Bedil Shergill? Really?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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"What's up, Mrs. Shergill?" He tapped on her shoulder whose hands were deep in her bag, seemingly looking for something in it. Startled with his sudden appearance that she wasn't expecting for he was supposed to be in a meeting and not in Shergill house, she messed the stuff in her bag and pulled its two ends together before turning towards him.


"Nothing... nothing at all. What are you doing here?" She quickly covered up her fumbling and gave a half smile to him.


"Was missing you," he said, inching towards her in the smoothest voice he could manage.


"Ha...haan?" Her eyebrows rose, visibly taken aback with what he said.


"Meeting got over soon. I wasn't feeling too well so I -"


"Why, what happened? Are you alright? Come, sit first." She pulled him and pressed her hands on his shoulders making him sit on the bed as she shot her questions at him. "Is it fever?" Even before he could let her know, her palm touched his forehead and he watched her heaving a sigh in relief. "You don't have fever."


"I knowww," he stretched the word as his sarcastic tone was back in action. "If only you allow me to speak, I can let you know. It's just a headache but since I am feeling uneasy, I think, it is migraine and my migraines are bad."


"Oh." That was all she could manage.


"It's nice."


"Huh?" She uttered, looking at him, clueless.


"It's nice to see you getting all worked up for me. It's nice to see the concern. I wasn't expecting it," he responded while lying on the bed. Though he had shut his eyes, he wished he hadn't for he missed seeing that expression on her face, blend of surprise and shock.


She furrowed her eyebrows at his words that certainly didn't seem to please her. What did he think? He thought she didn't care for him? "Not everyone is bedil like you, Mr. Shergill." She retorted, clearly upset knowing about her reflection in his mind.


"You really think I am bedil, Mrs. Shergill? Think about it." His eyes were still closed, when put forward a question for her, slipping his arm underneath his head.


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Since I am quite disappointed with Rakshit because of that Lavanya scene, I am trying to get back to the Rakshit I adore. 😆


Help Mrs. Shergill in remembering all the times her Mr. Shergill has been anything but bedil. Share the moment you think when our dearest Mr. Shergill were opposite of bedil. 


PS: Just another attempt in increasing forum activity and forum pages, perhaps. 🤗

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Saru... thumbnail
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice one

Dont know what happned to cvs trying to project rakshit like that.

He is trying ro avoid her ok we get it but cant he say that in tone which he uses often with his darling wifey. Stern..

No he is walking on egg shells with lavanya ..he told her he is not nterested but she didnt listen .. no self respect at all

Rakshit pls make her out of ur room and ur life once for all..

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome one

Lol Rakshit nd bedil

He is not bedil..he may talk wid stern voice but he really cares for everyone

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yipeeee another piece by you always such a pleasure to read💯 You know sometimes I come across fanfics which are so good just how I imagine the couple in my head beyond what’s going on in the narrative yours are one of those!! The couple always goes on in my head way beyond what they show !!television narratives can never do justice to the characters they create! Thanks for articulating Drishti and Rakshit for all of us who won’t be as good with our words as you !!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Seems like none of you really understood the purpose of this thread. I was not giving out any story to read guys. Didn't you read what I wrote in the end? You were supposed to share the scenes where you think our Bedil Shergill wasn't really bedil. I had really opened this for discussion so that forum activity increases. 😆

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Ah missed out last line ..

Cool will give sommany scenes where he behaved dilwala

Res

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovefk

Yipeeee another piece by you always such a pleasure to read💯 You know sometimes I come across fanfics which are so good just how I imagine the couple in my head beyond what’s going on in the narrative yours are one of those!! The couple always goes on in my head way beyond what they show !!television narratives can never do justice to the characters they create! Thanks for articulating Drishti and Rakshit for all of us who won’t be as good with our words as you !!!

How sweet! Thank you so much for letting me know that you read and enjoy my fics. Reading your comment, I think you are way better with words than me. Thank you. 🤗

Cheers

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Posted: 6 years ago
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totally missed the point of the thread🤣🤣🤣sorry for that😒

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This short piece was really cute one.

And about sharing those moments where rakshit wasn't bedil.. I like the way he cares for everyone and especially drishti's..like he keeps his guard on by putting up a rude guy image but he dies truly cares and this is seen whenever drishti is in any problem.

For instance--- 1)at time of jagrata, he was so concerned for drishti since she left abruptly after doing aarti with him..he was so anxious to find her and make sure that she was alright plus when he found her he was going same with his rude tone but as soon as he saw that she was injured his only thought was to take care of her injury

2) during the first rasoi rasam of all the three bahus rakshit was least bothered of presence of lavanya and divya and he went to drishti to tell her to order something from restaurant because he didn't want her to have any problem..he might have made an excuse at that time when drishti asked reason about the sudden concern but I think it was only an excuse what rakshit said and also when he saw her tears he was again all so concerned that what happened now to which she answered that it's because of the onions

There are actually a lot of moments to notice that rakshit isn't really a bedil and that it's only his nature to be so serious which gives him a bedil appearance

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Posted: 6 years ago
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1.How can we forget the scene before HOLI. Once Mr. Sergil realized that Mrs. sergil is hurt n bleeding , how lovingly he said please to her to come with him so that he can take care of her wound .. 😊

And that gentle lifting of her hand n keeping on his shoulder , the slow blow of cold air once he realized how much it hurts to her , and the apply of haldi and sincere apology that he had no idea of her wound else he would have never spoke to her like that..

This is one of best scene for me ..

2. The scene in the aeroplane, where Mr. sergil has asked Ms Sood if she's alright or not after the whole fiasco and asked her to sit with them.

3. After the cooking rituals , how lovingly Mr Sergil removed the atta from Mrs. Sergil's hair

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