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Posted: 17 years ago

#21

hi qainat di, (i think u r elder than me as u r kehan di's frnd)

thanx for d pm...
i luved d part.....d little innocense...ng agree with ZGERL...dat it doesnt luk likes ur first attempt....
tooooooooooo gud.....
will definately luk forward for more...update soooon..

luv,
shivani

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asmita

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Posted: 17 years ago

#22

hey qainat....part three was too good....u did a lot of justice to it...plz do continue...n thnx for da pm n do pm me again da nxt tym...

thnx...
ASMITA 😊

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123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#23

hey luved it
really gd
lil bit short
bt enjoyed readin it
update soon x

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heezy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#24

Hey Qaintat,

I think your hiding something from us... this does so not look like your 1st attempt at writing, its really good 😆 😆 😆

It's so cute the way Armaan was so possesive over his box of Ridz's belongings and Kajal's bindas style is always great fun to read 😊

so Sameer and Ridz have started developing feelings fro Kajal and Armaan... and the story begins... 😉

Thank you so much for the pm, this part was great! I would have loved to read some of the antic the kids got up as kids in school, I'm sure Armaan and Kajal would have had a blast... This part was a little short, but it adds to the excitement of reading the next part!

👏 👏 👏

luv Lubna 😳

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Jia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#25

hey Qainat,
thanx for the pm dear.part three was awesome. 👏 armaan is cho cute to keep all ridz belongings in that bow and i love kajal's bindass style.
hmmmmmmmm so sameer and ridz hav already started developing feelings for armi and kajal huh 😳 . interesting. so the story now begins 😳 😆

plssssssssssssssssssss continue soon and do pm me wen u update.
Jia

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maha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#26

hey Qainat, fab part yaaar to gud hmmmm so sameer or riddima ko kuch kuch hota hai 😉 .....great part n thank for the pm 👏

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Zainab

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Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Hi Qainat di!
You write just like Kehan di 😆 😆 This part was aweeesomee! But so short 😆 Can't wait for more!!

Thanks for the PM.
Zainab

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Kanchan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#28

Hey, I have been reading this ff from the starting. Pls write long parts and continue fast.

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Posted: 17 years ago

#29

Hi Qainat di!
i really lyk dis part.........it waz gr8888!!!!
but i only hav 1 problem ..........da parts r 222222 short plzzzz rite more nxt tym.......oder den dat da part waz gr888888888888!!!! 👏
cant wait 4 more so plzzzzzzzz cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
plz................and thx 4 da pm......plz pm me again wen da nxt part iz posted

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