Say Something (Im giving up on you) - OS

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I don't know if anyone's done this before? I don't really read One Shots and I've just become active on I.F. But this is the first time I'm doing something like this. The idea of this popped up in my head this afternoon when this song started playing on my iPod. Listening to it was like hearing Shivani talking to Raghu. It has desperation, it has hurt break, it talks about letting go...But despite all of that it still has hope. So hence I decided to do a OS and Song collaboration (I'm nervous about it though )

For those of you who don't know this song I'm going to post the link down. I would really advise the people who know and don't know this song to listen to it before reading the OS. It will make the OS more understandable also it will build an atmosphere around the OS(plus it will hide any mistakes I;ve forgotten to fix). If there's a certain line, part or anything you've like than please let me know. Same goes for something you didn't like but explain it nicely please, be warned I get hurt really easily😆so lay it in nicely😳


Oh and most importantly this is my interpertion of the song...So this is what it means to me😊 Also its pretty short OS.

Say Something (I'm giving up on you).

Say something, I'm giving up on you, don't let me fall; catch me before my knee's hit the ground. Take your words back, this isn't you. Give us another chance; I'll do anything you want me to. I'll be the one; you can turn to and I would lay my life, if you want me to. I would withstand everything for you. Wherever life leads I will go with you; anywhere I would have followed you.

Say something, I'm giving up on you; we keep hurting each other with our words.

And I'm feeling so small, in your empty eyes. I can't hold on to you, you keep slipping through my fingers. You're drifting away; I don't know how to halt you. What must I do to make you stay? It was over my head, to think I could make you love me. I've tried so hard but I can't unfold your heart. I know nothing at all, of who I am; I've left behind who I was to be who you are.

I've made mistakes along the way and I will stumble and fall as I continue to grow closer to you. I know I take things too far, this is still new to me; I've never given my heart before. I don't know what the rules are or how to play them. I've just come to age and; I'm still learning to love. I'm just starting to crawl, still learning to spread my wings and reach your heart.


Say Something, we're breaking each other apart. My knees give way; I'm falling to the ground. All awhile you watch me from afar and I'm giving up on you. Don't catch me I need to wake up from this dream. .I'm sorry that I couldn't get to you. Your walls are too high I can't get them down; my heart can't touch you. I've held you for so long it's difficult to let you go; anywhere I would have followed you.

Say something I'm giving up on you; I can't remember who we are anymore.

Turn around, stop me from leaving and I will swallow my pride, I will forgo the hurt just to be with you. Walk to me, hold me in your arms and say; "you're the one that I love; I'll never let you go." Look at me not through me. You continue to drown me; I can't reach towards you anymore. And I'm saying good bye, I'm letting you go I'm setting you free because I love you too much.

Say something I'm giving up on you
and I'm sorry I couldn't get to you.
Anywhere I would have followed you.
Say something I'm giving up on you.


Say something I'm giving up on you...
Say something...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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That actually sums up shivani feeling and mind...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh woww thats mindblowing and sort of explains Shivani's feelings and heartbreak beautifully 😭👏👏

Shivani too desperately waited for whole night for Raghu to say something , but sighhh it never came and she finally gives up on him 😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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as it is.. am already traumatised with DDBEDS and now this..
you've got me all teary-eyed..
oh wow ! bitter sweet, brutally sad, emotional..
I absolutely love it.. thank you so much _SuMmEr_LoVe_
(keep doing whatever you're doing.. its great.. love all your posts)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyoti06

Oh woww thats mindblowing and sort of explains Shivani's feelings and heartbreak beautifully 😭👏👏Thank you😊

Shivani too desperately waited for whole night for Raghu to say something , but sighhh it never came and she finally gives up on him 😭😭 Lover's never give up, 😆 its cliche, but this is Shivani. we;re talking about😃 she;s one strong mamajama.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shym

as it is.. am already traumatised with DDBEDS and now this..ohhh shizz😲😆

you've got me all teary-eyed..sorry about that...I;ll write something happier next time more postive😊 But i really like angst 😆
oh wow ! bitter sweet, brutally sad, emotional..I didn;t want it to be brutally sad..so im sorry about that but i did want it to be emotional..so wow..thank you😊
I absolutely love it.. thank you so much _SuMmEr_LoVe_Thank you for reading.
(keep doing whatever you're doing.. its great.. love all your posts)🤗

Thank you so much😊 really appericate it 🤗🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh! WOW! beautiful...
shivani's all feelings regarding raghu ...so well put ...
u do have gift of writing ... do continue Dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome writing.loved it..
Waiting for more from you.you are a fabulous writer sharon...:*
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow 👏👏👏👏

Never heard this song before but what a beautiful song it is and the words that you have wrote are so perfect and descriptive of what exactly Shivani must be going through. 👍🏼

I listen to the song first like you requested and as I was listening I was thinking about Shivani it brought tears to my eyes the words have so much meaning, and then your OS putting Shivani's thoughts into the lyrics it made even more meaningful, fantastic👏

Amazing job you have a talent for this, please continue to do more. 😃⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful...👏

it sums up what shivani is feeling...


please continue...

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