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Posted: 12 years ago

First of all to tell you guys this is a co-creation made by me(Parin) and Chandni- (Chandni)

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Antara is all decked up in bridal attire and is sitting on a large white bed in a large room as a newly wedded bride. Her eyes were glancing at the room. The whole room was decorated with red roses and candles everywhere. The bed was also decorated with rose petals. There Raghu enters the room and locks the room from inside. Antara sees Raghu coming towards her and her heart starts beating faster.

"Antara, what is happening to you. You have waited for this moment all your life then why are you getting nervous now. No Antara dear, no you are not getting nervous.." she thought as Raghu approached her.

There Raghu comes and sits in front of Antara and holds her hand and kisses it. Antara feels shy and looks down. Raghu looks at her lovingly and comes closer to her. He is about to kiss her when suddenly Antara's face is drenched with water, she opens her eyes to find her Mumma pouring water on her making her face and hair wet.

Antara (getting up and cleaning her face) - Mumma, what's this. I am totally wet.

Mrs. Kaul - Good for you Antara. I always have to wake you up like this because it is the only way.

Antara - Mumma you always break my beautiful dreams. You know I finally reached my suhaag raat in my dream until you ruined it.

Mrs. Kaul (pulling her ears) - Antara stop dreaming about Raghunath Naik. He is a bollywood hero and we are from a middle class family. There is no comparison between you and him. Plus you will never be able to meet him in this lifetime because after your Post graduation is completed your Papa and I are getting you married. Remember that.

Antara (getting annoyed) - I know that mumma. And you have told me this almost around 100 times now.

Mrs. Kaul - Now get up and get ready for college.

Saying this Mrs. Kaul left Antara alone. Antara took the pillow in her hand and embraced it and thought, "Whatever you say Mumma, I know, one day my dream will come true and my dream hero will become my real life hero."

Thinking this a smile made a way on her face...

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Coming ahead -

Charater sketch

Edited by pkarvi - 11 years ago

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Character Sketch -

Ashok Kaul - Head of Kaul family. He is the doctor at DM Hospitals and is a family oriented person. He loves his wife but moreover loves his princess daughter.

Geeta Kaul - Wife of Ashok Kaul and a homemaker. She is a strict yet loving mother and loves Ashok and Antara a lot.

Antara Kaul - The one and only daughter of Ashok and Geeta. She is a bubbly, charming yet an intelligent girl and star of her father's eyes. She is doing her Post Graduate degree in Mass Media from NM College Mumbai and her best friends are Salveen (Dolly) and Machmach. Her dream is to marry the love of her life Raghunath Naik, India's well-known actors.

Dayamai - Dayamai is the owner of DM Hospitals where Ashok(Dr.) Kaul works. She likes Dr. Kaul's family a lot. She is a motherly figure to Raghu. After Raghu's mother's death she was the one who took care of Raghu but due to some circumstances Raghu doesnt stay with her and also doesnt even talk to her

Raghunath Naik - Like a son to Dayamai and a bollywood superstar. Becoming a Bollywood star was his personal choice, but he had to sacrifice his relationship with Dayamai for this lifestyle. Life between him and Dayamai became sour due to which he stays apart from him and barely makes contact with him. He misses his mom and lacks true love in his life. He believes that love he receives from everyone is because of his wealth, and because of that he wants someone to love him for him and not his money.

Salveen(Dolly) - Best friend of Antara and also becomes her guide at sometimes

Machmach - Friend of Antara but in his heart he loves her. His this feeling is known by Dolly but not by Antara.

Rasika - Famous heroine of bollywood and a total fame freak girl. She thinks just about name, fame and money and she always flirts with Raghu and wishes to get married to him because this will just increase her reputation in society.

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Posted: 12 years ago

my darling ,beautiful ladies Parin ,Chandni🤗

Awww loving it totally <3 ❤️

Goshh Room wala scene I could imagine this scene 😉
eyyy why always mummy break such lovly dreams like this or wobe perfect important moment pe :P😆
aww she trust her self one day her dream man come fond of him Aww😳
such a lovly & sweet update can't wait for hero entry 😳 update fast babes <3 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago

woww..parin and chandni..this was amazing!!!👍🏼☺️

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: 22pundirabhi
nice 😊

thanx nishu dear 😳

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Originally posted by: sonu-monu
my darling ,beautiful ladies Parin ,Chandni🤗

Awww loving it totally <3 ❤️

Goshh Room wala scene I could imagine this scene 😉
eyyy why always mummy break such lovly dreams like this or wobe perfect important moment pe :P😆
aww she trust her self one day her dream man come fond of him Aww😳
such a lovly & sweet update can't wait for hero entry 😳 update fast babes <3 😳

thanx a lot sonu for superlong comment 😉

And yeah mummy broke antara's dream 😆

Wil update soonish 😳