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Posted: 17 years ago
arrey yaar tum likho na plzzz
Edited by nancy_009 - 17 years ago
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Now saab chale gaye hai....Locker Room mein sirf *Armidz - (AR)*, *Atunjie - (AA)* & *Mushooool - (MR)* hi hai....
AN: Atul chalo ghar chalte hain?
AT: Arre nahi...Ridhima ke saath hi chalte hai....
A: Abbe sidhe sidhe ghar jana....
Anjie starts laughing 😆 coz she knows ki jiju ko saab ko yahan se bhagana hai taki Riddhi ke saath thoda waqt bita sake....
AT: Abbe tujhe kya problem hai?
A: Jaa raha hai ki lat maar ke nikalu? 😆
AT: Jo ukhad na hai ukhad le tu...
A: Teri suhaag raat ko meri teri BAND baja dungaa......Dekh lena tu Champ....Aur hann (2 MR) tum log ko bhi jaana nahi hai kya?
R: Arman yeh saab kya kar rahe hoo? 🤢
M: Oyee kutte chal...
RH: Aeeee Billi phuttt...
A: Kabhi tym mile na to mere ghar per anaa kuch LOVE lessons doonga....Sirf kutte, billiyon karte reh jao ge...Pyaar, ishq, mahoobat kaab sikho ge?
Atul iz now scared kyunki woh soch ta hai Arman uski help nahi karega agar woh abhi yaha se nikala nahi toh....So Atunjie leaves 4rm there........& Mukaan ko bura lagta hai jo Arman ne usse kaha So woh bhi chali gayi...Rahool uske piche piche jaata hai......
Now Armidz r alonee....
Arman jaldi se locker bandh kar ke Riddz ke pass aata hai.....
A: Hummmm to tum jaa rahi hoo?
R: Isse tumhe kya?
A: (Makes her sit on d bench) Mein ne sirf mazak mein kahan tha tum mujhe janti nahi kya?
Ridhima doesn't say anything coz she knows ki woh natak kar raha tha...
R: Aab chalein?
A: Mein tumhare liye jo laya hoon woh nahi dekh na chahti kya?
R: Kya laye hoo?
A: Arman takes out "SINDOOR KI DAABI"
Ridhima luved his gift.....She hugs him...
R: I luv u Arman...
A: I luv u 2....(Kisses her forehead) Yeh saab ghar jaa kar karte hain...Pehle tum yahan aao.....They both go to changing room...
A: Hum yahi per pyaar kiya karte the na? Aab kaal se tum yahan nahi hogi? (VERY SAD)
R: (VERY SAD) Arman tum esse dil chota mat karo....
A: Idhar aao....Locker ke pass le jata hai...
A: Hum yahi ek dusre se ankhiyan milaya karte the na?
Arman usko fire escape ke pass lekar ja ta hai...
A: Yeh ek aur humari ladai aur mohhabbat ki nishani.....
Arman usko cafeteria le kar jata hai....
A: Yeh humare pyaar ki daastann...
Arman takes her 2 d path labb...
A: Yahan per humare rangin lamhe...
Arman usse saab jagah le kar jata hai,....Jahan jahan unhone saath lamhe bitaye thee...& finally they go on d terrace.....Arman Ridhima both start cryin....Dono kuch der mein ek dusre ko chup karwate hai....
Arman sits down on her keens.....
A: (Kisses her hands) I will miss u my luvvv.....Yeh saab jagah mein tumhare bina nahi jaa paungaa....
R: Dekho Arman essa mat karo...Plzzz? Mein toot rahi hoon Arman...
Arman yeh sunkar chup hoo jata haiii...& He doesn't wanna hurt her...Usko toote hue nahi dekh sakta...
Arman gets up & Ridhima hugs him....She throws her hands around his neck & gives a kiss on d lips.....
R: Saab kuch theek hoo jayega Arman....Mein jaldi wapis aaungii....Tumhare liyeee....
Arman also gives a kiss on her lipsss.....This 1 goes on for 10 minss.....
A: I knowww....
Woh dono ek dusre ki bahon mein pade rehte hai kuch tym ke liyee...Arman starts kising her hair, cheeks, ears & neckkk.....
R: Arman yahan nahi.....Humein koi dekh legaaa... 😳
A: Toh ghar chalte hai..... 😳
Arman remembers ki usne Ridhima ko itna ghumaya...Toh usse shayad bhook lagi hogi.....
A: Ridhima tumhe bhook lagi?
R: Nahi toh Arman...I m f9....
A: Chalo ghar chalke kuch khaa le na.....
Suddenly baby Ridhima ko kick karta hai.....
R: Ouchhhh!
A: Rihdimaa.....Kya hua? Baby ne kick kiya?
R: Hummm...Ahhhhh!
A: Ridhima tum samaj ti kyun nahi tumhe kuch khana chaiye chalo?
R: Arman mujhe yahan per thodi der reh ne do plzz? I can't walk......
A: Theek haii....
Arman uske kaan ridhima ke tummy per rakhta hai.....
A: Baby ko bhook lagi hogi shayadd....Ridhima mein ne tumhe kaal hi kaha tha ki tumhe takliff hoogi maat karo yeh saab?
R: ........Ahhhhh!
A: Itna dard kyun seh rahi hoo jaan buj karrr.....Mujhe pata hai tumhe subah se bahout musibaat ho rahi hai Ridhima....Lekin tum ne mujhe kuch bhi kahaa nahi....
R: .........sssss.....ahhhhhhh!
A: (Kisses her forehead & holds her hands tightly) Calm down Ridhimaa....saab kuch theek ho jayegaa....Yeh Karwa-Chaouth tumhe bahout bhaari pad rahi hai na?
R: Nahi......
A: Jooth mat bolo.....Baby ko bhook lagi hai Ridhimaa.....Aab kya karo gi?....Shaam ko 7 baje taak esse kaise rahogi....Aur phir chand late nikla toh?......Tod do yeh Karwa-Chouth......Meri baat manoooo....Plzzz?
R: Nahi Armann....Ahhhhhh!
A: Ridhima zidd maat karo....Tumhe kuch healthy khana chahiyee....PLZ kuch khalo...Mein abhi phone karke niche se kuch mangwata hoon....
Ridhima phone le leti hai...
R: Nahi Arman mein yeh Karwa-Chaouth nahi todungiii....Ouchhhhhh!
A: Ridhima abhi bahout saare ghante baak hai.....Plz try & Understand na?
R: Nahiii .....
Arman touches her tummyy.....& agains feels dat baby iz kickin her tummy so hardd.....

