antra fasting for raghu. ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Guys as we all k w that karwa chauth s coming up.. and as rantra is in lov n this karwa chauth always play special palce in lover life to get them closer . Its shows more intensity n passion in there lov
N if lover r young n fresh like ramtra then it will be treat to watch to I wish cv will show some thinng on this
Guys I hav write something
. I want to see somethin like this
Just a small intake on KC from ma side

antra ne raghu ke liye fast rakha hai n basti main kawra chauth ki tayari chal rahi haii mai ne organise kiya hai sab ke liye a comman pooja n all
Antra is also there n raghu n also there dono ek dosare ko dekkh rahe haii.. but still raghu is arrangin thinks for function
Raghu Antra ko kehta hai..- miss call kya aaj mu kyu latka rakha haii mm kaya baat haii..
Antra- raghu.. mujhe tang mat karoo ..ese banrahe ho jese tumhe pata nai. Mujhe bhout bhuk lagi haii..aur upar se yeh chand bhi nai nikal abhi tak roz to ab tak nikal jata haii..

Raghu- dekh chand to apne tim pe hi tapke gaa. Tu ek kaam kar kuch kahleee ..
antra - raghuuu. Majak mat karoo tumhe pata hai na nai kah saktii
Raghu- kaye kooo .. maine kaha tah vart rakhne ke kilye..

Antra raghu ko cute puppy eyes se pout face bana ke dekhti haii.. aur jane lagti haii.raghu us ka hath pakar kar rokta haii.. aur kehta haii .. side main padi plate main se mithayi uthata haii .
Aur antra ke paas jake kaan main kheta haii
Raghu- sun yeh le chupke se kahle kisis ko pata nai chale
Antra pahle mithayi ko dekh ti ahi fir raghu ki traf guur ke dekhti hai aur ua ke hath pe hath marti hai mithayi niche gir jati haii.
Antra- tum pagal ho kya main ese kese kah sakti hu.
Raghu- aoooch.. maar kyu rahi haii tujhe bhook lagi hai naa. Le Khale chup chaap.kisi ko pata nai chale h
gaaa..

Antra- raghuu... tumhe kuch nai pata main ja rahi huu..chup raho tum.

Raghu- lo maine kya kiya.. eh miss call sunna .. bappa yeh ladki log kaa locha na apnu ke samjh ke bahr haii.. pahle kahti hai bhook lagi haii khilo to kahti hai nai kahn..

Tbhi ajji ati hai chintu yeh kya khusar pusar kar raha haii ..
Raghuu- yeh aap ki antar is ka locha apnu ki samjh ke bahr haii.. raghu sari baat bata haii ..

Ajji- tu bhi yeda hai raghnath naik.. us ladki ne tere liye karwa chauth ka vart rakha haii .. tujhe pata hai yeh vart har ladki ke liye kita important hota haii ese nai todh saktee. Is vart ko sirf har ladki pooja karne ke chand ko dekh ne ke baad hi apne pati ya jis se woh pyar karti hai (lover) us ke hatho se pani pi ke hi kuch kathi haii (ajji expain every think to Raghu n tell her to manaofy her coz she s fasting for him raghu all of sudden felt so much loved n overwhelmed coz no one has ever loved him truly n purely in his entire life all of sudden his life become soo special to someone n he is feelin happy n special frm inside )

All the ladies were gathered in basti and doing pooja antra is also doing pooja as its her first fast so ajji is explainng her all the rituals. Raghu is standing n corner and watching antra she is looking pure beauty. In royal blue net lengha. With big maanng tika n forheadn n neckpeice..

At night 8 pm

Antra in her room removing her jewellery. N then ahe got msg from raghu..

' library terrace. Now its urgent'

After reading this masg antra chupke sab se najar bacha ke terrace pe jati hai n she saw whole terrace is decorated with flowers n candles waha terrace pe ek jhula hai jo ki flowers se decorated haii ..
Antra look here n there but found no body she got tensed. N called raghu name

Antra- raghu... raghu.. kaha ho tum.. raghu. . Dekho mujhe darayo mat ...

Raghu comes n he hold her fron waist from behind.. she turn her neck and see raghu s standin. Antra jese hi kuch bolne lagti haii raghu us ke lips pe figure rakhta hai n said- shhh. And turns her
Raghu- antraaa... he cares her cheek.. n said..mujhe nai pata tha ki main kabhi kisi ke liye itna important hogay.. ki koyi mere liye is traha vart rakhe ga
.. maine kabhi nai socha tha ki kabhi koi mere lif esa hoga jo. mere liye meru jaa se bhi jada kimti honaye gaa..aaj tujhe ese pooja karte dekha.. tu pheli baar laga ki baapa ne jo kuch mujh se cheena use kahi jada mujhe aaj lotha ya hai... tujhe deke mujhe.

Antra is lookin n raghu eyes n can see his pain, lov sadness and happy all at same time.. she huges him tightly..

Antra- shhh .. bhut bolte ho tum.. main humesha tumhare paas rahu gii. Humesha tumahre saath rahu gii. Tum cha ho ge to bhi mujh se picha nai chuda payo ge..Samjhe .. mr raghunath naik..
Both smiled n then raghu make a point at sky n both looked at full moon.. that look soo glossy n shiny. .

Raghu- kab se kah rahi thi bhook lagi ahii ab vart nai todh na dekh mujhe bhut bhook lagi hai jaldi kar..
Antra smiles n nodded her head n agreement. .
Then she took her net duppata m her hands and use it like chani n looks at moon first n then raghu .. both stares at each other... raghu takes a glass n his hand make her drink the water n same did buy antra..
After that raghu antra ko jhule ki tarf le jata hai aur dono wha bate hai aur ek dosare ko kahan kilate haii..




So guys that it.. i knw bhut bakwaas haii.. now u can throw tamatr and chapales.. .alll r welcom. But Plzz doo share ur views n hit the lik button if u like it..

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honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omg this is so gud
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neha.angel thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kaminooo. Koi to comment karoo kesa haii acha hai bura hiaa bakwaas naii awson haii .. kuch to reaction do bas padh padh ke maje le raho hoo comment kare bahar se bhulwaoo special kisi kooo..
alishamerchant_ thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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that was sweet loved their nok jhok!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice special d last bit :)
Posted: 11 years ago
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It's awesome... I hope cvs will see it and provide us KC in the show. .. fingers crossed
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha.angel

Kaminooo. Koi to comment karoo kesa haii acha hai bura hiaa bakwaas naii awson haii .. kuch to reaction do bas padh padh ke maje le raho hoo comment kare bahar se bhulwaoo special kisi kooo..



I haven't read your post yet but had to comment on this one for sure!🤣🤣

Having loved this post, I'm sure I'll love the original one too!!😆😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

that was sweet loved their nok jhok!



Me too! Very typical of their respective characters...

Nicely done. I have a bit of a hard time reading hindi (technially hinglish - or whatever you want to call it) but still very enjoyable!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was so cute ! ☺️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so sweet ..if this happens

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