'll give my review:
Raghu saved his Miss Kaul -It showed his love for her and his selflessness for her. I just loved it
Antara couldn't see Raghu in Pain - Her pain was more than his physical pain.
The feeding scene- So cute !!! Brilliantly written.
BTW ,You write really really really really reallly really well...



Thank you...your lovely comments inspires me to write more and more!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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When r u updating dear!!???

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