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Posted: 11 years ago
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another untitled ss of mine 😆😆
i was thinking of starting an ss on the track thats going to be coming up 😭😭 and like how i want the track to be like.
But i won't update this one until i've completed rantara after marriage and dooriyan 😆
which i will complete sometime this week😆😊


Part 1 :


"Raghu yeh bacha tumhara hai par mai tumhe kaise bataun". said antara whilst standing in her room looking at her newborn baby boy in her ams

"hiya antu darling" .said satya whilst walking into the room 🤢

"how many times have i told you not to show me that ugly face of your's and get lost" said antara

"oh itna gussa kyun".said satya

"just shut the 🤬 up and leave". antara shouted

"okay calm down im leaving" said satya

satya walked out the room and antara lay the baby into his cot and broke down

" mai apne papa ke qatil ko kaise kahun ki yeh bach uka hai" antara said whilst crying

" simple usse mat batao" said daya mai

antara turned around to see daya mai

" tu kya kar rahi hai mere kamre mai nikal abhi ke abhi yaha se buddhi" shouted antara

"chup karke meri baat sun ajji ne kaha ki iss jage pe ana hai tumhe akele baby ko rukhsana ke ghar chod ke" said daya mai

she handed antara a piece of paper antara took it an thought that becauseajji told her to go she has to go.

satya did the same thing with raghu he passed him a piece of paper with some place's address on it.

Raghu and antara left the house seperately not knowing they were both going to the same place...


i know its short but i had to leave i there 😆😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow loved it shall i think of the title as well
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

wow loved it shall i think of the title as well

thanks 😆😊
yes please help me 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haha i love antaras attitude. Great story please continue. 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It is interesting . Loved . Waiting eagerly when they meet each other the same place 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: honeybees22

Zindagi (namefor this ss)

love it awww thanks 🤗
tujhe itne good names kaha se ate hai? 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonia555

love it awww thanks 🤗
tujhe itne good names kaha se ate hai? 😆

rantara ko soch ke sab kuch ata hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Serena.V

Haha i love antaras attitude. Great story please continue. 😆

aww thanks 😆😊
will be updating after the other two or maybe earlier 😆😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sonia 😡
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: liana2304

It is interesting . Loved . Waiting eagerly when they meet each other the same place 😊

awww thanks 😆😊
but what will happen t the place they are going too 😲😭

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