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This was my last part 4 2day or may b for this thread.....Aab ek din nahi likhoon toh plz 4give me....Aaj kitne saare part likhe maine ...

SRRY 4 d Mistakes

PLZZZ SUM 1 CONT. NOW.....Mujhe beth kar padhna hai aab? PALIJJJ?

Thnx
Tc
Amy

Edited by cute14us28amy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
yes plz!!!
oh my goodness amy!! ur parts were sensational!!! i just read all of them them!!! hats off to u girl!!! awesome!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol amy ur setting a record here 13 incredible parts in one day!!!!!! The
last one made me laugh with armaan scared ke sister lovely bachche ko
aur ridz ko hilake rakhegi 😆 😆 too funny n then atul giving her
that photo frame hum to chale the dost banke jaane kahan dil mil gaye
soooooo cute aww that almost made me cry hmm I wonder where he got
that line from... 😉 😃 brilliant amy luvd each and every part ur a
zabbardast writer lol I'm running out of words to praise u all

Almost 150 pages guys congrats!!! 👏

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Okay this one actually made me cry amy awwwww the way he was
taking her to all those places it just was so touching har jagah par pata
nahin kitni yaadein hain unkeliye so moving poor armi is gonna b there all
alone he'll miss her so much lekin yeh achcha kiya tumne ki shehnazbi ko
bhejrahi ho wahan par good idea! Alrite now that ur done I'm going to
sleep c u all tomorrow!
Luv Richa

Edited by desi_angel101 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: desi_angel101

lol amy ur setting a record here 12 incredible parts in one day!!!!!! The
last one made me laugh with armaan scared ke sister lovely bachche ko
aur ridz ko hilake rakhegi 😆 😆 too funny n then atul giving her
that photo frame hum to chale the dost banke jaane kahan dil mil gaye
soooooo cute aww that almost made me cry hmm I wonder where he got
that line from... 😉 😃 brilliant amy luvd each and every part ur a
zabbardast writer lol I'm running out of words to praise u all

Almost 150 pages guys congrats!!! 👏

Luv Richa

I know dat part was vry funny....Hur tym emotional aur Romatic part likh kar thak jaati hoonnn...THNX A LOT HUNNN.....🤗

PLZZZ SUM 1 CONT. NOW.....Mujhe beth kar padhna hai aab?

Edited by cute14us28amy - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Haan koi toh continue karo mujhe neend nahi aarahi hai! Aur bichari amy
ke haath dukh rahe honge yachna di suvrati anisa rukz koi hai
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: desi_angel101

Haan koi toh continue karo mujhe neend nahi aarahi hai! Aur bichari amy
ke haath dukh rahe honge yachna di suvrati anisa rukz koi hai

Arre yaar haath ki toh baat hi maat kar...Haat aab rahe hi nahi....Almost toot gyae haiii🤣 😆

Hannn ruks, yachu, sumit wadhwa, swansea, suvrati, yogita koi toh cont. karooooooooooo .....plzzz?

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swansea

amy ur continuing
omg thats gonna be a great part

Ohh reallie? Okie toh plz yeh saab parts padh kar batayi yeee...na? 13 parts likhe mein aaj? 5 aapke liyee......😳 kyunki i luved ur romatic & hot parts so dat's a lil gift for u hun......

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

wil be waitin eagerly 4 ur part amy
updte soon 😉 😃

Aab jab update kiya toh aap kahan hai.....13 parts likhe ek din meinnn 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
Amy..ye saara stamina kya bournvita se aaya hai.. 😆 U ought to go fot limca book.. 😆

All the parts were superbb...!!!!mazaa aa gaya..

chalo ab main likhti hun.. 😳

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Posted: 17 years ago
Previously:Riddhima in pain and Armaan asking her to eat something...

Now, next part..

Armaan:Riddhima...dard bahut zyaada hai..you are going to something to consume your tablets...main abhi le kar aa raha hun khaana...

Riddhima:aaaah...Ar...Arm..Armaan..tumhe meri kasam...mujhse vrat todne ko nahin kahoge.. 😭

Armaan:Riddhima...ye kya baccho jaisi zid laga rakhi hai..accha theek hai..main abhi Dr.Keerti se koi injection le kar aata hun..tum baitho..

Armaan returns with an injection after a few minutes and finds her sitting on her knees... 😕 with her head on the wall...

Armaan:Riddhi?...Riddhima?..dekho meri taraf..kya hua?..Riddhima?...

She places her head on his chest and clapses into his arms...

Armaan:Riddhima?...Riddhima?... 😭
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Guys am writing more...just give me 10 mins.. 😳
Edited by sumitwadhwa - 17 years ago

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